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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starshiny

twists and turns... wow... luving it...!!! 😛



Aww thanks darling... 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


will update soon... don't have much time to concentrate & write, busy with some stuff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello all,

Thank you for giving such lovely responses...

Friends it took a long time to write, am never used to think about such emotion ones... became very difficulty for me to write... If I wouldn't reach your expectations pls sorry, tried my level best... am very poor in writing emotional ones... I just want to dedicate this chapter to My Sweetheart Reet... darling this is for you.🤗.. I know this is emotional part but I worked hard on this so wanna dedicate this to you... Love u so much dear...U r always with me & supported a lot...

Chapter 6:

Ami: What?? ye tu kya bakwas bol raha hai?

Adi: Sach hai ye... I am the cause of her parents' death with tears and felt down.

Ami rushed to hold him and made sit on the bed. poora sach bol ab mujhe,

~~~~FB~~~~~~

On Delhi Highway...

Adi and his friends on their way to Adi's friend's farm house stopped as car breaks down.

Adi: Arey yaar ye car bhi na... ab kya their car stopped on the highway and there not even a mechanic shed nearby. So one of the person said he will take a lift and go to the nearby place and bring mechanic. All agreed with him and that guy left.

All the guys were in drunken state & having bottles in their hands. they noticed a girl struggling with her scooty.

Guy1: Oyehoye kya maal hai... just look at her.. looking so sexy.

All turned at her.

Guy2: ha bhai.. drinks bhi hai climate is also too good, & now girl is also here, shall we have fun saying winked. others have some evil smile on their faces.

Adi: guys enough. stop it. looks like she is not of that types.

Guy1: bhai why r u being spoil sport, won't do any extreme, just will have some fun and giggled.

Adi in stern voice: I said no.

Guy2: bhai tujhe kya hua??? why r u supporting a stranger... dat to a girl. kya love at first sight??? all laughed.

Adi gave a sharp look which made all silent and went near the girl.

Adi: Hi, do you need any help?

Girl looked up, saw Adi & his friends, and able to smell the alcohol smell & understood they are in drunken state.

Girl: No thanks, I can manage.

for a sec thought of teasing her.

Adi: I am able to see how much you are struggling. Its already becoming dark, you are standing alone on highway, and may be rain start in some time.

girl able to sense mischievous in his voice. didn't respond and continued her work.

Adi: Madam, are you are scared to see all of us here said with a smile.

Girl: As far I know, we should be scared if we see any cruel animals in jungle in an attitude.

Adi got a smile by her response he was impressed with her self confidence and left from there.

Girl: Bach gayi Sanyu tune. ab jaldi papa ko call karti hu. & dialed her dad said to pick on the way.

Guy1: kya hua bhai.. what she said, all were looking at her.

Adi: Nothing seems having some trouble with her scooty & her family is on the way to pick her, (he just lied) ab chalo lets play some game. He just wants to divert them from her topic.

Rest said ok, let us play Truth or dare.

Guy1: wat T&D? yaar dats a girly game, lets think something else..

Guy2: Oye it will be fun, lets play na. and rest all agreed. made them comfortable near roadside place, started game by spinning bottle.

Sanyu noticed this and felt relax.

All were enjoying the game & now its Adi's turn and he chooses dare. the opposite person asked him to run fast before the car coming now.

Adi: WT**** are you mad? road is already slippery & running before the car? are you mad, that's too danger. anything will happen.

OP: with an evil smile, why don't you accept that you are not strong enough to take such challenges darpok saale. this directly hit Adi's ego.

They both had a heat argument. rest others also opposed but due to Adi's stubbornness they agreed. Without knowing for such act he has to feel repent in future he started moving forward as he saw a car coming.

In a fraction of sec Adi ran before the car, the person driving noticed him on the road and took a sudden brake, due to slippery road, before anyone can understand what happened, the driving person is unable to control the car and hit the divider and became upside down in a horrible way. all were shocked to see what happened in a lit time and came out by hearing a scream Papa!!!!!!

Sanyu noticed the car and ran immediately and started crying seeing her parents in such condition.

One of the guy from Adi's gang called ambulance & immediately took them to hospital.

Adi stood there motionless. numb, dumbstruck. tears falling from his eyes.

In the hospital doctors took them to ICU. After sometime doctor came out.

Doctor: I am sorry. we are unable to save your mom and your dad is in critical condition.

Sanyu fell on her knees and cried her heartout. all had tears and didn't dare to come & console. as they are feeling guilt & shocked with the incident. Sanyu just sat on the floor and looking to the roof. she doesn't have any senses just sat silent. all were scared to see her in such way. She came out of her trance by nurse calling saying: patient got conscious and wish to talk something, she just rushed into ICU.

S: Papa!!! aap kaise ho? how r you feeling now? she said near him holded his hand

S Dad: just removed the oxygen mask and trying hard to talk.. Beta promise me you will never become weak. you will always be strong as your mom, by hearing her mom's name tears falling from her eyes. Sanyu dad noticed it and sighed to wipe them. My angel, I can't see you in tears, never cry for any. always be bold. your smile is my strength so if you won't smile, I will become weak, so always smile. takecare of yourself and be a very good Mechanical engr prove yourself & make me proud as you are my daughter.

S: Papa, pls why are you saying all this now. pls take rest, I won't let anything happen to you. Her father just smiled at her and said.

S Dad: Meri Pari, also promise me you won't do anything against the boy, it might be not his fault may be our fate. He knew very well about her as she will go to any extent and take any risk for their punishment. He knew how much stubborn she is and don't want to get her into any trouble.

S: Papa, I can't. Pls aap kuch mat boliye. Have some rest.

S dad: forwarded his hand asking her to promise, she doesn't have any other & promised him that she won't do anything. Her father smiled and held her hand tightly.

S: papa, but there is no response from him, again called Papa, aap kuch bol kyunai ho? pls papa talk something, its scaring me, pls papa. she immediately shouted doctor.. the doctor came & checked.

D: I am sorry, he is no more.

Sanyu just stood there lifeless. within few hours everything happened. her life totally changed, In the morning only they planned to go for a vacation before she joined college, now everything gone. she became alone. tears falling uncontrollable. She felt a hand on her shoulder, turned & saw Adi. Seeing him there her anger reaches its peak.

S: Don't dare to utter a single word. I have promised my dad that I won't do anything to you. that's why you are safe Just get out from here or else dunno what I will do... because of you I lost my parents. because of your stupid game now lost everything. I am just warning you never ever dare to come infront of me again. I don't want to see your face again. Just get out from her... she just screamed...

Adi left from there in tears.

