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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

indeed a great chappy yaar...
loved it and enjoyed it thoroughly...



Aww! Thanks a looottt!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RandhirHolic

Hey Vani,

Congratulations for the new thread dear!!
I haven't commented since Part 12 so be ready cause comment will be a really long one!😉

Aww! Thankyou soo much mann :)
Bring it on! I love long ones :)

Part 12 :
You're longest chapter since date! I Must say it was one of the best chappies i have read on this forum till date. The way you described PaSaNd relation , it just seemed so beautiful. I really want to see this on Screen yaar. anyways the flashback hurt me like really it did . You know I kind of empathised with Randhir...How horrible it feels when you are blamed for something you did'nt even do ! 😭😭

Yes this is! :P Aww thanks! :)
I wish we could see it in the show but that ain't possible :P
I know it does feel really horrible :) Gone through it once! :(

Part 13 :
The truth reveals haan? Akhila is such a bitch ...I'm sure anyone and everyone reading this story must have shot her mentally atleast twice.
The guilt and remorse which was felt by Parth and Sanyu was so beautifully potrayed !The way sanyu went up to the wall where they had kissed for the very first time!! Awwie it was so mesmerizing!!

Yes finally the truth is revealed :P
A typical One!
Haha.. while writing I must have shot her mentally 100 times :P
Aww thanks!

Part 14 :
The best part !! The decide to join Randhir's company for gaining his forgiveness...and vardhan's dialogue -
"Aa gaye raaste pe. Par sher abhi sher ka saamna karna padega! All the best guys!"
Lol I so loved it!! And brain teasers they were so good re!!
It added to the specialness of the chapter!😃😃👍🏼

Yes they did :)
Haha, Vardhan plays the cupid here! :P
I love Brainteasers actually :)
Thanks!

Part 15 :
The Dream Team reaches our hero's mansion!!
And Ranveer is sooo cuttteee!! That prank was so nice
Randhir knows his son so well , He loved him so much that he knows that he won't eat if the food is not made by him! I so loved it!
Sanyukta already loves Ranveer! So nice 🥱🥱🥱

Yes ! :D
Haha, aakhir beta kiska hai :P
Aww.. glad you loved it !:D
Obv, blood relation :P

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapters where we'd see Randhir's reaction, PaSaNd patch Up and most importantly please reveal Ranveer's mystery!!😲😲

Yes yes. I will :)

Great Work ...Keep it Up👏👏

Thanks! :D I'll try to :)

Love, Love you too :)
Aisha😳😳 Vanii ^_^

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ParamHolic-

Hey Vanii..😊

Sorry my like button is not working 😕
This Update was so Cutee..😳
Awiee Sab select ho gaye..n they r gonna stay at RD's place..👏
Finally Dosto ka milan ho jayega 😆
Harsh is really very sweet..Good father he is 😃
Sanyukta this mansion could have been yours..But u 😡
Eekkss Ranveer is a sweetheart..
He played that Prank n sanyukta liked it?
No doubt wohi uski Mom hai 😳
Even the mole scene proves that..
Sanyukta why dont u use ur brain..itna co-incidence kaise ho sakta hai..?😲
Awieee..RD n Ranveer convo was shooo shweet..❤️
Chalo sanyu..u were again wrong..RD aint married..Ab aur Guilt se mar tu 😡
RD will return in next chap na?
OmG! This is going to be interesting..
He's gonna be hell angry..
Ab dekhte hai kya hota hai..
Update soon
Love
Neha




Its okay Neha :)
Thankyou soo much for the lovely comment re :)
Itni jaldi nahi. Torture banta hai :P
I am sorry I wont be able to reply to every line now as I have to go out! :(
I LOVED YOUR COMMENT! THANKS! <3

I will ASAP :)
Love,
Vanii ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: afsanakhanak

nyc story...i read ol chapters in one go...awesome...pm me whenever u update



Thankyou soo much :)
I can PM if you will buddy me :) Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

I don't see an update anywhere. =.=



Rinii maate?
You read my FF? I didn't know :P
I thought you didn't like it so you discontinued reading it :(
I will update ASAP :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritika_A

Hii!
m new here ...
read oll parts of dis ff loved it ...
Update soon ...



