Love me or Hate me,A Kriyansh Story(update on Thread 2) - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
awesum update
loved it
especially jumma chumma de de vala part...
N
all the best...
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey
ur update was amazing
rey chumma song lol...
kriya open mouth
bf lol.,/...
superb amazing keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update...
dere singing together..n den rey singing dat song was awsumm..
n uske baad kria ke liye khanna bhi laya..
n d lst line ws superb..
plz update soon..
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabb part👏
lovedd itt very much😊
continue soonish😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...The competition 7mind blowing ...nd last part is also amazing rey kriya boyfriend. ...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Supab update

Kria and rey ka pov was really amazing...

Kriya (in her mind): universejee,kash maine thodi kam mirchi daali hoti,to predction thoda kaam karna padhta,wait wat am I thinking,mein agar kuch na bhi karti to ye mujhe pareshan karne ke liye koi chance nehi chodta aur ye competition to uske liye bumper offer hai!!!

Aww poor kria tension le leke pagal ho rahi he

Kuch bhi soche ja rahi he

And on other hand

Rey(in his mind): jitney predictions karna hain kar lo,miss baatcutter,dekhte hai tum mein kitni predict karne ki capability hai😆

Rey kria ki iss condition ka maza uth raha he

Thats not fare rey

Thrn coming to the sw n kria ka convo

As always love this bff jodi

Swayam: hey kriii,cummon,you are our star singer,aur tu ab bhi itni tension leti hai,waise tu har bar itna tension laati kaha se hai😊

Is line pe mera ye comment tha ki

Zarur kria ne tension ko kissi dabbe me rakha hoga

N jab bhi chahiye tab dabba khol leti he n jab nai chahiye tab dabba band kar deti he

Ya to fir market me jake kilo ke bhav me lati hogi

Kriya: chup kar swayam,u know na,ye tension meri har competition se pehle visit dene ko aa jati hai😳

Yaar kria fir apnenghar ka darwaja bandh rakhke bahar no enty ka board laga dena chahiye tha thaki unwanted guest visit na kar sake


Swayam: aur meri ye chocolate tere is uninvited guest ko dur bhej degi😃

Aww sw is so sweet

Kitna achese janta he kria ko...

Uska tension dur karne ke liye chocy laya...

N then our hero ki entry...

Rey: hi swayam,hi miss.tension kumari😉

Kriya: swayam,mere is guest ko bhejne ka bhi koi nuska hai

Are kria ye aisa guest he jo bahut jaldi tumhari life ka member banjayga

Jisse tum khud apne se dur nai karna chahogi😊

N then

Rey: oho,why fear when rey is here😉

Kriya: bcoz when rey is here,I have tears😳

Wah kya rhyme he

Abhi se ek dusre ke sath taal milane lage...

N rey ko bhi mananna padega apni baatcuter ka tension udan chuooo bhi kardiya n use pata bhi nai chala

N then that khane wala convo

Must dialoges the

Coming to the compition

It was amazing

Rey to fullon dil kholke gana ga raha tha

Kya rey ki awaaz achi he?

Rey ki zinda dili the way he makes everyone smile

mujhe bahut pasand aaya

Then when kria was going to talk with princi

N rey phirse use aake bolta he ki

Rey: don't miss me much😉

Awww

It was so cute

N then when rey come with 2 plates

Kriya: rey tumhe itni bhookh lagi hai k tum do do plate kha jayoge😲

Rey: well bhookh to mujhe itni lagi hai that 2plates mein bhi mera kuch nehi hoga,but neways 1 plate is for u😊

That was so sweet

Rey kria ke liye khana laya

Kitni care karta he kria ko leke

Kriya: for me?? Par mein to itna sab nehi kha payungi

Rey: are tum bhul rahi ho tumhare samne kaun khada hai,jo tum nehi kha payogi mujhe pass on kar dena,simple

Rey to aise bol raha he jese ki wo log pasing the parcel khel rahe he

N agar out hogaye to thodi si cheating karke dusre ko out karwa deja

Kriya: tum itne khaake apne aap ko maintain kaise karte ho??😲

Rey: ahaa,matlab tum manti ho that I have a good physique and he winked at her😉

Kriya: o god,kisi baat ko bara chada kar kaise bol sakte hain koi tumse sikhe!!!

Sahi kaha kria ne

Rey to har chhoti baat ko pakad leta he


Girl: waise kriya tumne bataya nehi tumhara boyfriend hai,u guys look great together😊

Ye ladki ne sahi kaha abut abhi ke liye nai future ke liye ye dialoge bilkul right he

Kriya choked on her food: BOYFRIEND?????

N it last kria itna shock na ho

Itna dashing bf he

Be happy...