~~~~~~~~FB ends~~~~~~~~~

Ami & Adi both are in tears now.

Adi: you know Ami, in how much pain I saw her... I have enquired about her and came to know that she is the only daughter and they are very closed family with all love. because of me she lost her parents. because of my bloody ego all this happened...

Ami: wiped his tears. Adi control yourself. I am sorry dunno all such happened.

Adi: you know when I saw here I thought of leaving from here and packed my luggage as I don't want give her more pain by showing my face but she stopped me and said I don't want to mix personal life with competition, you are here to represent your college. so do your job.

that's why I am here and doing or else I would left long back. you know when ever I saw her smiling It makes my day. I just wanna see her happy nothing else. will do anything to make smile. but what to do bhai & started crying. Ami came and hugged him tightly and soothed him saying everything will be fine.

They both didn't notice a person standing near the door and heard the whole convo and now in tears. its Randhir.

Chappals & tomatoes are welcome... I know am poor in writing emotional parts... pls bare me & leave ur wonderful comments as they motivates me a lot...


Loads of Love,

Mickey


Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
r

unres...
you now what girl
you made me cry...
this was awesome.
i was imagining as if everything was happening in front of my eyes...
it was just too much.
i too don't want sanyukta to cry anymore...i just want randhir to sooth her and be with her forever...

thanks a lot for writing so beautifully..
and thanks for dedicating this chapter to me./
love you a lot...😛

Edited by reet21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
🥳🥳🥳
🥳🥳🥳
me first again...
mja aa gya...
update soon
wiating
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reet21

🥳🥳🥳

🥳🥳🥳
me first again...
mja aa gya...
update soon
wiating



thank u so much darling... Congo... 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful post Mickey... Update soon !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
I like how you cleared the mystery of sanyu parents death
and rd has now found out
can't wait to see what affects it has on him and how he will react
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow rd overheard their convo... now I think he will develop a soft corner for her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfull work mickey...
read four parts in one go...
such amazing updates yaar...
love it..alots...
sandhir work together then won competetion...yippee...
like their changing ...both r supporting each other...
aadis intension were not wrong...
bt feeling bad for sanyu...she lost her parents...
randhir heard this...aww!!!
dont think much ...u r awsm writer...
keep giving beautifull updates...
con.zoon...

sorry for late...

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