Glad you liked it :)
I will ASAP :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
When ll u update after three i ll nt able to read so o
Plz try to do it b4 that
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asmamahsud

When ll u update after three i ll nt able to read so o
Plz try to do it b4 that



I am sorry but I wont be able to do that.
Current comes back at 2.30pm so by the time I update it becomes three!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello :) Long chapter again, beats even the 12th chapter. 13 pages in word. 😛

Well, for the dedication, this one is dedicated to my Miss. Rinii maate! (Reminiscence). Rini, I know we don't talk much nowadays but I will never forget you, never! You were the first person who told me that I do write well. Thanks :*

All this is because of you :) Loveyou. :*

Happy reading!


Chapter 16 :

"Shaam ko!" Ranveer told and jumped on to the backseat.

Evening :

Ranveer came back home from school and placed his bag on the couch. He went near the landline and checked the time. He was waiting for someone's call. The wait grew longer. He was impatient now. He waited. Finally after 10minutes, Ranveer picked up the landline and dialed a number. No one answered.
He did the same thing thrice.

He dialed for the fourth time now. Fortunately the caller picked up.
"Get up! Utho!" Ranveer shouted.
"Get up!" he shouted again louder this time.
"Get up, get up, get up!" Ranveer told increasing his pitch after every 'get up'.
After a minute, "Good, now go get ready!" Ranveer told.
After a while, "Get ready and call me back. Don't sleep again!" he told sternly and hung up.

"Ranveer kispe chilla rahe the?" Parth asked confused by his behavior.
"Senior pe, kabhi kabhi baccho jaise behave karte hai!" Ranveer replied calmly.
"Huh!?" Sanyukta exclamied.
"He doesn't get up only. Chilla chilla ke uthana padtha hai. Bata nahi mere bina kya karenge!" Ranveer told and picked up his backpack and walked to his room. He changed and came down again. Everyone had only one thing in their minds - "Was Randhir Ranveer's father or vice-versa?"

Everyone started laughing out loud together. After a long time they were laughing whole-heartedly.

The landline started ringing. Kaka had put it on speaker.
"Senior!" Ranveer told.
"Sorry," Randhir told sheepishly.
"Now go to the conference. Aapko latecomers pasand nahi hai na? Khud kaise late ho sakta ho?" Ranveer asked.
"Sorry champ," Randhir told.
"Senior, you are late!" Ranveer told.
"Shit! Bye. Loveyou junior," Randhir told.
"Love you too Senior!" Ranveer told and hung up.

After a while again everyone started laughing and Randhir's childishness.
Finally they stopped laughing. Sanyukta wished badly she was a part of this cuteness. She wanted to be a part of Randhir-Ranveer's life.

"Ranveer bolo na! Randhir bhai ne tumhe aur kiske baare mein bataya hai?" Jiggy asked. He was desperate to know the answer. He wished Sanyukta's name and Parth's name to come out.
"Senior ne? Unhone mujhe aapke, chudail, bimbo, hairband ke baare mein bataya tha!" Ranveer told.

"Iss Randhir ki toh mai, Chudail?" Vidushi muttered which went unnoticed by everyone.
"Bas?" Jiggy told disappointed.
"Nahi, sabse important naam toh maine abhi bataya hi nahi!" Ranveer told.
"Kaunse naam?" Jiggy told.
"Farzi aur lollipop!" Ranveer told, "Kitne funny naam hai na?" He laughed uncontrollably.
"Sabse important naam matlab?" Parth asked curiously and happily.
"Arey inn dono ke baare mein senior din-raat baat karte hai aur mai kabhi bore nahi hota! I love listening about them," Ranveer replied.
"Ranveer tum inn sabke asli naam jaante ho?" Sanyukta asked.
"Nahi jaanta. Senior ne kabhi nahi bataya," Ranveer told.
"Mai bataau?" Vidushi told smiling.
"Bolo?" Ranveer told excited.
"Mai chudail hoon, Kaustuki bimbo hai, Sahil hairband hai, Parth lollipop hai and Sanyukta farzi hai," Vidushi replied.

