KR FF :Saath Nibhana Sathiya NOTE PG 120 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kreya204

Fab update!!!
D marriage is done!!!
N all d rasams too!
Till nw its no problem!
Kriyansh r on good terms!
N kriya is one heck of an obidient gal so its nt gonna b a problem i guess!
Continue soon!!!
U r doing a fab job!!


thnk u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3


When sun rays hit kriya she open her eyes and found herself naked in her husband arms...she blushed hard while remembring the last night events...then she saw towards rey and found him sleeping peacefully while holding her...his arm on her bare waist...she hold his arm from her waist and place on the bed and try to get off from bed...but rey pulls her toward himself and her bare back touch his bare rock hard chest...

Rey :good morning...(whispers sweetly in her ears...)
Kriya :good morning...(whispers back sweetly and shyly)

Rey :kaha ja rhi thi...

Kriya :wo washroom...

Rey :aise...(she understand his meaning and blush ...Rey look at her flushed face and smiles...)...you look more beautiful when u blush...after listening his commment she blushed hard...and hid her face in his rock hard check...(he smiles with her act...)...oye hoye...
(he wrap the sheet around both and pick her in his arms and when he reach towards the washroom...she stand her on her feet...he opens the door for her and she enters the washroom and lock the door from inside...Rey smiles at his wife acts...he take some random...pyjamas and tshirt wears them and again drifted to sleep...
and inside the washroom...kriya saw herself in the mirror and blush she feel pain between her legs...but she belives this pain is very sweet...and she also tolerate this pain every night for her husband...then she take a warm and relaxing but quick bath...after the relaxing bath she realizes she forget to take her clothes from wardrobe...then she saw a red and pink bathrobe...red of for rey beacause its larger than pink...she wears pink bathrobe...step outside and found rey sleeping...while holding the pillow...she said "so cute" in her heat and open the wardrode...there are so many simple and heavy sarees...there are some chooridar as well...she take simple red sarre with golden border and again enters the washroom...she again came in room and rey is still sleeping...but his position is change...then she goes towards the dressing table and wears vermillion and smiles looking herself in mirror...then she hear knock on the door...she covered her full face and opened the door...Neha is standing in door with some thal in her hands which is covered with red cloth...

Neha :good morning bhabhi...

Kriya :good morning...(very swwetly...)

Neha :ye lijiye bhabhi ye maa ne aapke liye saree aur kuch gehne bheje hai...aur 12 bje mooh dikhayi ko rasam hai tyar rehna main aapko jab bulane aaungi jab niche aana...

Kriya :ok...(politely)

Neha :ka bhabhi ek aur baat bhaiya ka P.A aaya hai keh raha hai koi project k bare main discuss karna hai toh aap bhaiya ko utha dijiye aur unke P.A ko study main baithaya hai waha bhaiya ko bhej dena...ab jaiye jaldi se tyar hoiye 11:15 ho rhe hai bas aapke paass 45 minutes hai...

Kriya :ok...

Neha :ok bye bhabhi mujhe bhi bohot kaam hai...

Kriya :bye...

(she locked the door and uncoveered her face...and confused...she how to wake him up..?...she goes near him...and called him...)

Kriya :suniye...suniye...suniye...(she called him many time...but he's in deep slumber...then she touch his shoulder to wake him up...and when he touch...rey hand pulls her with full force that she fall on bed...and rey on top of her...they both lost themselves in the beautiful eyelock...and then rey careses her cheek and kriya close her eyes with the touch of his hand on her face his one touch is like heaven for her she found herself very lucky with his one touch...and then he tuck the hair behind her ear...which are on her face and disturb him to look at her full face properly...and they remain stay in the same posiyion for sometime...but their beautifil moment is desturbed by the alarm clock which shows 11:30...both saw the time...

Kriya :hey bhagwan main toh late hogyi sab kya sochenge mere bare main suniye hatiye mujhe tyar bhi hona hai abhi kahi rasme bachi hai aur haan aapka P.A aaya hai ki8si project k bare main discuss karna hai toh aap bhi jaldi tyar ho jaiye main aapke...(she stoped blabbering when his lips touch hers and they lost themself in passionate kiss...they broke the kiss after 1 and 1/2 minute when kriya feels out of breathe...)(rey is shocked and amazed at the same time with listening kriya's continuous blabbering...after some time before she some shy type girf...and now...she contnuously speaking...without giving a break to her self...so stop her from more speaking...he took her lips in passionate kiss)(when they broke the kiss they both are heavy breathing...and after some time their brethe become normal)

Kriya :kitna bolti ho tum kriya...
(kriya is embaresses with continuously blabbering...her cheeks become darker shade of red...first from the kiss and second with embaressement)

Kriya :hatiye na...mujhe tyar hona...(in very low tone)...(rey get up from the bed with a slight smile and go towards the washroom...while ntering the door...rey turn towards kriya...who changed the bed sheet...