N main thing

Rey ka naughty behaviour was really loved by me

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Posted: 11 years ago
sana thaank uu sooo much for suchh a sweeet and lovely comment 😊😊
Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update...

just loved it...

its a treat to read ur updates..

seriously I just love the wau you write..
fantastic...

fear
hear
tear..
that was too good.. 🤣

Amazing..

update soon.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Monika-

Wonderful update...

just loved it...

its a treat to read ur updates..

seriously I just love the wau you write..
fantastic...

fear
hear
tear..
that was too good.. 🤣

Amazing..

update soon.. :)

thaank uu soo much monica,for ur sweett comment,and for liking this rhymic words😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Supab update

Kria and rey ka pov was really amazing...

Kriya (in her mind): universejee,kash maine thodi kam mirchi daali hoti,to predction thoda kaam karna padhta,wait wat am I thinking,mein agar kuch na bhi karti to ye mujhe pareshan karne ke liye koi chance nehi chodta aur ye competition to uske liye bumper offer hai!!!

Aww poor kria tension le leke pagal ho rahi he

Kuch bhi soche ja rahi he

And on other hand

Rey(in his mind): jitney predictions karna hain kar lo,miss baatcutter,dekhte hai tum mein kitni predict karne ki capability hai😆

Rey kria ki iss condition ka maza uth raha he

Thats not fare rey

Thrn coming to the sw n kria ka convo

As always love this bff jodi

Swayam: hey kriii,cummon,you are our star singer,aur tu ab bhi itni tension leti hai,waise tu har bar itna tension laati kaha se hai😊

Is line pe mera ye comment tha ki

Zarur kria ne tension ko kissi dabbe me rakha hoga

N jab bhi chahiye tab dabba khol leti he n jab nai chahiye tab dabba band kar deti he

Ya to fir market me jake kilo ke bhav me lati hogi

Kriya: chup kar swayam,u know na,ye tension meri har competition se pehle visit dene ko aa jati hai😳

Yaar kria fir apnenghar ka darwaja bandh rakhke bahar no enty ka board laga dena chahiye tha thaki unwanted guest visit na kar sake


Swayam: aur meri ye chocolate tere is uninvited guest ko dur bhej degi😃

Aww sw is so sweet

Kitna achese janta he kria ko...

Uska tension dur karne ke liye chocy laya...

N then our hero ki entry...

Rey: hi swayam,hi miss.tension kumari😉

Kriya: swayam,mere is guest ko bhejne ka bhi koi nuska hai

Are kria ye aisa guest he jo bahut jaldi tumhari life ka member banjayga

Jisse tum khud apne se dur nai karna chahogi😊

N then

Rey: oho,why fear when rey is here😉

Kriya: bcoz when rey is here,I have tears😳

Wah kya rhyme he

Abhi se ek dusre ke sath taal milane lage...

N rey ko bhi mananna padega apni baatcuter ka tension udan chuooo bhi kardiya n use pata bhi nai chala

N then that khane wala convo

Must dialoges the

Coming to the compition

It was amazing

Rey to fullon dil kholke gana ga raha tha

Kya rey ki awaaz achi he?

Rey ki zinda dili the way he makes everyone smile

mujhe bahut pasand aaya

Then when kria was going to talk with princi

N rey phirse use aake bolta he ki

Rey: don't miss me much😉

Awww

It was so cute

N then when rey come with 2 plates

Kriya: rey tumhe itni bhookh lagi hai k tum do do plate kha jayoge😲

Rey: well bhookh to mujhe itni lagi hai that 2plates mein bhi mera kuch nehi hoga,but neways 1 plate is for u😊

That was so sweet

Rey kria ke liye khana laya

Kitni care karta he kria ko leke

Kriya: for me?? Par mein to itna sab nehi kha payungi

Rey: are tum bhul rahi ho tumhare samne kaun khada hai,jo tum nehi kha payogi mujhe pass on kar dena,simple

Rey to aise bol raha he jese ki wo log pasing the parcel khel rahe he

N agar out hogaye to thodi si cheating karke dusre ko out karwa deja

Kriya: tum itne khaake apne aap ko maintain kaise karte ho??😲

Rey: ahaa,matlab tum manti ho that I have a good physique and he winked at her😉

Kriya: o god,kisi baat ko bara chada kar kaise bol sakte hain koi tumse sikhe!!!

Sahi kaha kria ne

Rey to har chhoti baat ko pakad leta he


Girl: waise kriya tumne bataya nehi tumhara boyfriend hai,u guys look great together😊

Ye ladki ne sahi kaha abut abhi ke liye nai future ke liye ye dialoge bilkul right he

Kriya choked on her food: BOYFRIEND?????

N it last kria itna shock na ho

Itna dashing bf he

Be happy...

N main thing

Rey ka naughty behaviour was really loved by me

haan kriya tension le rahi hai,aur rey mazaa lut raha hai!!!😆 swayam and kriya the sweeett bffs!!! i just lovedd ur repliess to swwayam's dialogss!!!!!! haaan kriyaa,ka ye uninvited guest us ke dil mein permanently rehne aa raha hai😉 yaa rey cares for her baatcuttter,par wo khud bhi nehi janta !!!😃 yaa kriya itna dashing ladka hai,to bf maane mein harz hi kya hai!!!!!!!! hinaa i justt love it when u describe each part of this story and comment😃😃

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