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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mastgudia93

luv tat
whr do u gt those ideas from yaar.
u knw hamare literature mein monomyth namki ek concept hai jisme kaha jata hai ki sirf ek hi myth hota hai aur myths r equivalent 2 stories n so theres just one story in the cosmos with different variations.
nw i should say tat evry writer out there is great coz agar ek hi story( i.e hero heroine n villain ) ke saat agar tum itne acche stories aur bana sakte ho to tum log kuch bhi kar sakte ho- "hats off to all the writers in the planet"

lov u
GUL

thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
loved it, nice plot update soon and pls do pm me abt the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: manalee

This is me after reading your PM,super duper excited.

Coming back to the plot and reasons why you should continue soon.

1}the plot is fresh.⭐️
2}it is a Sandhir😳 story
3}you have such a huge fan-following 😎 , hamare barein mein soch ke start writing
and,the most important reason...
4} YOU are writing it.😃

so continue soon dear waiting for your PMs.😃

PS: After a very bad day at office,your PM made my mood so light. thanks for it .🤗




thanks a lot dear... this pic is crazyyy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

So guys am up again with the part 1 of my new story I JUST WANNA SPEND MY LIFE WITH YOU... I know am hell late this time,... but am sorry m just stuck up with my C.S. EDP sessions... And trust me guys these sessions are very tiring...

Part -1

Wednesday 23rd july 2014...

Sanyu's pov...

I was laying in my bed... it was raining outside... I was trying very hard to sleep but it was far far away from my eyes... I was twisting in my bed just to get comfort but in vain... after all my friend or my best friend randhir was not okay... I was shocked to see him today... he was drunk... he was broken... he was crying... I still don't know how to handle him... how will he be fine??... he need to move on now... I tried to stop him today... but he didn't... I just hope he is fine... it is raining outside... I even asked parth to find him out... to be with him...

Just then I saw time... it was 1:00 am... But I still have no information of both parth and randhir... now am trying parth too but he is also unavailable... a tear rolled out of my eyes...

"randhir where are u ??"

Just then my phone rang... it flashed parth's no. ... with no time I picked up his call...

Me: hello parth.. randhir milaa... ?? is he fine?? And where was he?? (I created a chain of questions)

Parth: sanyu... Wait... Let me speak...

Me: oh m sorry... jaldi bolo...

Parth: listen sanyukta... come to city hospital now...

Me: (my heartbeat was at its highest speed) kya hospital... randhir theek to h naa... Parth m really scared...

Parth: dekho... randhir has met with an accident... U come fast here...

With no time I lost my grip over the phone and it fell on the bed... I was froze... For me my world stopped... My world was shattered,,,, my eyes became moist... I was shivering... But I cant lose myself like this,,, I have to hold myself back... I came off the bed quickly... I took my car keys... I ran outside my house in my pajamas... I ran to my car... it was still raining... I became half wet... but I didn't care... I didn't care at all... I just want to see him now... I sat inside the car and drove my car to city hospital as fast as I can... I reached to hospital in just 15 minutes... which is generally impossible for me to travel this distance in just 15 mins... I wud be taking atleast half an hour... but who cares now... I parked my car outside the hospital and ran inside... I called parth...

Parth: hello sanyukta... where are u??

Me: hello parth... m here in hospital... Kaha ana h??

Parth: u come on 4th floor... me tumhe lift k pass milungaa...

Me: m just coming...

I hung up his phone and ran towards lift... I entered the lift... All those memories of last night was flashing infront of my eyes...

Flashback...

22nd july 2014... (last night)

It was 9:00 pm. I was in the kitchen cooking for myself... But at the same time I was worried for randhir... Becoz he was not having a good time with his live in girl friend Vidhushi... they both were finding it difficult to stay with eachother... randhir I know loves her the most... I had always seen in his eyes... he could do anything in the world to please her... to make her happy... Although he has became her puppy now coz he does whatever she asks him to do... I have myself seen this... still she is unhappy... According to me her demands were increasing day by day... But I have never told this thing to randhir... I know he would never understand... Instead he wud break all the ties with me too... and I can lose my best friend...

I was lost in my thoughts... just then I heard my door bell ringing,,,, I stopped all my work... And I ran to the door... I opened the door... and I was shocked to see randhir standing in front of my eyes... his condition was pathetic... he was all wet coz it was raining outside... he was drunk... his eyes were wet and red... He was completely broken...

I gulped...

Me: randhir... Ye kya halat bana rakhi h...

Randhir didn't say anything and he just pushed my right shoulder with his left hand and entered in... I quickly shut the door,,, and turned towards randhir... I cud see he cudnt walk properly... He somehow reached the couch and sat down...

