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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
I m silent reader of ur ff commenting for the first time but following it frm 1st thread...i m not good in commenting dats y never commented...u r a fab writer really the way u have written this ff its amazing...i m just love wid ur ff...i ve re-read whole ff thrice...cant stop myself...the way u ve describe armaan in it its superb...i never read arsh ff's those parts in which there r no arsh scenes but in this ff if there r no arsh scenes then also that part i read n just loved it...very beautifully u ve written each chatacter of this ff...u write very well n i m big fan of ur ff.
please dont say that u r ending this ff...continue soon N please do pm next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Awesome update, just loved the part...
Loved shilpa's dadi and piya conversation...
can't wait for the next part, continue soon...
thanks for the pm and tc...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: nilusoni

yipeee i m first to comment

wonderful part loved it

wow sid and aliya are just like tom and jerry love them😆
whats with nidhi and armaan is there any suspense you try to create with them plz clear it soon
😃
😲
shilpa and family is sweet😛
fianlly piya is started to settle in there
awe piya's sweet dish is superb hit among all
hope to see some armaan , piya and vikas with aadi
😳

wow finally armaan come back home par aate hi masti shuru kya blackmail kiya hai billy and arjun ko loved it sher pe sawa sher rahul , mayank, rohail and kartik ke toh maje 👏

excited for next part
plz pm me for updates
continue soon



Well... first one to reserve but not the first one to comment!!😆
Sorry!! iam not even into clearing it out anytime soon... Just leave them!! they are distracters!!😉
Glad you liked the part!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: SHWETAKASHLOVER

Alia And Sid Were Hilarious Kya Idea Nikala Hai Sid Ne Blackmailing Ka😆

Now This Is Mother Of All Twists Yeh Kya Chal Raha Hai Armaan And Ni Ke Beech Mein I M Sure Jaisa Hum Soch Rahe Hai Waisa Kuch Nahi Hoga * Hopefully U Never Know *😕🤔
"Tum akele thi wahan???" Dadi's rapid fire started...
This sudden thing left Shilpa flabbergusted... She looked at Shashank for some help... "Nahi!!!" Shilpa shook her head in a no.. "Samaan bhi tha saath mein!!" She added making everyone crack up...
Shilpa's Jawab To Her Nani Was Awesome 🤣🤣
Piya's And Nani's Coversation Was Good Much Needed One Between Them Now Piya Ke Sare Insecurities Dur Ho Jayengeee🤗
Rohail Is Missing Alia
The Fight Between Mallik's Male Vs Female Was Awesome😆
And Armaan Ka Jawab Was Even More Awesome😃
Hahaha Shilpa Armaan Pe Sabke Samne Cheekh Ke Gayii Hahaha
Finally Armaan Is In Town I Hope We Get To See The Face Off Between Singhaniya And Armaan Soon
And Plzzz Next Update Tak Yeh Ni And Armaan Ka Confusion Bhi Door Kar Dena 😉
Thanks For The Update🤪 And Yaa Banner Is Awesome As Always 😎
Continue Soon 😊



Sid blackmailing Aliya!!😆 I wonder how long he can continue with that?? 😉
Well about ArmaanNidhi!! ummm what are you thinking exactly???😲
Singhaniya and Armaan faceoff!!🥱 hmmm i guess everyone wants it... Lets see what Armaan thinks about it!😉
You want me to clear your confusion in the next part??? Ahhh this isn't coming anytime sooner!!😛
I too loved the banner... thankyou!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazysky

i will kill u agar mujhe jo lag raha hai woh sach hua toh aadha padha hai maine abhi yeh
tu jaan le le meri 😲😛

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sid-aliya ka scene acha tha

finally armaan-ni ka scene

About 12 in the dark,...hain yaar!!" He praised himself... --- yaha tak meko samajh mein aa gaya ki kya hua hoga , but then

"Haan!! Aur kuch logon k office mein dakka bhi parwa deyte hain!!" She coyed...
"Hahahahaaha!! Maanti ho k nahi??" He laughed...
"I mean main soch nahi sakti thi k tum yeh raasta nikaalo gay!!! You criminal mind!!!" She shook her head...-- yeh meko samajh ni aaya maine socha ki chalo next update mein pata chalega

"Jab kaam nahi tha to kyun aye tum?? Itne dariya dill kese ho gaye?? Aur ek baat batao... Shilpa aur Abhi ko yahan laana zaroori tha??? koi aur jagah nahi mili thi???" She was serious now...--is scene mein meko laga yeh dono kuch plan kar rahe hai ajay ke khilaaf

"Tch yaar!! Mujhe thodi pata tha wo Shilpa ko yahan bhej denge... Idiots!!" --- He made a face... He too became serious... "Kahin aur le k nahi ja sakta tah main..." --meko aisa laga ki armaan yaha bahot ajeeb behave kar raha hai , shilpa ke aane se khush ni tha kya woh?

