Mane! I am late! T_TI was typing all the replies T_T
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Dedicating this chappy to Saffi di was so apt!
You have shown so much maturity here that it reminds me of Saffi di!
I really pity Ranveer!
He has to faced so much in such a tender age
Firstly, he never got to see his mother
He had no idea who is she
Then one day he sees some of his father's colleagues living in his house
He develops a wonderful bond with one of the woman
Later, that woman turns out to be his mother
It is true 'Like father, Like son'
He has same fate as his father
He carves for his ,mother's love but doesn't get it
He has only his father byhis side
But I know, the story will end on a happy note :)
The flashback was hilarious and emotional too!
I know how much Randhir wished to be by her side during the delivery!
The poor soul didn't even knew whether his child was a girl or a boy! :'(
He had no idea how his child looks like!
No one cared to even tell him the whereabouts of his child x(
I am glad at least he had Vardhaan sir and his dad by his side
I can't even imagine how he would have lived without them!
I loved Sanyu-Parth convo!
She was closing her eyes.
"Thankgod she is sleeping," Parth told softly.
"Wake her up! She shouldn't sleep," the nurse shouted.
"What? But she needs rest!" Parth told sheepishly.
^^^These lines are so funny! I love the character of Parth in this FF!
When Randhir, in his drunken state, spitted the truth!
Sanyu was not ready to agree only!
It was Parth who wanted to reach the root of this and wished to know the truth!
I so wish he had done the same thing previously too!
I believe if someone dear is accused of any crime one should go to any extent to find the truth!
If I were at her place, I would have looked everywhere for some way to prove that they hadn't done it!I really adore Parth for having such a mature thinking!
He was the one who gave the suggestion of giving the child to those parents!
He was the one who convinced her for this!
I understand how difficult it must be for Sanyu to give up her child to someone else and that too on the day he was born
But one think irks me, that she didn't try even once to contact those parents or her son! But on one hand, I'm glad that she didn't! May be it wasn't right to do so!
1) Her motherhood might have taken the better of her and she might have ended up regretting her decision
2) Ranveer might start consider Sanyu as his mother leaving those parents aloneIt was Parth only who proposed to inform Randhir about the adoption of his child! His characterization is just fab! You have showcased his maturity by all these small things! I really love the way you write!
Vardhaan is the best mentor one could ever get! He was always with Randhi! Even when no one trusted him, when everyone had left him alone, when he was in great need of a support! He was always there! Not just Randhir, he is hell bent on making his every student happy! He is a smart guy who knows how to knock common sense in one's mind!
Coming to the cliffy, I think there are the following possibilities
1) Those parents were send by them only but this possibilty is close to impossible 😆
2) Randhir contacted those parents and adopted him or told them that it was his son and he wasn't informed about it!
3) He contacted those parents, used to spend time with them but they died somehow and then he brought Ranveer with him. But then those parents must have died soon after they adopted Ranveer.
4) Randhir met those parents accidentally and then later came to know he was his son, then he brought ranveer back home. This is almostimpossible and sounds too filmy 😆 and unrealistic.
Love you more,
Shivuu <3
P.S. No offence! These are my POVs! I don't mean to offend you! Sorry if I have said something wrong!P.P.S. Mane! That was one long comment! Baksh dena thoda bhavnao main beh gayi thi! 😆
Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago
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