Arshi New ~ Best Laid Plans ~ (THREAD 1)

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#1011

Beautiful update,,i was basically reading d chappy nd thinking abt d whole scenario in my mind nd d way u have written abt arnav nd akash pointed d fact that they are not in good terms nd on d other hand anandloke trying to set khushi nd arnav together nd his thinkings abt arnav pointed dat arnav dp have some soft corner for khushi,,i was eagerly waiting for dis story to start up nd now while reading d first chappy I am pretty much curious abt d love story basing on dis mafia background..

Waiting for d next chappy nd superb update 👍🏼

Loved it ❤️

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nishkka

@nishkka

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1012

Very different from your other stories

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daneshzeest

@daneshzeest

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1013

Welcome back...

Jus read the update...

The plot seems damm interesting...

Waiting for the story to unveil...

Aaah how I missed ur writing...its so good to have u back

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1014

OMG...wowww...

such an a fantabulous start...

u are back with a bang...

now m eagerly waiting 4 the story to proceed...

continue soon...

thanks a lot 4 pm...

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1015

Hello Anamika,

This is the first time I'm reading your on-going story!! I have read your MKM 1 way after it was completed and I loved it. MKM 2 was in my reading list but I couldn't get to it unfortunately..

Anyways, I'm excited to read this exciting love story amidst Mafia back drop. After reading your note, I'm kinda scared but as long as Arnav or Khushi don't die a tragic death, it will be okay I guess..

This is my 3rd Mafia story, first one was a happy ending, second one Arnav dies and I cried buckets, so I'm hoping you won't make me cry with this one :)

Loved both Arnav & Akash's characterization.. I'm intrigued as to how the big boss (Lalaji) is tolerating Arnav especially if the hostility is so open and not under wraps. After all Akash is blood..there must be something holding Lalaji back..

Khushi is thoughtful and sensible woman; what was she studying in UCLA? is she planning to work here? I guess she can't just sit at home after all that education? I would be surprised if she is allowed with all the security concerns on Mumbai streets..

Looking forward to how the story unfolds..😊

PS: thank you Aashi (UV_Arshi) for recommending the story :)

PPS: I wasn't aware of your health condition, glad you are doing well now :)

Edited by kclovearshi - 10 years ago

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1016

Glad that u r ok now:))
I love underworld stories wid romance, godfather isnt my thing!
i loved all the characters in first chapter,specially Aman😆
Good that it wont b anything like Don:)
so let the roller costar ride begin!😎

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#1017

aaahan...

new one

nice

thank u for pm

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Peda

@Peda

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1018

Just read your note and again I am in two minds about reading this because while I understand and really respect that you have to include the "shades of grey" and character flaws which are essential to the soul of the story...but unfortunately for me at this point in my life I don't think I will be able to handle the negativity that is the underworld being a very recent victim of serious crime. However hopefully in the future I will come back to read this. When you do move this to a blog and if you do remember me and have that elusive five minutes to spare please pm or email me your blog link: razkad@gmail.com

Wishing you all the best with this.