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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Micky...
The best part is that Randhir heard everything...
Agli baar lamba update dena XD

xxx
Sana
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Posted: 11 years ago
no wrds dear just now i read all parts in go... amazing...

post nxt prt soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh u made me cry!!!!! plz update asap wanna see rd reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago
u r saying u r poor at writing emotional parts...hehe i mean seriously...just dont think dat bcz u r amazing...it feels pleasure reading ur ff...m waiting for nxt post asap😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jaaneman... I am suppperrr sorry! I have fallen behind so much! I have to give some short reviews... to catch up! and then Pakka promise I will go back to reviewing properly! I am sooo happy that you have done this SS... I am super proud!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

Jaaneman... I am suppperrr sorry! I have fallen behind so much! I have to give some short reviews... to catch up! and then Pakka promise I will go back to reviewing properly! I am sooo happy that you have done this SS... I am super proud!



Awww!!!!!!!!!!! sweetheart you are back... am missing u here... thank u so muchhh eagerly waiting for ur comments...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

oh mickey yr..rula diya na..😭

sanyu lost her parents because of adi's stupid game!!😡
but he too living in huge guilt
RD overhears their talks..will he do something?😛
will wait fr next update..hehe😆
thanks fr updating dear...n u r good in writing emotional scenes yr..😃
-suchi



Aww thanks dear... thank god.. I hope reached ur expectations... yaar, normally I will cry if I read any such, so dunno how to write... am very very happy... but pls pls dont cry with ~~~~Puppy face requesting ~~~~~~ 😉😉😉😉😉

Yup Adi is in super guilt... all heroes are tc of our darling Sanyu...
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Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sana07

Wonderful update Micky...

The best part is that Randhir heard everything...
Agli baar lamba update dena XD

xxx
Sana



thanks much dear... lamba ... hehehe mein chota post kab diya😉😉😉 my posts will always be long long
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Hello all,
Thank you all for ur encouragement for my previous OS & TS. Started writing a new one. Oye my darlings Anu, Krish thanks again 😊😊😊
Here the story starts...

AWH! YOU. I LOVE YOU JAANEMAN... I know I have already reviewed this... but I thought that I have not read this in so long... I should refresh myself!

Chapter 1:

FITE:

A new day, new morning... many students wish to join in such a prestigious college... seniors are busy with ragging juniors... Jiggy is really much worried about this ragging he is not even willing to go out of his room... but after seeing his roommate the great Randhir Singh Shekawat... he is lit bit relaxed as he understood no one dares to say anything to Randhir... days passed.. but still one girl is missing in the college all are wondered who is she and why till now she hasn't joined yet... Randhir was eagerly waiting for her as just because of her his close friend Karan unable to got the seat.
oye hoye... going back to beginning. It's refreshing me of the actual show yaar... 👏 I love ya for that.
He has tried to reach her many times just to convince her not to join in ME but no response from her. Later he came to know from office staff that she has called them and confirmed she will join the ME soon.
That is sooo Sanyu! Not backing down from dhamkis!

Karan: yaar Randhir I thought u will help me but never u just left me like this. & u know na this is my dream college & I wish to study here.

Randhir: Karan, dnt be upset I will try again and let us see if there will be any other chances.

Karan: Don't lie again. I know u can't do any& won't do any. I dunno u r such a selfish & think about urself.
What! RANDHIR IS SO SELFLESS... KARAN YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE SAID THAT!

Now Randhir is irritated with him as he is not even trying to understand they both had a fight.

Karan: Acchi dosti nibhani tujhe.. Good bye for ever don't even dare to call me again. saying this he left from there.

Randhir: Now in tears & anger ... Sanyukta Agarwal, because of u my best friend left me. I am just waiting for u to make ur life hell... Just wait & watch... I will see how u will survive in FITE..

That Karan was being super impractical... like seriously, RD has no hand in this... in fact, rather than blaming RD...tu thoda parh leta toh shayaad tujhe placement mil jaate...par... no. you rely on RD... ab bhukto! hehehe!

All are busy with their assignments... they are bored with other lectures but eagerly waits for only one Professor Vardhan. Most of the students are scared because of his strict behavior & surprising difficult tests...
VARDHAAANNN!! AHH!