"Aur iss chakkar mein, usse ya Abhi ko kuch pata chal jata to??" She questioned...-- again i thought ki ajay ke against plan ki baat ho rahi hai main aise hi fikr kar rahi hu

"Ussko dekhte he pata lag gaya tha k wo zyaada yahan wahan nahi karegii... isliye usse befikr hoke meine yahan chor diya!! But..." He licked his lower lip... "Can you believe it? Ajay ne wo pictures usse bhi bheji thii???"

"Huh???" Nidhi's eyes came out...

"Haan... pehle wo mujhse darri hui thi lekin phir jhagra wagra sab ho ha k humare beech sab sort out hogaya..." He further told her...-- is line pe meko laga ki thik hai yeh pakka ajay ke liye plan kar rahe kuch
"Kya????" He mouth hung up... "Tab to phirr ussne freely ghoomna tha yahan...Humari poll khul jaato to??"--- hain??? humari poll khull jaati?? kaun si poll bhai?? but then meko laga ki oh!! ajay ki poll


Chor do yaar... buri buri khabrein hain!!" He pouted and again lied down on the sofa...
"Kya buri khabrein hai???" She came and sat down near him pushing him a bit...
"Huhhh..." He led out a deep breath... "Sid ko hum donow pe shuk hogaya hai!!" He atlast told her...-- laga ki ohh inke plan ke baare mein shak!!
"What???" She jumped up...
"Haan... usse shuk ho gaya hai aur jab maine dekha k buss bohat khichdi pakk gayi hai uske dimagh mein aur ab wo direct a ke mujhe sawal karne wala hai, to main to kutt liya wahan se..." He blinked his eyes...-- oh plan ka plan ka shak not to worry not to worry

"No!!! Tumhe uske shuk ko door karna chahiye tha..." She hit him on his stomach...
"Acha???" He narrowed his eyes at her... "Kya door karta main?? Agar usse kisi aisi baat pe shuk hota jo nahi hoti tab to koi justification deta main... Ab jo hai!! usse ussi pe shuk hua hai to uski kya kahani bana k usse justification dun main???" He arched his eyebrows...-- is point pe meko laga ki kahi arman-ni ke beech , then oh no isko woh lecture hack karne ka shak hua hoga

"O God!! Usse sab pata lag agaya to???" She gulped down the lump formed inside her throat...

"To humari lagg jayegi!! Ufff" He slapped his head...- i smiled at it
"Vikas Piya ko ajj tak shuk nahi hua hum pe... Yeh... Sid ko kese hogaya?? mujhe to yeh samajh nahi aya abhi tak..." He snored...--- this is the point when i was literally confussed

"Usse to hona he tha naa!!! bhale hum husband wife jesa koi relationship nahi rakhte... we are just like a house mate and nothing more lekin legally relationship to haina?? Wo mere baare mein choti chori cheezein notice karta hai!! Tumhe aur mujhe bhi closely kiya hoga..." She started burning up now...
-- this was the point i literally snapped this was the time i literally came here and commented the first line of the comment

then i cooled down , and read again from the beginning



bhale hum husband wife jesa koi relationship nahi rakhte... we are just like a house mate and nothing more lekin legally relationship to haina?? i re-read it again n again but then i thought ki ni pehle ki tarah sid ke liye baat kar rahi hai - i thought ki pehle wale update ki tarah yaha sid ki baat indirectly ho rahi hai

..
"Cheekh to aise rahi hai jese akele issi ki watt lagii hai!!" He blabbered...- i was happy ki armaan shilpa ki tarah use bachane ni gaya , and then this line mere shak ko aur gehra karte gayi


Tumhe kya lagta hai?? iss tarah chup chup k... roz roz k yeh naye naye drame!! Acha lag raha hai mujhe??" He asked...
"Hum kab tak aisa karenge Armaan?? Ajj Sid ko shuk hua hai...Kal kisi aur ko hoga... Tab hum kya karenge??"

