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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1


I didn't see the prank and accident coming... but woah! WHAT A PLOT! LOVING IT YAAR! NEXXXTTT CHAPTERRR!



thanks darling...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1


shush. you're amazing. you made me tear up. THIS PART WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. I saw it all play in my head...love you jaaneman



thanks darling...love u too...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

I have read all the parts and I can't just express how amazing it was... you made me surprised and steered away from my predictions. which is an amazing quality...

I am sorry that I haven't been keeping up with this. I feel awful. You are always supporting me when I write... you've always commented.. please forgive your choti di.
Awww no no... if you again say sorry na sacchi mein tumse baat nahi karungi.. ye pakka hai... yaar u write in such a good way how can I miss it?????

I Iove ya... and miss ya! A LOT!

You need to update soon... I am loving this. and I love the title... Love Beyond Limits... I know you were thinking of True love... but personally I like this title better! 😃

Anywaysss I am super excited for the next part! can't wait! love ya

AND REMEMBER! I WILL NOT REVIEW IF YOU SAY THAT YOU WRITE POORLY OR YOUR WORK IS CRAP.. .lol! I will be katti with you...

hahaha, you know me too well. I can't ever stay mad at you for long... I love you too much to do that. hehe. byeee! I am sorry. It's like I am spamming this! ahhh! byebye love you jaaneman!



thanks darling...pakka ab mein ise crap nahi kahungi... am so so happy... with ur comments... seriously u have made me feel like not bad Mickey u can also write😉😉😉
heheh yup first thought of keeping true love but felt love is already true den again why.. so kept this... hope this opts my story... in the coming parts...

love u so much & once again thanks from my bottom of the heart... u know am really touched with ur love... bacchiii ummah🤗
love u a lottt

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello all... thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for your lovely responses... this really makes me very happy and motivates me a lot to write... here goes the chapter 7..

Chapter 7:

Now Randhir was totally in tears and moved from there. he went near the river . keep on muttering himself.. how can I... why did I ... he just shouted why have I behaved like that... fell on his knees and crying.. remembering how he had behaved with her in Canteen & talked about her parents.. . no one knows better than me if our loved ones leaves us... my parents didn't care me much still I feel missing them but she lost her parents infront of her eyes.. everything happened suddenly but how did she faced all these??? that's why even she was smiling am able to see the pain in her eyes... why didn't I thought of that & humiliated infront of whole college... how could I be this heartless... he thought of running to Sanyu, hug her tightly and apologize... but stopped. not by his ego.

Randhir POV:

Randhir control yourself... you know her very well, if she comes to know that you knew everything she will feel bad she is also same types like you. she will take challenges not sympathy... she can't bare anyone showing sympathy that's why didn't reveal about her parents death. I respect you Sanyukta Agarwal.. I will always fights with you... will try my level best to irritate you so that you won't get time to think about rest but will make sure never let you feel alone... determined and left from there.

In the FITE camp girls room:

Sanyu is unable to sleep, she was worried about Adi's health. thought of going there & check but its already late so stayed. the whole incident rolled before her eyes from their first meeting... tears filled her eyes... she wiped them and slept.

Morning in CITE Camp room:

Adi & Ami both are surprised to see Sanyu there.. Ami wished her and went out so that they both can talk.

S: How are you feeling now.

he was able to see the concern & guilt in her voice... with the concern he felt all his pain gone but her guilt made him feel bad again. He understood she is feeling bad as he got hurt by saving her

Adi: please don't feel bad of my wound. I am happy atleast I got a chance to help you

Sanyu was surprised and looked up.

Adi: Pls I am telling the truth, I am very happy got a chance to help you. tears were uncontrollably falling. I know what happened is not right, but its my badluck mein bure insaan nahi hu. Sanyukta. doesn't want to do any such intentionally. you know guilt is killing me inside, dunno how many days I didn't come out of my room, I didn't want to come infront of you and give the pain more... you know if I would get a chance I will def wish to undo my mistake and give you all the happiness which you deserve.

Sanyu able to see the truth in his words & eyes... she understood he is dying with guilt. she already know all this happened by fate, he didn't do anything intentionally. Now feeling bad to see him in such condition as how much she has gone thru he also going thru the same guilt all these time...

