ArShi OS: One Misty Morning

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pkan

@pkan

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Thank you for the pm. The story is beautifully written. Please continue with the story.

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

A well-written update...!! The bonding between the grandmother and grand-daughter is very much adorable... The poor child must have been scared out of her wits when she saw the bicycle just pass by "the couple"...
Sad for ArHi though... Even though they are Together,forever and free, they couldnt have it with their complete family...

Thanks for the pm... :)

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

it was awsumm and sad os loved it😊 thanks for pm

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dprover

@dprover

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Together forever free

Beautiful &'sad for their kid

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Very poignant n emotional one...😭...loved it though!!!!

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

amazing...it looks grandma was khushi herself...only arnav passed away...I hope I got it right...lol

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Finally got around to reading this story...
First of all... you are excellent with photography and as I have been to Shimla so many times your words evoked a nostalgia...
Am assuming that Grandmother is the baby who was left at home when Arnav and khusi went for walk. You beautifully managed to convey their love for each other as well for their baby in the short story.
loved it
poonam

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

WAOOO What was that! Mavi its I think ur most brilliant work till now.. thats what I feel. Simply loved it!!!... The girl saw ghosts of Arnav and Khushi. And the granny said the same words Khushi said on road before accident. may b she had mentioned those words before too u know. I am not guessing anything here but seriously just loved it

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 10 years ago