Vardhan sir came & started the class.. Suddenly there is a voice near the door asking permission to come into the class.. All turned that side too see the person who has dat guts to come in the middle of the class.. there stood a girl in White & blue dress.. Randhir observed that girl.. he was amazed how can a girl be so cute in such simple attire... he himself was surprised for his thoughts & came out of his trance by Vardhan's voice.
Oye hoye... he admitted Sanyu is cute! 😉😉😉 I know. I get jealous of girls that can do simple attires and look gorgeous. I wish I could where indian clothes at my school... par afsos... I go to a school where there is hardly any indians... but if I had a choice... I'd wear indian clothes alll the time.

V: who are you & wat are u dng here.

Girl: Sir, I am Sanyukta Agarwal new joinee & sorry for the late. This caught Randhir's attention...

R to himself: so she is Sanyukta Agarwal... baby.. I am just waiting for u welcome to hell...

hahahahah! SANDHIR FIRST MEETING AHHH!

V: Oh.. go & take ur place. She came & sat with Kaustuki...

After the class Kaustu intro herself & also introduced Jiggy, Parth to her. all had some chat & went to the hostels.. Kaustu & Sanyu shared the same room.. soon they both became close friends.. Kaustu used to share all her secrets with Sanyu & vice versa..

PARTH went ahead and started at the same time! amazing! hahaha! Kaustu Jiggy and Parth... how sweet!

Next day on the way to classroom Sanyu hasn't noticed the water on the floor as she was too busy in checking the books & the other list given by Kaustu and slipped. But a strong pair of hands holds her by her waist. For a sec she was lost is those brown eyes... came out from trance by his taunts.

RANDHIR TO THE REEESSSCUUUEEE!

R: I know I am looking hot & u good for nothing girl no need to check out me like this.

hahaha! checking him out!

S: Hey U... dunno who r u but first learn how to talk with others...

R: Wow amazing u r saying me to learn.. first u don't even belongs to be in ME, & a late comer good joke.. seems like ur parents haven't taught anything...

wow... already fighting! danggg!

Sanyu was irritated with his talks & left from there..

R: this is just a trailer baby.. picture abhi bhi baaki hai... just wait & see how I will make ur life live hell. he also left from there with an evil smirk.

RANDHIR. YOU NEED TO LOVE HER. GO. LOVE HER. heheeh! jk. I don't like you heartbroken... I need my rank no.1 RD backk...

In the lab, PKC has paired all & Randhir deliberately made Sanyu as his partner so that he can irritate her more... Days were passing now Sanyu made friends with all except Randhir & Vidhushi... as one hates her the most & one is jealous of her to core. Sanyu & Randhir fights became like a never ending daily soap & all are used to their fights & enjoying them..

hahaha! I so ship RD and Vids friendship... they both can make each other feel better about themselves and actually relate with loneliness...

Sanyu was hell irritated with all these fights with Randhir as he doesn't even leave a single chance to taunt her or humiliate her and she will be keep on fighting for her respect. this became a never ending process for her.

gosh... fighting fighting fighting! ahhh

Months passed with the same routine classes, practical's & Vardhan sir's surprising tests. Randhir understood that Sanyu is not dat bad student & intelligent enough to compete with him. Sometimes he even impressed with her way of repairing machines but never expressed dat becoz of his ego.

his ego limits him sooo much yaar, ahhh! he needs to give in!

exams started and all were busy in the hectic schedule. In the early morning as usual Randhir went for a jog and have noticed a figure covered with shawl standing near in the garden just staring at the plants. he was surprised & thought who would be that & noticed she is none other than his mortal enemy. With a smirk he went from there to irritate her but after seeing her for a sec he just lost & mesmerized by the beauty standing before him. the early morning Sun rays are directly falling on her face & it seems the most innocent & cutest ever seen. He muttered lovely after seeing that & slapped himself for even thinking about Farzi like that.

awwwh! this is so sweet. Her in a shawl. looking at plants. RD thinking of her as innocent and cute...

R: with a smirk... Oye Farzi.. wat r u dng here ? scared for exams or thinking where to keep the chits??

Sanyu just looked at him with a blank expression & left from there without uttering anything.

uh oh... something has gone wrong!