Sahi bol raha hun!! Koshish ki thi naa humne door rakhne ki khudko ek doosre se?? nahi kar paye naa?? To phir.. jab tak deewaar nahi ayegii, yeh khatam nahi hoga... Ek akhri koshish he sahi..." He spoke out looking in front...- explain it

Kuch nahi hoga... Lekin main bhi yahan nahi honga!! Kyunki agar mein yahan raha... to yeh sagai nahi hogii

is point pe main wapas gayi ki tune koi prank toh ni khela phir se pehle ki tarah ,now i re read the chapter again like a detective and then at each line i was like
trust sam...trust sam...trust sam... and last waterfall scene replayed in my mind


now piya -nidhi scene
i really wished ki shilpa and piya ki bonding nidhi-piya se better ho
i dont like the thing ki armaan ne shilpa ko vikas n piya ke baare mein ni bataya n ye kya foreign ka group lga rakha hai and shilpa totally out of place feel karegi , i really didnt liked ki rohail-rahul-abhi-atul ka group n foreign wala group yeh do group ban gaye hai is ff mein

piya-nani scene was awesome


armaan-house scene was hilaarious
am in love with all malik man
sab theek chal raha tha armaan ke ghar mein

Nahii wo to main bhaag k he karunga!! don't worry!!" Armaan winked at the two...--bas yeh ek dialog ne dimaag ko fir se alert kar diya

"Ready ho??" Armaan asked Nidhi over the phone...
"Haan bus AirPort k liye nikal rahi hun!!" She replied back -meko sach mein laga ki yeh dono bhaag rahe hai

fir aage padha toh jaan mein jaan aayi

billy-arjun -abhi -rohail-rahul scene was awesome
i really liked the way abhi talk to them like they are his family and they treat him same way as armaan


ha ha ha i really liked
ajay-armaan encounter
ha ha
i really loved how shipa said "sometimes u should ignore things" ha ha


Ufff... jaan lelo!!" Rohail scowled...
"Nahiii... wo nahi chahiye!!" He made a face... "Pehli cheez! Wo bOhaaat Mehngii hai!! Aurr doosri cheez.." He paused... "Bohat Bolti hai!!!" He completed leaving Rohail flabbergusted whereas others understood he was refering to Aliya and started laughing...--this was hillarious

i loved the way they tossed the coin who will go with armaan
good idea and a unique one , again fell in love with malik brothers


behan ek tera hi update aise hote hai jo mere har emotions ko bahar le aate hai ek hi update mein , finally maine comment kar diya , total 6 baar comment karne aayi thi main kya likhu kuch samajh mein ni aa raha tha .. fir wapas chali gyi then finally aaj review kar diya
update soon



Now this is what i call the most craziest comment of all for this part!!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it out!!😆
You didn't got Armaan's way??😉 You'll know it... sooner or later!!
Wo Shilpa k ane se bilkul khush nahi tha!! thats why he kissed her!😲
Thats what you thought right!! Trust Sam!! 😆

Huhhh Shilpa is not even in the picture right now... how can she be so much bonded with any of Mauritius gang??? Think normal! Its impossible...
Armaan ne Shilpa ko Vikas aur Piya k baare mein nahi bataya!!! you really think it was necessary that he should bring out this topic out of blue when no need of these names were there between the two?? I don't think so...🥱
Hahahaha!! No groups are there... when you stay with someone for sometime you develop that bond! Its natural!! Andd Shilpa kya out of place feel karegii??? she is not even in the picture at the moment!! Its a long journey!

Hehehe You really thought he was about to run off with her!!!🤣

If my update brought you at the edge of all emotions then Behan! you comment made me laugh!! i enjoyed it completely!!😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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glad u liked my comment but kya karu itne emotions tere update mein aa jate hai jaise ki main koi movies dekh rahi hoon n kisi bimbo ki tarah end mein last sad scene mein ro rahi hoon :P pata tha meko ki mera sab veham hai isliye toh bola trust sam trust sam

next update kab milega?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh update kab hoga?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sameera ye kya ho raha hain dear? armaan and Ni aisi batein kyun kar rahe hain? 😕 yeh ff armaan shilpa ka hain leking iss update mein unn dono ka ek bhi scene nahi 😡
poor shilpa, she doesnt even know armaan and his deeds 😲 why it is feeling as if her identity is just about armaan now?
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Posted: 11 years ago
update na


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