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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
yipeee i m first to comment
wonderful part loved it

wow sid and aliya are just like tom and jerry love them😆
whats with nidhi and armaan is there any suspense you try to create with them plz clear it soon
😃
😲
shilpa and family is sweet😛
fianlly piya is started to settle in there
awe piya's sweet dish is superb hit among all
hope to see some armaan , piya and vikas with aadi
😳

wow finally armaan come back home par aate hi masti shuru kya blackmail kiya hai billy and arjun ko loved it sher pe sawa sher rahul , mayank, rohail and kartik ke toh maje 👏

excited for next part
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
Edited by nilusoni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Alia And Sid Were Hilarious Kya Idea Nikala Hai Sid Ne Blackmailing Ka😆
Now This Is Mother Of All Twists Yeh Kya Chal Raha Hai Armaan And Ni Ke Beech Mein I M Sure Jaisa Hum Soch Rahe Hai Waisa Kuch Nahi Hoga * Hopefully U Never Know *😕🤔
"Tum akele thi wahan???" Dadi's rapid fire started...
This sudden thing left Shilpa flabbergusted... She looked at Shashank for some help... "Nahi!!!" Shilpa shook her head in a no.. "Samaan bhi tha saath mein!!" She added making everyone crack up...
Shilpa's Jawab To Her Nani Was Awesome 🤣🤣
Piya's And Nani's Coversation Was Good Much Needed One Between Them Now Piya Ke Sare Insecurities Dur Ho Jayengeee🤗
Rohail Is Missing Alia
The Fight Between Mallik's Male Vs Female Was Awesome😆
And Armaan Ka Jawab Was Even More Awesome😃
Hahaha Shilpa Armaan Pe Sabke Samne Cheekh Ke Gayii Hahaha
Finally Armaan Is In Town I Hope We Get To See The Face Off Between Singhaniya And Armaan Soon
And Plzzz Next Update Tak Yeh Ni And Armaan Ka Confusion Bhi Door Kar Dena 😉
Thanks For The Update🤪 And Yaa Banner Is Awesome As Always 😎
Continue Soon 😊
Edited by SHWETAKASHLOVER - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Omg Sam u updated..
Let me read... :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
i will kill u agar mujhe jo lag raha hai woh sach hua toh aadha padha hai maine abhi yeh
tu jaan le le meri 😲😛

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sid-aliya ka scene acha tha

finally armaan-ni ka scene

About 12 in the dark,...hain yaar!!" He praised himself... --- yaha tak meko samajh mein aa gaya ki kya hua hoga , but then

"Haan!! Aur kuch logon k office mein dakka bhi parwa deyte hain!!" She coyed...
"Hahahahaaha!! Maanti ho k nahi??" He laughed...
"I mean main soch nahi sakti thi k tum yeh raasta nikaalo gay!!! You criminal mind!!!" She shook her head...-- yeh meko samajh ni aaya maine socha ki chalo next update mein pata chalega

"Jab kaam nahi tha to kyun aye tum?? Itne dariya dill kese ho gaye?? Aur ek baat batao... Shilpa aur Abhi ko yahan laana zaroori tha??? koi aur jagah nahi mili thi???" She was serious now...--is scene mein meko laga yeh dono kuch plan kar rahe hai ajay ke khilaaf

"Tch yaar!! Mujhe thodi pata tha wo Shilpa ko yahan bhej denge... Idiots!!" --- He made a face... He too became serious... "Kahin aur le k nahi ja sakta tah main..." --meko aisa laga ki armaan yaha bahot ajeeb behave kar raha hai , shilpa ke aane se khush ni tha kya woh?

"Aur iss chakkar mein, usse ya Abhi ko kuch pata chal jata to??" She questioned...-- again i thought ki ajay ke against plan ki baat ho rahi hai main aise hi fikr kar rahi hu

"Ussko dekhte he pata lag gaya tha k wo zyaada yahan wahan nahi karegii... isliye usse befikr hoke meine yahan chor diya!! But..." He licked his lower lip... "Can you believe it? Ajay ne wo pictures usse bhi bheji thii???"

"Huh???" Nidhi's eyes came out...

