Love me or Hate me,A Kriyansh Story(update on Thread 2) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Yes the update was short but interesting...
His mysterious girl...nice name..dekhte hi apna banaliya😆
Their mind talks were cute and so contrasting...
Would be interesting to see how Rey befriend his angry mysterious girl!
Next part mein interaction hona chahiye and plz thoda zyda liko *puppyface*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha

Wow awwsome update pia 😳
finaly Kriyansh meet awww
thank u

nd Rey liked kria nd she hate him
plz update soon waiting


thaank uu soo much for the lovely comment,yupp kriyansh finally meet😉 yupp rey and kriya are having totally opposite feelings😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

Yes the update was short but interesting...

His mysterious girl...nice name..dekhte hi apna banaliya😆
Their mind talks were cute and so contrasting...
Would be interesting to see how Rey befriend his angry mysterious girl!
Next part mein interaction hona chahiye and plz thoda zyda liko *puppyface*

yuupp,rey is alreadyy veryy curious to know about his mystery girl,yupp surely interaaction to ab hoga hi,awww tumhare puppy face k liyee i will surely try my 100% to give a long update😊😊😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ...Diamonds...

Res! Me first!
Unres.
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Sooli par chadhadegi... Epic line! I lived the update but Next waale Mein I want KR please?

Sahi kehte hai... Ladkon ko akal hi nai hoti... Bechaare ladkiyan phas gayi...

-Mahnaz [FrozenTeardrops]

Ps- we did talk once or twice... I guess you forgot.

heyy,veyry happy that u liked that linee😆 ya surely next update mein KR,nehi to i can imagne tum log mujhe sooli par chadha do gi😆 yupp bilkul thik ladke apne hi duniya mein hote hai!!😆 mahnaz,i am veryy bad at remembering names re😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
both the shiners and dazzlers do not like each other... and both the team have to be
seat in one class as per the order and attend to... and are give a dagger look to
each other interest... do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

both the shiners and dazzlers do not like each other... and both the team have to be
seat in one class as per the order and attend to... and are give a dagger look to
each other interest... do continue soon

thaankk uu for the lovely comment😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

PHASE THREE OF THEIR LIFE: (THE 1ST FIGHT)

It was recess time,Rey was wondering in his mind,that how will he get to know this mysterious girl,and achanak Vicky exclaimed --Rey yaar tu mera dost hai ya dushman,aj bhi tere waje se,mujhe ghar se jaldi nikalna pada aur maine thik se breakfast bhi nehi kiya!!! Vicky was continuously blabbering about how hungry he is...,but rey got stuck with one phrase only "dost hai ya dushman"!!!😃

Rey: vickyy!!!!! U solved my problem,is liye tu mera best buddy haii!!! Dost agar dushman ban jaye,to confusion hi confusion hota hai,par agar dushman hi dost ban jayee tooo...😉

Vicky: dost dushman baane,dushman dost tu kya bol raha hai!!😕

Rey: kuch nehi,tu jaake canteen se kuch order kar,mein abhi aaya😊

Here kriya was chatting with swayam (kriya was sitting on the side of the bench and swayam was on the inner side of the bench)

All of a sudden, rey tapka kriya ke bench par,and intentionally placed his one hand on the bench near kriya's hand and the other hand on the next bench,in a way blocking kriya,kriya looked up at him in a irritated way,and removed her hand,but rey was acting as if he haven't even noticed kriya...😛

Rey:arey swayam kaisa hain tu? Bohot dino se eksath khelein nehi basketball,aj ek match ho jaaye,u know wat mein soch raha tha ki... and before rey could complete his sentence,kriya interrupted them.

Kriya: excuse me,swayam mujhe kuch kaam hai mein abhi aati hu,and she stood up,but rey still haven't left her way,kriya's anger was increasing and she indicated him to leave her way WITH HER EYES!!! Rey smirked and left her way... Kriya walked away with full aggression and before going out of the classroom turned to give rey another angry look,and went out,rey was smiling to himself,...😛

Swayam: rey tu kya bol raha tha??

Rey: haan mein wo,mein wo bol raha tha,ki kya faltu ka jhagda palna,firse dost ban jaate hai kya bolta hai!!😊

Swayam: haan tu thik hi bol raha hai,hum ladkiya thodi hain ki jhagde ka date bhi likh ke rakhe diary mein,and the guys made peace with one another and became frnds once again!!!👏

Kriya was returning to classroom: she was walking round a corner and banged with someone,and that someone is none other than our very own Rey!!! Kriya lost her balance but rey caught her and straightened her par uska nazar kriya ke face se haata hi nehi!!! Kriya was getting embarrassed,but in order to mask her embarrsement,she put on her aggression mode!! She without saying anything,was walking away... When rey called her by giving her another name,and stood in front of her...😲

Rey: oi miss.attitude,nah hiii, nah hello, nah sorry, nah thank you,tumhe kya koi train pakadni hai kya,humesha kaha bhag jaati ho,subah bhi sirf ishara hi kiya,muh kholna achha nehi lagta kya..😆

Kriya: listen mr.watever na mere pass time hai na mujhe shauk hai tumhe hiii,hello,sorry,thank uu bolne k liye,so mind ur own business,and don't come in my way😡

