Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome dear

love it

wowww

so cute and amazing moment

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dpriyad

@dpriyad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

that was sweet and quick of asr😛😃

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

nice start i should say!!

First OS itself is unique and awesome!!

Sweet and simple!!!

Written brilliantly!!

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome OS Smita! :)

Khushi is such a sanka devi. So much nautanki, but enough to melt ASR's heart.

It was love at first sight for them. Neither wanting to leave the other Arnav was quick here though. Just 10 mins and he was ready for marriage! Good going ASR! 😛

Loved it!

Thanks for the email Rashmi! :) x

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nihasan

@nihasan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Just loved it

Truly wonderful

N do we have a continuation of this???

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sarozz

@sarozz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful start...congrats on the new story..loved it

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow awesome os loved it.

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Uarnkhui

@Uarnkhui

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Nice os khushi is really talking funny.

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Very nice story Smita. Initially I was smiling at Arnav's irritation for loud music and gaudy cloths :-)

2nd Part was too good. Loved Arnav and Khushi's conversation. Her innocence was very nicely written. She said Arnav was Kind and Funny :-). Liked both parts very much. Continue soon.