"Sacchi?" Ranveer asked wide-eyed.
"Guys, mujhko bohot neend aa rahi hai. I am going to sleep. Goodnight!" Sanyukta told and got up.
"Haan chalo guys, it's late now," Parth told.
Everyone agreed and went to their respective rooms.

After 15 minutes, Sanyukta didn't know why but she wanted to go and check on Ranveer once. She silently walked to his room and found him tossing in bed.

"Kya hua?" Sanyukta asked resting onto the wall.
"Sanyu mujhe neend nahi aa rahi," Ranveer told and sat up.
Sanyukta walked up to him and sat beside him. She asked him to rest his head on her thigh and he agreed. She was caressing his hair lightly trying to make him sleep.


Sanyukta thought Ranveer would like to know more about his dad and so she decided to tell him something about Randhir. Her thoughts searched for the best memory and they finally found it. *The first time they had ever gone on a date.*

FLASHBACK :-

GIRLS' HOSTEL :

"Dates aren't his cup of tea Kaustuki," Sanyukta told.

"Oh please, I hate to admit but he's good in everything," Kaustuki told.

"Yeah right, I can't believe it that you're talking good about that MCP!" Sanyukta told throwing her hands up in the air.

"I know, hard for me to believe too," Kaustuki told.

They had been in their dorm searching for proper clothes which Sanyukta could wear on the date from the past two hours but Sanyukta's wardrobe was style's best enemy.

"Forget all that, tell me how did he ask you out? Romantically?" Kaustuki teased.

"Romantically and that MCP? Seriously now?" Sanyukta asked shocked.

"Phir?" Kaustuki asked curiously.

"Forcefully," Sanyukta told still searching for ruffling her wardrobe.

"WHAT?" Kaustuki shrieked.

"Yeah, I know it crazy but yeah," Sanyukta told calmly. She had expected this reaction from Kaustuki.

"Tell me everything," Kaustuki forced her.

"Okay, here it goes. It happened the day before yesterday, I mean the day after the canteen incident when I hurted him. Remember?" Sanyukta started.

(A FLASHBACK IN A FLASHBACK)

Sanyukta felt a tug on her hand and she was pulled into the storeroom. Sanyukta was about to shout but he had silenced her by placing his hand roughly on her mouth. His eyes were blood red as if he hadn't slept the previous night but instead had cried.

"Randhir..." was all she managed to say.

He left her after making sure she wouldn't run away and silently bolted the door. He came back to where she was standing.

"Randhir I wanted to apologize for yesterday's incident. I didn't mean to hu-" she started but she was interrupted.

"SHUT UP," he caught her hand furiously, "What do you think of yourself haan? You can anything whenever you want to or apologize when ever you want to? Look Sanyukta be in your limits. You don't actually know anything about my family or my mom or any other goddamn freaking person so just stay in your limits," he told furiously.

"Randhir I know I was wrong and I apologize, I don't how I lost control yesterday and I am really sorry about it," she told, "I will do anything for you to forgive me."

"Really? Anything?" he told mischievously.

"Yeah," she told determined. She wanted him to forgive her at any cost.

"Okay. So go on a date with me," he told.

"WH...WHAT?" she managed to tell. She was utterly surprised.

"Yes and I am serious," he told reading her expressions.

"What? No," she told or rather shouted.

"Alright, forget about your apology then," he replied.

"But..." she trailed off.

"A date with me and your apology will be accepted or nothing at all," he told calmly.

"A date? With you?" she told and gulped hard.

"You must be happy Aggarwal," he started, "girls die for this chance but its okay if you're scared."

This was it.

"Scared and me? Dream on Shekhawat, I'll come for sure," she retorted back, "make sure it's worthy enough."

"You'll see that, day after tomorrow then. Sunday! I will not miss classes for you obviously," he told and went out of the room without waiting for her reply.

