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vaishnavi

@vaishkreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

ekdum mast tha os...🤗

it did not SUCK!

kriya ka rlb avatar was great...poor raghav!!!😆😆

n the FE scenne was amazing...

strawberry flavour..aaawesomee😳😳

i so wish ki dis happens in d3

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Shanaya

@Lovelylavender

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Well.. hello there careless dreamer..!

FIrst of all u r so correct! M jus frustrated on the way d3 is goin..

But y to fear wen u r here!

Lol..

I knw u wud keep our hopes high fr kriyaansh by ur amazin stories.. now wudnt u?! ;)

COming to d story! It ws awesome!

Again so right.. jkr title is just fr kriya!

And poor raghav.. hahahahaha..

Kaash we cud get to see this naughty rey in the show... who gets stolen kisses!

I luvd how u added the fire escape there.. u see we all r missin it..

So all in all.. superrrb!!

Keep writin :)

Lotz of luv

Shanaya

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing os...loved it...kriyaans were too cute...love it when kriya shouted at raghav...and then he realised that she was actually the jhansi ki rani...love it when kriya hugged him forgetting everything...afterall she had missed him very much...And then rey bent forward to kiss her i front of everyone...but kriya backed out...then rey's line...tum sharmati bahaut ho kriya...then they went to fire exit...hayee...I so love the FE scenes...then there they kissed...and than the last line...I love strawberry...it was superb...lovely os...thanx for pm...

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shreya

@luvuKR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

AWSUM

bichara raghav..finaaly maum padh gya ki asli Jr. RLB kaun hai..

n i luvd d naughty rey...kria could only blush n smile..i wish aisa actual mein hota..

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This was like much needed medicine...it surely didn't such...it was amazing!

How much I wish something like this happens...like Kriya gives surprise entry and they share some good moments in some function...expected something like this is Rinni's engagement and now ur making my hopes rise!

I know its just a hope but I'm glad at least I got to read this😊

Rey getting all nostalgic and thinking abt Kriya was so cute...

Raghav had to face the real RLB so he learns wat it actually means to be RLB😆

but I wanted him to flirt a little more to make Rey burn...jealous Rey u know😉

Fire exit...God I miss that place so much! Baatcutter bhi use kardethi tho bus mein atak hi jathi KR world mein!

Their convo was so adorable and cute...Hamara innocent Kriya and mischievous Rey😉

And the stolen Kiss☺️ Haq hai uska...that was lovely!

I really hope sometime we get something like this in the show!

Wonderful OS and thanks for writing this🤗

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Ohhh man That was FUN🤣

Raghav now finally know who is the REAL RLB😎🤣

I wanted More ,i wanted Kria to beat Raghav like Sharon once beated Shivam🤣 OMG i went too far🤣🤣 Then Rey should have entered to control JRLB🤣🤣

Raghav ki baj gai re🤣 I loved that whole part ..

and after that ☺️ our Naughty Rey finally FE yaad agai☺️

Strawbery gloss🤣 ☺️

awww I loved it Manny ..

Write More More n More

beautifully excecuted 😳 well thought...😎

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Pray_For_Peace

@Pray_For_Peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Mannu, I love these surprise OS's of yours...😃

starting was good...the brooding Rey, missing his girl...

then Kriya in her JRLB avatar😆...Raghav ki toh baja dali...🤣

then those cute KR moments...everything was in sync...😊

But I don't know why, I found the ending a bit abrupt...

all said and done, I love your works...🤗

aur agar pm bheja hai, toh uss ke liye thank you, I haven't checked my inbox 😆

Edited by I_Me_Myself - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

fantastic os👏👏

and raghav saw d real JRLB😎

and rey s sooo naughty😛

loveddd ittt😳

well-written⭐️

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krarshanaval

@krarshanaval

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

this was superb and wonderful os... loved it

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Amazing os
Now raghav meeting actual RLB hehe bechara kabhi nahi jayega pass aab
Kriyansh moment beautifull

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