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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome OS..

cute n funny

Loved it

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

tum is OS ko lekar insecure kaise ho sakti ho!!!! this was so damn romantic!!!! loved it when kriya gave that sarcastic smile to raghav and raghav k flirting ke baad jo kriya ka rani laxmibai mode aayaa!!!!! raghav bachke rehna,is baatcutter ko sirf humara original charmer rey hi samhal sakta hai aur koi nehi!!!!! rey's dialogs were soo soo romnticc,and kriya blushing then the lastt part,woooww!!!!!!!!😊😊

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I sooo loved it!!!

sooo missing kria!!! But after reading something on KR!!!

its cute!!!! Bahut accha laga!!!

the way rey waiting for her... Rey's feelings...

loved it!!! And finally kria ki entry!!! Hahahaaa

bechara raghav...!! :p

sooo loved that and the stolen kiss part!!!!

haayeee ^_^ bahut bahut mast!!!!

sooo loved it! Yaar!!!

ek dum mast!!

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Jyoti

@jyoti_arsha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awsummm 👍🏼

Poor boy raghav.. hitting on wrong girl... 😆

n i guess he understood that she is real JLB rey's kriya ^_^

beautiful.. loved it.. concept was clear simple n lovely ❤️

n perfect title too.. stolen kiss [: *]

n thnx for pm :-)

p.s i loved ur ol work sometimes i forget to read but as soon i'll go through dem i ll do comment pakka :)

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Mahi it was beautifull yr
hehehe...!!!! Kria nd raghav baala
part was amezing

then kriyansh scene was love iy

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

this was like rainfall on barren land...trust me..
i wanted to see jealous rey..raghav flirted nd a human tandoor was formed...
RLB was a painful thing in D3 nowadays...u brought back wat belongs to kriyaansh...
rey enjoying the scenerio...even i enjoyed that...
the surprised hug...adorable kriya..
he made raghav escape...thats typical rey...
i loved his attempts for an impromptu kiss...
fire exit...plz give sm ideas to cvs...
this was a really sweet os..loved it

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow loved it.
Especially the part Kria teaching Raghav and RLB part.
the end was cute.
won't use hot cause don't know why it was so adorable.
everything was perfect and how i wish cvs just pick the story line fans write here.
D3 would definitely be a better show way better.

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AimanAsim

@AimanAsim

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

😳 😳😳😳

awesome os

do write more

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

oh god ... manny ... all my dreams fulfilled ...tera iss os ne pura kardiya..

raghav flirting with kriya..

rey jealous...

then raghav making a promise to himself that he will never call anyone RLB..as it is specially for kriya...all copyright reserved...

last but certainly not the least the fire exit kiss

simply loved it..

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

res...
will unres later pakka...jus busy with something boring...

So now here I am unressing my post...

I knw I am a qiute late buh cant help it...

I was busy u could say dat coz now I am commenting from a local train...

I really loved ur OS...

its very well written...

it was a treat to KR fans...

As we cant see any KR scenes in the show...

Apna sara gussa utar diya Raghav pe...

muje laga U will show ki Rey Raghav ki le lega...

buh yaha toh apni JR. RLB ne hi uski leli...haha...poor soul...aab pata chal Kriya ke saath ulajhana nai chahiye...

Dat was actually a Stolen Kiss by Rey...

The fire exit scene was sooo...awww...

Reys Comments...Kriyas Blush...

Loved it...

Keep writing more...

Love Aditi...

PS: Sorry couldnt unres it before...maaf kar diyo bacche ko... _/\_

Edited by reyaditi - 11 years ago