"Haan... pehle wo mujhse darri hui thi lekin phir jhagra wagra sab ho ha k humare beech sab sort out hogaya..." He further told her...-- is line pe meko laga ki thik hai yeh pakka ajay ke liye plan kar rahe kuch
"Kya????" He mouth hung up... "Tab to phirr ussne freely ghoomna tha yahan...Humari poll khul jaato to??"--- hain??? humari poll khull jaati?? kaun si poll bhai?? but then meko laga ki oh!! ajay ki poll


Chor do yaar... buri buri khabrein hain!!" He pouted and again lied down on the sofa...
"Kya buri khabrein hai???" She came and sat down near him pushing him a bit...
"Huhhh..." He led out a deep breath... "Sid ko hum donow pe shuk hogaya hai!!" He atlast told her...-- laga ki ohh inke plan ke baare mein shak!!
"What???" She jumped up...
"Haan... usse shuk ho gaya hai aur jab maine dekha k buss bohat khichdi pakk gayi hai uske dimagh mein aur ab wo direct a ke mujhe sawal karne wala hai, to main to kutt liya wahan se..." He blinked his eyes...-- oh plan ka plan ka shak not to worry not to worry

"No!!! Tumhe uske shuk ko door karna chahiye tha..." She hit him on his stomach...
"Acha???" He narrowed his eyes at her... "Kya door karta main?? Agar usse kisi aisi baat pe shuk hota jo nahi hoti tab to koi justification deta main... Ab jo hai!! usse ussi pe shuk hua hai to uski kya kahani bana k usse justification dun main???" He arched his eyebrows...-- is point pe meko laga ki kahi arman-ni ke beech , then oh no isko woh lecture hack karne ka shak hua hoga

"O God!! Usse sab pata lag agaya to???" She gulped down the lump formed inside her throat...

"To humari lagg jayegi!! Ufff" He slapped his head...- i smiled at it
"Vikas Piya ko ajj tak shuk nahi hua hum pe... Yeh... Sid ko kese hogaya?? mujhe to yeh samajh nahi aya abhi tak..." He snored...--- this is the point when i was literally confussed

"Usse to hona he tha naa!!! bhale hum husband wife jesa koi relationship nahi rakhte... we are just like a house mate and nothing more lekin legally relationship to haina?? Wo mere baare mein choti chori cheezein notice karta hai!! Tumhe aur mujhe bhi closely kiya hoga..." She started burning up now...
-- this was the point i literally snapped this was the time i literally came here and commented the first line of the comment

then i cooled down , and read again from the beginning



bhale hum husband wife jesa koi relationship nahi rakhte... we are just like a house mate and nothing more lekin legally relationship to haina?? i re-read it again n again but then i thought ki ni pehle ki tarah sid ke liye baat kar rahi hai - i thought ki pehle wale update ki tarah yaha sid ki baat indirectly ho rahi hai

..
"Cheekh to aise rahi hai jese akele issi ki watt lagii hai!!" He blabbered...- i was happy ki armaan shilpa ki tarah use bachane ni gaya , and then this line mere shak ko aur gehra karte gayi


Tumhe kya lagta hai?? iss tarah chup chup k... roz roz k yeh naye naye drame!! Acha lag raha hai mujhe??" He asked...
"Hum kab tak aisa karenge Armaan?? Ajj Sid ko shuk hua hai...Kal kisi aur ko hoga... Tab hum kya karenge??"

Sahi bol raha hun!! Koshish ki thi naa humne door rakhne ki khudko ek doosre se?? nahi kar paye naa?? To phir.. jab tak deewaar nahi ayegii, yeh khatam nahi hoga... Ek akhri koshish he sahi..." He spoke out looking in front...- explain it

Kuch nahi hoga... Lekin main bhi yahan nahi honga!! Kyunki agar mein yahan raha... to yeh sagai nahi hogii

is point pe main wapas gayi ki tune koi prank toh ni khela phir se pehle ki tarah ,now i re read the chapter again like a detective and then at each line i was like
trust sam...trust sam...trust sam... and last waterfall scene replayed in my mind


now piya -nidhi scene
i really wished ki shilpa and piya ki bonding nidhi-piya se better ho
i dont like the thing ki armaan ne shilpa ko vikas n piya ke baare mein ni bataya n ye kya foreign ka group lga rakha hai and shilpa totally out of place feel karegi , i really didnt liked ki rohail-rahul-abhi-atul ka group n foreign wala group yeh do group ban gaye hai is ff mein

piya-nani scene was awesome


armaan-house scene was hilaarious
am in love with all malik man
sab theek chal raha tha armaan ke ghar mein