Randhir was surprised as he never seen her that silent, worried after looking into her deep eyes & thought something might be wrong with her

Randhir POV:

Dude wat happened to u few min back u were praising her beauty & now u r worried about her silence... Oye just remember one thing she is good for nothing and dnt think much about her.

STEP 1. FALLING FOR THE TRAP OOO!

Afternoon in the canteen all are enjoying as they are done with their exams and will be gng to their home for Vacation.

oh, that's why Sanyu is upset. She has to go home... and she might not come back!

Parth: So guys wen r u starting. I will go home by tonight bus.

Jiggy : ha Parth bhai I will also leave in 2 hrs as I need to catch my train.

Kaustu: Sanyu, wen will u start to ur home? I will go in night train.

Sanyu: Nahi Kaustu I am not going home for the holidays as Vardhan sir asked me to stay in college & do some project works.

YAY! SHE ISN'T GOING HOME! wait... she has some projects... ooo. might be that RD is with her!

They all heard some noice from backside and turned.

Randhir: tch tch tch tch... Oye Farzi why r u lying? Vardhar sir will give work to such a Farzi engr like u... hahha good joke.. why don't u tell all dat u r very happy staying away from ur parents so that u can enjoy a lot with ur privacy with a wink.

no. no. no... wait. I am confused. Does she have work with Vardhan or... she wants to stay back?

Sanyu just looked at him with the same blank expression and left from there without saying anything. now he clearly noticed some pain in her eyes.

WAIT! DID HER PARENTS DISOWN HER. WHAT. THERE ARE SO MANY POSSIBILITIES!! AHHH!

Kaustu: Randhir, what's ur problem? why always u r back of her...why don't leave her alone.. dunno wat happened to her from morning she is very upset not talking much with any

there is something reallly wronggg!

Randhir to himself.. I knew it something is wrong with her...thinking about Sanyu Randhir left from there leaving confused Kaustu & all there.

In the room Sanyu silently stared outside from her window & turned around wen she felt one hand on her shoulder.

K: Sanyu, wat happened tell me I am der for u pls share it with me. I understood u will be missing ur parents & dats y u r very sad. den pls go & talk to Vardhan sir & ask him to give permission for few days so that u can go home & come back.

S: Nahi yaar Kaustu aise koi baat nahi & I am totally fine. My parents will also be happy as they also want their daughter to concentrate on her studies much more. I never feel alone as I know their wishes always be with me & can feel their presence around.. with a smile.

what! Her parents are supporting her? what even!?!?!

K: Wah Sanyu I know u r strong determined girl & hugged her & told to take care of herself. And also be careful with Randhir as he never leaves a chance to insult her because of her his best friend didn't get the seat in FITE also they both fought & he left him not talking back again.

S: Kaustu ye tu kya bol rahi hai pls poori baat batha do.

Then Kaustu told her the whole thing wat happened before she came to college. Karan matter & Dats y Randhir is purposely doing this as Karan is his best friend left him. Now Sanyu understood the reason behinds Randhir's behavior.

So sanyu didn't know before? ahhh! I get it now!

She gave sendoff to Kaustu & came to canteen to have something. Saw Randhir sitting & playing on his mobile.

S: Randhir,I just came to know about Karan's matter.

R: Oye Farzi listen, don't dare to talk again about Karan. Its none of ur business. Just stay away from this.

S: . For a min just be calm. I didn't come here to fight with you. I am here just to say you sorry as because of me U both fought & he left. I know how it feels wen our closed ones leaves us. Mein samaj sakti hu & I am really sorry for that. Tears were clearly visible in her eyes. Saying this she left from there leaving stunned Randhir behind.

WAIT! IT'S SORT OF CLICKED. Her parents ... she said that she can feel their presence... you don't usually say that... you usually saw that when they are dead... and now she is saying that she understands when people leave... and she is crying... you hinting something?!?!!? is her parents...uhm. dead?

Precap: Second year & dream team task.New character entry..

Guys pls share ur views. I know this is very long one & might be boring also but .. pls pls do comment as it helps me a lot in improving...

NEW CHARACTER?!?!!? WOOOAH!

Loads of love,

Mickey.



ON TO THE NEXT REVIEW! LOVE YOU

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