Adi: Please remember one thing.. if you ever ever have any problem just gimme a call, will do anything for you, and make sure not to come infornt of you again, saying this he about to leave.

S: Aditya, first time she called him by name. Adi turned.

she forwarded her hand with a smile saying Friends?

by seeing her smiling and asking for friendship Adi felt like all the weight from his heart he is having has been removed. doesn't have any words...holded her hand tightly and nodded.

Adi: you have forgiven me, sacchi will you be my friend? he asked like a small kid.

Sanyu smiled and nodded yes. will definitely reach you & irritate you... with all my buk buk.. she said just to make him cheer...

Adi: hearing this got a smile, no Sanyukta, you can never irritate me,

S: Aditya, promise me one thing, you will never think about that incident again and feel you as the guilt, may be its my fate, just forget everything and lets start fresh.. Adi, got tears thinking how much bold this girl can be, how much matured & strong enough should be to forgive and forwarded her hand for friendship.

He holded her hand and said himself" Sir & Ma'am I promise you, will never ever let your daughter go through any problem, I will always be there as her shadow, will always protect your angel from all and keeps her happy. I promise you"

S: Bye Aditya, take care and get well soon... We will be leaving in 30 min. pls take care of yourself, smiled and left from there.

she came out saw Ami and said bye. Ami too wished back and came running into the room.

He saw Adi smiling and understood everything sorted out. Adi came and hugged Ami tightly.

Adi: Ami, she has forgiven me and now we are friends, he was saying like a small kid who got his valuable thing back. Ami is also very happy as saw his old Adi back with the pure smile & happy on his face.

both gave sendoff to Sanyu. bus left, Adi realized he didn't asked Sanyu's phone number.

Adi: Oh no, I didn't even asked her mobile num. hmm how can I ask.. though she said we are friends, I am not that close. But I hope she will be safe, not thing should happen to her.. I pray someone should be there in college to take care & protect her all the time...

Ami just looked at him. he understood how much Adi was concerned & worried about her.

Ami: bhai, ab chale, we have to go to our home & should be back to college. Both left from there,

Back In FITE:

All the students reached college & got a warm welcome by students & professors.. Again normal routine started..

In the canteen, Kaustu & Sanyu enjoying the food and chitchatting... Kaustu noticed that there is some change in Sanyu, now she is smiling whole heartedly. rest other team members also came and joined.

Vi: God am tired... dat village competition and now this boring classes... I didn't have much time to take care of my body.. got dark circles, even tan also.. god... when this all will go.. all started laughing by her antics.

P: ha ha dats true... Vidushi or else if won't take care & do make up we can't recognize you later and winked at Sanyu. By this Sanyu bursted out laughing.

V: In rage.. ha ha haslo.. my mom will definitely feel bad if she seems me like this.. my mom is not like Sanyukta's parents who doesn't even care their children. This made Sanyu smile vanished, Kaustu noticed it and Randhir clenched his fists in anger..

K: Don't you have any other work? why always you are back of Sanyu? and who the hell are you to decide and comment about her personal life?

V: oh hello Miss defense... don't come in the middle.. I haven't seen her talking with her family anytime in the room, and about to say something but stopped as heard her name in scream.

R: Ms Vidhushi Kumar!!!

All shocked to see Randhir in such anger, he came near Vidushi and tried to control his anger. How dare you ha how dare you do this?

Vi: surprised.. Randhir what did I do & why r u shouting on me? he then realized and

R: You are the last one came out of the lab right? how dare you to spoil my machine? because of you its not working.. Now Vidushi is completely shocked.

Vi: Hey what nonsense are you talking, I haven't done any. mind your words..

R: Oh Vidushi don't act smart with me. get that? If you ever do such things or misbehaved with any of the dream team member... just remember that day will be definitely your worse day.. this made Vidushi scare enough...

Turned to Sanyu.

Oye Farzi, now come with me to Lab and assist me in the machine, so that we can repair it soon and submit to Vardhan sir. Sanyu followed him and rest others shocked. All were shocked as Randhir Singh Shekawat who always roams like I alone can do anything today called Sanyu his mortal enemy for assistance.

On the way to lab,

R: Sanyukta, just wait here for 10 min I will be back.