Nahii wo to main bhaag k he karunga!! don't worry!!" Armaan winked at the two...--bas yeh ek dialog ne dimaag ko fir se alert kar diya

"Ready ho??" Armaan asked Nidhi over the phone...
"Haan bus AirPort k liye nikal rahi hun!!" She replied back -meko sach mein laga ki yeh dono bhaag rahe hai

fir aage padha toh jaan mein jaan aayi

billy-arjun -abhi -rohail-rahul scene was awesome
i really liked the way abhi talk to them like they are his family and they treat him same way as armaan


ha ha ha i really liked
ajay-armaan encounter
ha ha
i really loved how shipa said "sometimes u should ignore things" ha ha


Ufff... jaan lelo!!" Rohail scowled...
"Nahiii... wo nahi chahiye!!" He made a face... "Pehli cheez! Wo bOhaaat Mehngii hai!! Aurr doosri cheez.." He paused... "Bohat Bolti hai!!!" He completed leaving Rohail flabbergusted whereas others understood he was refering to Aliya and started laughing...--this was hillarious

i loved the way they tossed the coin who will go with armaan
good idea and a unique one , again fell in love with malik brothers


behan ek tera hi update aise hote hai jo mere har emotions ko bahar le aate hai ek hi update mein , finally maine comment kar diya , total 6 baar comment karne aayi thi main kya likhu kuch samajh mein ni aa raha tha .. fir wapas chali gyi then finally aaj review kar diya
update soon
Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
wheee :P
ajkal i am in no comment mode
isliye itni dair hogayi comment krne me

abhi b i dno how much i wd be able to write bt i owe u this one, cx tm hamare liye apne busy schedule se time nikalti ho the least we can do is COMMENT

i have read the part before manyyy days ago, i have forgotton it all except for the fact it is nidhi-full
:P


real player... we all knw wo tou armaaan hi haiii

sid aliya scenes were nice, loved their friendly bond

well ni aur armaan ki riddles tou tm hi solve kr skti ho. paheeliyon me baat krte hain

ni bht khatak rhi thi mjhe poore part me, no offence sam mera mood harab haina issliye kch acha nhi lag rhaa mjhee

jin ko akele rehne ki aadat hai wo ek dum joint system me rehne lage tou adjust krne me masla hota hai nd comparision kisi ko acha nhi lagtaa

lo bhai aur mazeeeddd paheeliyan. ye armaan ni ka chakkar kya hai

i want to see piya shilpa bonding too, afterall she ll b part of their gang once they get married
velvet kheer sun k moun me paani aa gayaaa

finally nani ne tareef kr hi di
dair ayi durust ayii

nani itna meetha bol rhi thii mjh se b hazam nhi huaaa

more coming soon

next edit


:P
lol
in larkon k saath sahi hua

that scene was funny
:P
LOL armaan actually replied him to send him more picss

ROFL ye armaan b naaa
nd the office scene where he acted as if he didnt knew ajay ws funny

Aap to rehne he dijye... Jahan react karna chahiye wahan kabhi nahi karte.
this cracked me up. sahi keh rhi hai shilpa👏
dono sahitakar k hai

thaa kr k lagte hain ek dosre kooo

wo nahi chahiye!!" He made a face... "Pehli cheez! Wo bOhaaat Mehngii hai!! Aurr doosri cheez.." He paused... "Bohat Bolti hai!!!"
👏
(Y)
auditor ne kch gad mad ki hogi tbhi fire hogayaaa
chalo ab delhi chaleee. armaan tossed who would go wd him aise ideas armaan ko hi aa skte hai

dekhte hain delhi me kya gul khilte haii

u said there is some hint which shayd due to my bad mood coudnt figure out
Solliii :(
Edited by teenorchid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Ur banners are most important first thing to look before updates seriously amazing <3<3<3<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
And u reserved at pg 6 and updated at 8?? Why so??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome part dear
so ab armaan n rohail delhi jaa rahe hain
armaan ne jo ajay singhania ko kaha...hehehe
andshilpa ki chee chee...waah
nani n piya part was lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
i lovedt he update
nani n piya's conversation
fight between malik women's and men's
when shilpa blasted on armaan n vikram's remark lol 😆
hehe tom bangali mast naam tha🤣
ohho aliya n rohail ke ego issues...
these were best n baki sab thoda sa confusing which m sure next part tak clear hojaega🤔
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
mai itni overwhelmed ho ki i can't start reading

khushi ke mare

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