SS: The Mechanics of Murder (Chapter X - Updated/Page 27) - Page 3

Mystery !!

Res
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So sorry for forgetting to unres...been really having a week... :/

I love this story! And I will give you detailed comment on that tomorrow! ;)

Ri.. it was excellent.. brilliant.. full of suspense.. just loved part1 too much.. nd now my expectations has become too high for this story alreadynd i'm sure u'll be greater dan wat i'm expecting..😊

plz plz cont. soon.. too eager to read further..😊

Res! I'll comment from my lappy, have read :)

Originally posted by: twni

good going

Originally posted by: infinity_

Yes, I'll stick to Riddhi. . 😆

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Riddhi, you're a splendid writer.⭐️ / Thank you so much!

The way you described the whole atmosphere, actually had this scene running in my head. :D / That's actually a really huge compliment, I'm so glad you think so :)

His voice broke then. "Don't make the same mistake she did."

^ Who is she? Niharika? 😲 / I wonder . . .

And Vardhan sir, in a defeated aura. . that's written out brilliantly. / Thanks :D

A drawling, arrogant and annoying voice

Ahh, what I wouldn't do to witness this scene, hear his smirk-filled voice taunting her. . / I hear it in my head too, just not that accurately xD

You have all the dynamics spot on! And the way Randhir always shares his ideas with Sanyukta is depicted well too.

And it is so typical of Randhir na, to have analysed the whole situation before hand and to just reveal all his thoughts, just to prove his point. / Typical MCP behavior.

And they are gonna go to Prof Rao's room? 😲 Ugh, and you ended it there! *pouts* / *evil grin*

I'm so looking forward for the next chapter. <3

Uhmm, as a reader I would prefer longer chapters, but it would also be fun to read a well written mystery in shorter chapters. So, if you can hold on to it for a longer while, it would be a delight to read about in detail. :D :) / I'll try to make the chapters longer! Because well, I was thinking that making the updates longer might be a little ...uhm, boring?

Cheers,

Sharmi

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

good going girls.
the story seems to be intriguing.
please do update soon the next part.

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Aha! A different story all together, words sewn together with ultimate beauty.Gorgeous work Riddhi. The prologue, the update, both have an aura just too different and mesmerizing in its own way. The grasp of language and emotions of your is splendid.

You are too SUFI mayn.

Regards

Iptisha

Originally posted by: .scarlet.

Mystery !!

I absolutely love this genre ... Fabulous concept ...

The update was awesome!!

Continue soon...