(A FLASHBACK IN A FLASHBACK ENDS)

"Woah! Now that is the Randhir I know," Kaustuki exclaimed, "but you agreed? Why? I mean how? You're giving away your first date to your mortal enemy?"

"I had to. Two reasons. One, I wanted him to forgive me. Two, he called me a darpok! How dare he?" Sanyukta shouted.

Kaustuki laughed and went back searching for clothes.

"I have to look good tomorrow Kaustuki! Do something," Sanyukta told.

"God Sanyukta there's nothing in here for you to look good," Kaustuki told and placed a hand on her forehead, "Wear my clothes. You don't have anything."

Sanyukta nodded her head in reply and looked at Kaustuki who was going to her wardrobe to search for something.

After an hour of searching and rejecting drama,

"I GOT IT," Kaustuki shouted, "I got a perfect dress for you."

"Can I see it?" Sanyukta asked.

"I'm not listening to you, wear it and come," Kaustuki told and pushed her into the washroom.

After 5 minutes...

"It's too short Kaustuki! Give me something else," Sanyukta shouted from the washroom.

"Come out," Kaustuki replied.

Sanyukta came out and asked Kaustuki for her opinion. Kaustuki was shocked at the beauty standing in front of her.

"I wish I were Randhir," Kaustuki exclaimed, "Its beautiful Sanyu, you have to wear this only now. No buts, you have to wear this ONLY and I'll do your make up in the morning." Kaustuki decided. Sanyukta knew she had no other go but listen to her bestie. She agreed and went to the washroom to change back. After coming out she noticed a box beautifully wrapped with a purple paper.

"Kaustuki?" she asked pointing out at the box.

"It's for you; the warden came and gave it to me when you were in the washroom. Anonymous btw," she replied.

Sanyukta picked up the box which had a letter on the top which read, "To Sanyukta."

She opened it and found a letter in it. It read, "Hey farzi, I know you and dates are old enemies and you and getting dressed are poles which are never attracted so I got this for you. Wear this tomorrow. I reduced a headache for you, didn't I? You're welcome. Anyways, meet me at the entrance gate tomorrow morning sharp at 7.00am. I hope you know am' means morning. Don't you dare be late and yeah give the permission letter to the watchman before coming out. Don't sneak out. The permission letter is inside the box.

Please make yourself presentable.

P.S. Leave your hair open. I like them that way. DON'T BE LATE."

Sanyukta was shocked. Her mind revolved only around the last line, "Leave your hair open. I like them that way." Those words were revolving in her mind continuously. Meanwhile, Kaustuki had taken the letter from her and read it.

"Morning? At 7.00am? Who goes on a date at 6 in the morning? And he sent a dress? This is the limit now. All my efforts go futile now? I hate him," Kaustuki told angrily.

Sanyukta wasn't even listening to her. She was still thinking about the last line. In reflex, her hands went up to her hair and she held them lightly.

"Hmm..." she replied.

"SANYUKTA," Kaustuki told and shook her breaking her trance, "Let's see the dress now. I'm sure he had sent something real baa... It is so beautiful."

The minute they saw the dress they had to shut their mouths. It was beautiful. He had sent a light blue jeans and a different colored striped butterfly top. He had also sent a silver plain necklace with a butterfly pendant and a fat silver bracelet. "His choice is Perfect," they thought. Kaustuki forced her to go and change. Sanyukta came out looking beautiful. It wasn't a date-type dress but it looked perfect on her. It was the perfect size. Both the girls wondered how he had bought the perfect size for her without even consulting her once.

Sanyukta was very happy. She changed back and put the clothes neatly in box and went to sleep. She had to look good tomorrow. Kaustuki on the other hand was really angry that all her efforts went futile but she was happy that Sanyukta was happy. Only one question bothered her, "On the first place why Randhir, out of all people had asked her out and why is Sanyukta so bothered about looking good tomorrow? Is something going on?" She slept with all these thoughts in her mind waiting for tomorrow and praying that her bestfriend will be okay, she knew Randhir was a nice guy at heart but she was scared and so was Sanyukta.

