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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: infinity_
Gripping and how!
Amazingly written, Azure! <3
Loved the plot. . .

Thank you!

You can call me Riddhi, or Ri; it seems a little odd to be called Azure xD

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suchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow!

This plot does seem mysterious

I'd love to read more and see what happens :D

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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Doppel-jayxx
wow!
This plot does seem mysterious
I'd love to read more and see what happens :D

Thanks! I love writing this too! :D

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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: gujjupari
Unres!

The Prologue seems sooo intriguing! The way you started off, it reminded of The Da Vinci Code by Dan Brown, where he too starts off with the murder!

And can I just say it is the perfect way to hook someone to a thriller!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Love,
Pari😳

I've read that book, you know. One of my friends loves it so she made me read it :3

I was actually going to explain all of it later, but then I thought it'd be more fitting to start it off this way.

The mess that my head has now become, putting all the pieces together xD

Anyway, Thanks! ^.^

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Mariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

The prologue's soo intriguing., wonder how the main story's gonna be like! Rao mystery has been dragged from here to there for no reason on SHQ, really needed to know what happens. and through this fiction, will actually be able to picture it up. Plus its better if Sanyu starts solving it and RD indirectly starts helping her.

Continue soon. Lots of love xxx

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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
The prologue's soo intriguing., wonder how the main story's gonna be like! Rao mystery has been dragged from here to there for no reason on SHQ, really needed to know what happens. and through this fiction, will actually be able to picture it up. Plus its better if Sanyu starts solving it and RD indirectly starts helping her.
Continue soon. Lots of love xxx

I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Yeah, IKR. They won't even make use of the awesome tracks they've started on!

And since it's not technically a spoiler, I'll tell you - Being a SanDhir shipper at heart, I can't not write about them! :D

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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Na1na
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OMG!!!
How do you expect me to wait for the next update?!
Post now! :D
This is like sooo mysterious. And I love how you started off the chapter!
If this was a book I would have finished it in one night, because im really bad at not knowing things! I need to know! So please do me a favour and update very soon!!
Really, very curious and excited about this!
And oh, yeah, you have written this like a pro! ;)
Love <3

Your comment has made me unbelievably happy! :3

I had a three-day holiday last week, so I was spending time at my leisure but now I have none to do so. I have to 'fit in' writing now :-/

Ahh, but anyway! Thank you! :*

Love you too! :D

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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Shar.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Yes, I'll stick to Riddhi. . 😆

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Riddhi, you're a splendid writer.⭐️

The way you described the whole atmosphere, actually had this scene running in my head. :D

His voice broke then. "Don't make the same mistake she did."

^ Who is she? Niharika? 😲 And Vardhan sir, in a defeated aura. . that's written out brilliantly.

A drawling, arrogant and annoying voice

Ahh, what I wouldn't do to witness this scene, hear his smirk-filled voice taunting her. .

You have all the dynamics spot on! And the way Randhir always shares his ideas with Sanyukta is depicted well too.

And it is so typical of Randhir na, to have analysed the whole situation before hand and to just reveal all his thoughts, just to prove his point.

And they are gonna go to Prof Rao's room? 😲 Ugh, and you ended it there! *pouts*

I'm so looking forward for the next chapter. <3

Uhmm, as a reader I would prefer longer chapters, but it would also be fun to read a well written mystery in shorter chapters. So, if you can hold on to it for a longer while, it would be a delight to read about in detail. :D :)

Cheers,

Sharmi

Edited by infinity_ - 11 years ago