S: Ok then I will go to lab and check there meanwhile.

R: Oh miss I said stand here only, dunno if you go what else you will destroy. Sanyu was not in a mood to argue.

S: Ok I will stand here only ab kush, now come soon and finish your work. By this Randhir rushed from back side door and gone to Mech lab, he damaged the machine and came back.

R: ab chale.. Sanyu noticed the sweat on his forehead as like he ran so much...

S: Are you Ok?

R: From when have you started caring for me saying with a smirk.

Both entered the lab and started working on the machine. By seeing Sanyu totally engrossed in repairing the machine and forgot about the thing happened few min back, Randhir smiled. he noticed some strands on her forehead. she looks too beautiful while working seriously.

Randhir POV:

I know miss bimbo, if you start working on machines you will forgot even the world also...I know very well how to make my Sanyu happy. wait a sec.. what did I say?? Sanyu, no no My Sanyu, from when she became mine? what the hell am I thinking?? I am doing all this just for humanity nothing else.. dats it.. only humanity, not other feelings.. feelings and that to for Farzi?? from where did this came?? Randhir beta you should start doing meditation or else soon you will be sent to mental hospital.

He came out of his trance by Sanyu's voice.

S: where have you lost? help me in this, its too heavy for me to lift. Randhir nodded his head muttering concentrate Randhir concentrate and started helping Sanyu in work.. for some hours they both worked together and completed it.

R; Not bad Farzi, you can be a good assistant for me and smirked.

Sanyu just smiled and didn't replied. By seeing her smiling, Randhir tried hard not to smile and left from there saying ... don't smile much or else it will be confirmed you are totally pagaal.

Sanyu POV;

Dunno Randhir why you asked me assist as you alone can handle this. but thank you so much as you made me to concentrate again and distract from my thoughts. Thank you Randhir...

She went to room & noticed Vidushi sleeping.

K: Sanyu, you came? I am just waiting for you. you didn't even pick my phone.

S: Kaustu, relax. am fine. am in lab working with Randhir till now.

K: oh okay. first you go & fresh up, I brought food for you from canteen, as its already late & you will be feeling hungry.

Sanyu: hugged her, ok meri maa, I will come in 2 min..

Both had their dinner and slept.

In the morning... peon came and announced classes has got cancelled.

Sanyu & Kaustu decided to go for a walk in the campus... in their way, one person came from behind and shouted in kaustu's ears Bhowww!!!!!!!!!!!! both shouted in fear, Kaustu is literally shivering. seeing her condition person held is stomach and started laughing, he is none other than Ami.

Ami: OMG look at your faces... seriously... you are this much scared...

Sanyu recognized Ami & looked at Adi came there with smile.

Adi: I am so sorry, this stupid just always do such idiotic things... both girls burst out into laughter when saw Ami antics holding his ears saying Chorry in a puppy voice...

S: controlling her laugh, what you guys are doing here?

Adi: just came to tell hai.. we are passing by this way, so thought to meet you once.

Ami: Yes Sanyukta, he came here just to meet you, but I came here with a surprise..

S: Surprise??? wat surprise???

Ami: Arey... I said surprise na, just wait for some time... you will soon get it... even Adi got confused by Ami...


Please leave your valuable comments which motivates me a lot to write...

Love you all,
Mickey


Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
r
unres...
so randhir knew th truth and made her my sanyu...great
but took off the way route...knowing she will take his love as sympathy if he goes directly...
but this adi? i am worried fo rhim...wo kabak mein haddi anhi chahiye mujhe...😡
awesome update but Sandhir kam tha...😭
thoda sa romance to ho jaye????😉
Edited by reet21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
arey ab update ot dedo...
meri jaan nikal rhi hai pdne ke liye...

hurry up...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reet21

arey ab update ot dedo...

meri jaan nikal rhi hai pdne ke liye...

hurry up...



done... so sorry for the late...
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Posted: 11 years ago
am always free dear
aa gyi main...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amulbaby06



done... so sorry for the late...



& ha urs mistake... read first your update so stopped updating mine... & den continued mine. haven't commented on ur part.. just read it... will update the comment now... 😉😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear
what is that surprise dear eagerly waiting for it...

post nxt part soon na ...

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