Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55 - Page 34

Originally posted by: teenorchid

a different concept but tmne kafi ache se likha

even i was apprehensive k pata nhi sab ko pasnd aye ya nahi

par parh k mjhe bht acha laga

it was well written, emotionla b the

loved the kind of support armaan showed towards his wife.

loved baby pihuuu.

and u know ajkal paki dramas me infatuation attraction wale topic se mai waise hi bht tang hn. and jis age me preet thi usme infatuation hona is normal bus uspe kabu pa liya jaye touu

Originally posted by: sammy4u

awesome part dear

armaan taking care of shilpa was so sweet

preetika was good too...it was just what she heard from her friends that supported her infatuation

armaan handled her in a good way

waiting for next part to know what will shilpa say to her

Originally posted by: RiddhimaBasket

Well this was very OS from the ones you write. It was quite good but frankly it didn't touch me as all other OS of yours do. I found it more of Armaan and preetika story than of armaan and riddhima. But it was a practical one, perfectly depicting how a teenagers mind works and sometimes what they feel that they shouldnt and even though they dont want to feel, like preetika. And ofcourse the eternal love of AR was there.Loved armaan in this how he handles a patient riddhima who thinks herself as a burden and understands her and make her feel better.

Over all a good story but i couldnt connect to it like i do with rest of writings.

definately not your one of best write up but perfect wrte up..i love it and the way arman handle prreetika is the sing of true man:)\

very nice and amazing i loveee it ...!love your thoughts and love more to read them please keep witing such zra hatke os because it made me realize how diffrent aspects life through :)

awe this is so beautiful!!!!
you have written it so brilliantly the way you describe the depth of ar relationship is marvelous
the concept is totally different that never readed kind of uncommon
very nice concept really
loved how armaan is dere for ridhz all the time
poor ridhz has to suffer a lot

I loved how armaan handled ridhz all the time
he is the only one who van sooth her pain
this is commendable that beautifully you show the journey there feeling
I loved each n every single scene

preet her innocence nd her infatuation
I guess it's a stage in which every one think like that but still it's wrong
armaan anger nd reaction when he get the hint is justified nd he did right by sending her right away as if he don't do that it will take a wrong hint to her
nd his reaction clear preet everything
ridhz she bear so much pain
I loved how armaan make her smile always when she is upset or in pain he always lighten up her mood
their romance
I adore ar bond nd relationship
preet ki koi galti nah after reading it I m also attractive nd is falling for armsan more n more armaan h hi aisa.
I feel jealous of ridhz
baby pihu me zyada scene or participation nah that but it was cute
you know I loved ur stories concept all of them
they r totally different nd actually have a touch of reality or wat can I say your every story n concepts touches my heart as it's kind of a real life story though which I can connect with easily
every story of ur has different from each other with no similarty
you r excellent writter.
do write more stories

its superb brilliantly written concept loveee it
the way you describe some teenager thoughts having kind of infuation n the way armaan handle situation is reallyyy tooo goooddd <3
and above all this love the bonding chemistry AR share..level of maturity n understanding and pihu just stole whole attention wid cute antiques hahaha
waiting to read another version to see how riddhima will handle it

Wohooo...I m so happy

beautifully penned down

A different and very sensitive concepts.
Such things happen alot and i liked how you portrayed the reason for preet's feelings being her age.Young girls get infatuated when they see someone having exact qualities which they want in their prince charming and since the first example infront of them is someone related to them,mostly BIL's,they get infatuated by them.But its just a passing phase and if handled carefully it can save alot of damage.I liked how armaan managed it.I don't think he could hace done any better and i also know that ridhima won't hold any grudge against preet and will try to make her understand.
Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

hey dear...

I know, somewhere it is oddly different...

n yes, it was more of armaan preetika story as the message could have been conveyed by them...

I could have make riddhim that saali but then, I dont think ppl wouldn't have liked it a bit and it would have actually made me frustrated too...

still, thank u for liking it...

hugs