Rey :kriya mere kapde nikaldo...(kriya smiles and nodded...)

when rey is in washroom...kriya change the bedsheet...and take out the rey's cloths from wardrobe...and then change herself in this...with matching jewellerely



[hmmm guyz I'm not going to tell u everytime...that what kriya wears in her hhand...so guyz here's the pic of kriya wedding chura...and she'll remove this chura with some rituls...after 1 month of pregnency...



no makeup just lip gloss and kohl in eyes...and sindoor in her mang...
kriya place the mangtikka on her head and then bathroom door click open and reycomes just in towel...around his waist...rey look towards the dressing table where kriya is standing both look towards each other through the mirror...rey is lost in kriya's beauty...rey comes near and stand beside kriya and his hand around her waist hold her protectively...he places his chin on her shoulder and whispers in her ear...

Rey :u look beautiful in red...(and kriya blushes...)(rey turns kriya and now both are face to face...)(they both are lost in each other eyes...rey's hand is still on her waist...and kriya's hand on his bare chest)(and their beautiful moment broke by the sudden knock...rey quickly wear his kurta and jeans...and kriya cover her face with saree pallu...actually the sequence work on pallu covers her face...kriya opens the door and found neha on the door who comes to call kriya...

Neha :hey Bhabhi aap par ye saree toh bohot pyari lag rhi hai...aur aur jyada sundar lagegi jab aap ye apne face se itna lamba ghunghat uthaoge...ohho...main bhi kaha baato main lag gyi...chaliye...terrace par aapka intezar ho rha hai...

Rey :nanu(neha's nick name...(actually guyz my friend's name is neha...and i call her nanu..and she calls me kinu..so i use this name here)terrace par...lekin rasam ki tyariyan toh niche hall main hui hai na...

Neha :ha bhaiya mooh dikhayi niche hall main hi hogi...lekin pehle tulsi pooja hogi...aur tulsi pooja toh terrace par hi hogi...(rey nodded...)...bhaiya aap bhi jaiye apni study main aapka P.A aaya hua hai...

Rey :ha abhi ja rha hoon...

(kriya and leave for terrace)
(on terrace...ananya...and some married ladies...and unmarried girls waiting for kriya...and when kriya came...with the instructions of ananya kriya complete the pooja...and they all go downstairs...)

(In the living area...Mooh dikhayi rasam started...all comes lift the veil and praises kriya's beauty...and polite behaviour...and keep gifts...in her lap and then neha takes the gift from her lap and place on the table...)(kriya touch the feet of elders...and greet youngers with sweet smile...)(In last Ananya and dadi comes...ananya lift her veil and places on her head...)(dadi comes...and gift gold kangans to kriya)

Savitri :bahu ye kangan...mujhe meri maa ne diye the aur kaha tha main apni beti ko uski shaddi par doon...lekin meri beti toh hui nhi...jab ananya bahu ne mere hath main pahlei baar rey ko diya tha jab maine soch liya tha...ye kangan...main apne rey ki bahu ko doongi...aur aaj ye waqt aa gya hai...(dadi wears kriya gold kangan...and kriya touch her feet...)...
(ananya come and keep a open jewelery box in kriya's lap...)



Ananya :bahu ye humara pushteni haar hai...meri dadi saas ne maaji ko diya maaji ne mujhe diya...aur ab ye main tumhe de rhi hoon...is haar par haq sirf ghar ki badi bahu ka hota hai...ise humesha sambhal kar rakna...(and then kriya touches ananya's feet and ananya blessed her)..sada suhagan raho...(afer the mooh dikhayi rsam finishes...snacks serves to the gyest...and they are start gossiping about their bahus, dresses , jewels ...but kriya's is still on her seat...and getting hungry...(savitri dadi is a strict women...but she also very caring...)
(she call neha)
Savitri :neha ja apni bhabhi ko leja aur khana parosde apni bhabhi k liye aur apne bhaiya ko bhi bula le usne bhi kuch nhi khaya hoga...(neha nodded...and takes kriya with her to dinning area...and goes upstairs to call rey from his study...)(when rey comes kriya and rey eat their food in silence byt they are glancing each other tym to tym and after finishing the food...rey leave for the study to finish his remaining work...

After lunch...and evening snacks...all guest leave for their homes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
sounds like a typical SBS type of serial FF
can't wait to see what happens next
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc updt
kr romance awsom
it look like a movie is showen
love ur writing style
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update... kriya ka 1st day in rey's house...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Devil_kriti

Thank you so much dear
M glad u liked d update that much😆

Actully i loved all ur works 😳 like pure love , & Tere sang nd all plz continue ur other works also
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kritzz firstly thank u so much
for the update boh bhi itni zaldi
dene ke liye 😊

This part was beautifully writen
Morng kiss in all ha
So sweet 😳
Awesomely discribed
Lovely part

waiting for next PM k bina hi
padliya bura mat manna
agar mana bhi toh idk 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...loved it...
Kriya's first day...It was really explained really well...
rey is so romantic..😳
the saree was beautiful...
love the nick name of neha..nanu..
love the trick rey use to shut kria's mouth..afterall she is such a baatcutter...
waiting for next update..
continue soon...
Edited by trishikarajput0 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
luvd it
update soon
pm me plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update...
Pure saas bahu type story lg rhi hai BT cute too...
KR Scenes and look look awesome...
Bs kriya kind study wall I bait sunkr kya reaction hinge ghrwalon k waiting to see...
Eagerly waiting to read next part

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