Rey: kyun tumhari gaadi mein kya brake nehi hai isliye tumhare way mein na aayu,aur tum humesha aise mujhe dekh ke aisi Jhansi ki raani kyun ho jaati ho,tumhara kya mere sath pichle janam ka jhagda hai...😆

Kriya: pichle janam ka to pata nehi lekin is janam mein tum mere ratsein mein aane ki galti mar karna

Rey: are magar mein to ... kriya interrupted him

Kriya: haan tum hi ho jiske waje se ye sab ho raha hai,tum hi ho jiski wajese ye mess hua,tum hi ho jiski waje se princi ne ye stupid decision liya,tum hi ho jiski waje se meri zindagi ulat pulat ho gayi hai

Rey: are suno to... kriya again interrupted him

Kriya: no mr.reyansh u listen to me,stay out of my way,princi ke decision k liye mein tumhare sath classroom share kar rahi hu,lekin iska matlab ye nehi that we are friends bcoz we are not,and will never be,get that straight!! And kriya stormed away!!!

Rey: o teri,ye kya tha,cyclone ya typhoon!!! Mujhe kuch bolne ka mauka hi nehi diya,pakka iska naam to baatcutter hona chahie!!! Kitna attitude de rahi thi,kisi ne thk hi kaha hai ,khoobsurat ladki matlab baggage bhar ke guruur hota hai!!! But u don't know me miss.baatcutter,I will break ur so called arrogance,ur so called attitude!!! Tum mujhe apne rastein mein aane k liye maana kar rahi thi,ab dekhna tum jis rasta pe bhi jayogi mera handsme sa chehra tumhare swagat kar raha hogaa!!!😉

Rey also entered the classroom,sat beside Vicky and loudly he was talking to Vicky so that kriya can hear:... arey Vicky bohot din ho gaye hum logo ne eksath koi gaana nehi gaya,aur aj mujhe ek gaana bohot gaane ka maan kar raha hai,chal sath mein gaate hai... Vicky agreed and they started singing------ ankhon hi ankhon mein ishara ho gaya,,baithe baithe jeena ka sahara ho gaya!!! (rey was looking at kriya while singing) kriya was fuming,bcoz she understood,that rey is referring to the ishara she made earlier when she indicated with her eyes to rey to make way for her!!!

Swayam: kya hua kriya??

Kriya: swayam dekho na,ye rey...

Swayam: rey ne phir kya kiya,wo to gaana ga raha hai

Kriya: arghhh,kuch nehi,I just want this day to end!!!!

Rey in his mind: tumhara har din ab aise hi jayega miss.baatcutter... tum janti nehi tumne kisse panga liya hai,tumne kiska baat kata hai,ab dekhte hai tum apna ye gussa kaha rakhti ho,just wait and watch!!!!! reyansh singhania is on ur servicee😉 and rey smirks!!!


NOTE: Actually kriya is more frustrated with this new environment,and all her anger is directed towards Rey bcoz he is leaving no stone unturned to irritate her because she is like a mystery for him to solve!!!😆

This update is dedicated to rajeshwari (i hope u liked their interaction),sanchita (hope u like the update) and monika (kriyansh ka interaction ho gaya akhir) ...MD,is baar full on kriyansh diya,so ab tumhari baari longg comment dene ki😉😊😊 and ofcrse mahnaazz for being the 1st one to reserve👏👏

Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
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Unres...

U dedicated this update to me Thank you!

The update was amazing.😊

Kriya's ishara and later Rey's song was so cute...he so loves irritating her and I so love reading this!

Their fight was supercute and Rey's dialogues...cyclone ya typhoon🤣...and even the break wala.

So Rey al set to break Kriya's attitude...But Mr. Reyaansh wo bhi Kriya Ghai hai...tumhe zinda nahi chodegi...afterall JRLB jo hai😆

I'm loving this...plz update soon.
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
wow fantastic update.
really good.
loved the way rey irritates Kria.
will be waiting for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
It was supab
Rey thinking about kria
Why she was givingnher look
N then he purposely irritating kria
Love it
Kria to rey ki baat hi nai sun rahi thi
N poor rey kuch bolane ka mauka hi nai mila
N his each dialoge
o teri,ye kya tha,cyclone ya typhoon!!! Mujhe kuch bolne ka mauka hi nehi diya,pakka iska naam to baatcutter hona chahie!!! Kitna attitude de rahi thi,kisi ne thk hi kaha hai ,khoobsurat ladki matlab baggage bhar ke guruur hota hai!!! But u don't know me miss.baatcutter,I will break ur so called arrogance,ur so called attitude!!! Tum mujhe apne rastein mein aane k liye maana kar rahi thi,ab dekhna tum jis rasta pe bhi jayogi mera handsme sa chehra tumhare swagat kar raha hogaa!!!😉
He is on the way to solve his mysterious girl
That was so cool
N
tumhara har din ab aise hi jayega miss.baatcutter... tum janti nehi tumne kisse panga liya hai,tumne kiska baat kata hai,ab dekhte hai tum apna ye gussa kaha rakhti ho,just wait and watch!!!!! reyansh singhania is on ur servicee😉
That was really awsome
Love it

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