Me: randhir kya hua... ?? u are drunk...

Randhir: chalii gayii( he spoke in his broken voice)

A tear escaped from his eyes... although his face was already wet... but I cud differentiate between water and tear...

Me: kon chali gyi...

Randhir: vo chali gayi muje chod ke... sanyu vidhushi chali gayi... (he broke down.. he started crying)

I was shocked... How can she leave him... also I was shocked to see his state..

I ran to him... and sat on my toes and cupped his face...

Me: randhir... Kya hua... tell me... stop crying ...

Randhir: (he looked at me) yarr usse itna rokaa... but vo mani hi ni... Kya kuch ni kiya yar mene uske liye... fir be chod k chali gayi muje... Me kese jiyungaa yar... me mar jaunga... (he started crying bitterly)

Me: ni randhir... vo kahi ni jayegi... Me bat karungi na usse... plz first u stop crying... don't say like this... (I hugged him tightly)

Randhir: vo ni ayegi... Kabhi ni ayegi... Vo u.s chali gayi...

Me: (breaking the hug) what?? U.s ... Ese kesse...

Randhir: yar usse vaha pe nayi job mil gayi... she left me for her stupid job... Yar kya kuch ni kiya... uske liye naya ghar kharida,,,, I thought that we will live there together... me to akela hogyaa...

Me: ni randhir/... Me hoon naa... me to yahi hu...

Randhir: (screamed) muje koi or ni chahiyee... I just want her... Only her...

He got up... and pushed me aside... I ran after him...

Me: randhir where are u going...?? (I caught his arm)

Randhir: (jerking my hand away) just stay away... Let me go...

Me: no way randhir... I cant leave u alone...

But I had to lose in front of his stubbornness... Soon he disappeared of my vision... I immediately called parth... and asked him to find out randhir and be with him...

Flashback ends...

I reached 4th floor... I forund parth standing just out side the lift... I ran to him...

Me: (my eyes were brimming with tears) parth randhir ko kya hua... is he fine... and I told u to be with him... so ye sab...

Parth: sanyukta calm down... muje randhir ni mila tha... I got a call from police station that they have found a car smashed in a tree... a man was sitting inside it was badly injured... they found my no. from his mobile.. so they called me... with no time I came here... (he just stopped)

Me: to... usse jada lagi h kyaa...

Parth: haa... actually uska hath fractured h and uske sar me bhot jada chot h... and he is inside operation theatre...

I was froze... I could only whispered " operation theatre"

Parth: yes sanyu... uska bhot blood lose hua h... and uski halat bhot critical h... doctors have just taken him inside...

I didn't know wat to say... I was completely shaken up... Just then a nurse came upto us...

Nurse(looking at parth) : sir can u plz call patient's immediate relative... actually hume ye form sign karana h...

Parth: form??

Nurse: yes sir... this is surgery consent form... also agar patient ko kuch be hojata h to we are not responsible...

My heartbeat rose...

Parth: m his friend but she is his wife... (they both looked at me)

Nurse gave me the form, asked us to fill it within 5 mins and left...

Parth: where are u left sanyukta.. fill it...

Me: me kese... (I was breathing heavily)

Paarth: why not... you are his wife... You have this right...

I just nodded and filled the form with shaky hands... Soon the nurse came and collected the form... And went away... parth and I were waiting outside the operation theatre... doctors told us that the surgery wud take atleast 2 hours...

Precap: randhir's and sanyu's first meet after the accident and everything has changed between them...

So guys this is it,... I hope u all liked it,,,, plz plz plz leave ur feedbacks below... and ppl who res there comments plz unres them soon...


Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
resss
mujhe yeh unress krna hai but w/o update how can i
sammy ne ress kr rakha hai but kab unress hai when to know?
moi getting excited to know what is in part 1
can u update fast-um fast puhleez done🤣
Ress hai mera abhi bhi
Unress krdungi update toh doh kabhi bhi🤣
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
ARY BANDAR FIRST,... KYA BAT 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

ARY BANDAR FIRST,... KYA BAT 🤣 🤣

aaj mera din hi accha hai
school mein one week holiday announce hua phle aur abhi moi first🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz

aaj mera din hi accha hai

school mein one week holiday announce hua phle aur abhi moi first🤣 🤣 🤣

CONGOZ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
thank u🤣
and same to u too JU&M finish ho gya..🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
AWESOME🤗a new superb story star hone wali hain aj se😊 😊😊
waiting for I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You eagerly
aur mujhe PM krna mat vulna😉
love
Sudeshna

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