Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

lovely start
lived it...
arshi conversation was awesome...

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

You weave magic with your words and stories!!! Arnav and Khushi seem an integral part of our lives because you have kept them alive for us in their true sense! I can never get over them because of you and I love it! 😳👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Such a cute two chapters.

I loved reading them.

Khushi is absolutely crazy.

She really is Arnav's Khushi!

Hope he never lets go her hand.

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Meera

@sweetlife

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

nice.
congrats on your new story.
cant wait to read more.

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Congrats on the new story.

That was really something called...BEAUTIFUL!!!!

Loved it.

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Uh! love at first sight ha?😉

I was laughing while reading Khushi dialogues and Arnav's reaction to that... bichara! Got a girl and she was planning to go away? How dare she? And he took best way to stop her and keep her in his life forever.

Anjali and Mami ji were at there best...😆 Chotey is kind... shocking I know

Awesome Smita😃

By the way when is the next one coming??😳

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Fantastic start..it was hilarious! You my dear are way to talented!

Looking forward to this series...

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

WOW OMG! That was AWESOME!

Love at first for Arnav even though the roles are the same.

I loved Arnav's reactions to whatever Khushi said and did.

Do update soon!

P.S. Can you please PM me whenever you update?

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Tryst in the cards was just delicious. Loved it!! ASR simply melted. Oh the power of love!! Sweet one, Smita!! Charmed me to mush!! All smiley now and going back for a reread. Thank you.