MORNING :

Randhir was pacing here and there. He was angry! He had told her to be there at the entrance sharp at 7, it was 7.15 and she hasn't turned up yet! "Did she ditch me?" he thought, " If she has ten she will have to pay bad for th... Whoa! She looks hot!" and he mentally kicked himself for thinking so. "Did I just call her hot? Her? That one?" he thought but he had to admit she was looking smokin' hot in the dress he had gifted her! He wanted to taunt her but he remembered that he was on a date.

The minute she approached him he mouthed a beautiful and she smiled.

"So are we walking?" Sanyukta told mocking him.

"Nope! Close your eyes!" Randhir replied placing his hands on her eyes and leading her.

After a while, "Surprise!" he shouted.

He had bought her to the backside of the college where stood a magnificent bike. "Burn" was etched on it. It was indeed that. It was hot piece and mixture of Red and Black color!

"Whoa!" she told, "this is?"

"Mine! I modified a Yamaha R15 in Feroz chacha's garage!" he told proudly.

She was indeed surprised; she loved every inch of the bike!

He got on and asked her to sit behind him.

"So this is why he sent the dress," she thought.

He, as though reading her thoughts replied, "No farzi! There's more behind that dress! Now hold on, will you? I don't want you to fall out," he teased her and zoomed off.

Silence. They hadn't spoken a word the whole time. He stopped after 15minutes and asked her to blindfold herself PROPERLY. She agreed without even uttering even a word as when he previously closed her eyes he had given her a pleasant surprise! He drove for another 5minutes and stopped. He helped her down and asked her not to move an inch! He parked the bike and came back to her. He held her hand lightly and led the way.

"Open the blindfold farzi," he told. She opened it and was dismayed at what she saw.

"What's this? Where have you bought me? This place is not meant for dates I presume," she told angrily.

"Farzi, Trust me! This will be the best day of your life," he told.

"In your dreams! You don't even know where to take a girl on a date!" she told.

He just smiled and asked her to follow him and she did the same. They reached the corner of the small field where a small room stood. He went inside and bought two military jackets. He asked her to wear one. After dressing he applied a little bit of grease on her cheeks and on himself too. She didn't argue because she loved grease. He signaled her to wait and went somewhere. He came back after 10minutes and asked her to follow him. They entered in through a small door and Sanyukta shrieked!

"OMG! This is?" she asked extremely excited.

"Yeah... The whole thing is ours," he told.

He had bought her to a junkyard where all the old irreparable cars and big broken heavy parts of trucks, cars and lorries were present. She was gazing at them wondering, "Why he had bought her to this place, they don't even look irreparable?" Meanwhile, Randhir went to a side and bought a roller.

"What is that?" she asked.

"Don't tell me you thought that we are going to repair these," he told teasing her.

"Then?" Sanyukta asked confused.

"Didn't you watch ek main aur ek tu'," he asked.

She was shocked. From the day she had watched the movie she was dying to this, it was her dream. Her mortal enemy is going to fulfill her dream? Really?

She pushed her thoughts away and jumped in the roller beside Randhir. They didn't leave even a single part they rolled on everything breaking them.

After an hour of breaking, rolling and giggling they came out totally messy. Sanyukta had to admit it was indeed the best time she ever had. She never noticed this fun side of Randhir. She was happily surprised.

"Randhir beta maza aaya?" a man came and asked.

"I think?" Randhir told looking at Sanyukta waiting for her answer. She didn't reply. She was busy staring at him.

"Farzi?" Randhir told and snapped his fingers in front of her face breaking her trance.

"Haan bohot maza aaya!" Sanyukta told and smiled her widest.

"Main ye rakhke aata hoon," Randhir told and took out his jacket and helped hers down.

After Randhir left,

"Bohot accha ladka hai," that man told.

"Haan jaanti hoon. Par ye sab?" Sanyukta asked.

"Main Feroz ka bhai hoon," he man started but he was interrupted.

"Woh garage wale uncle?" Sanyukta asked. Randhir had once told her about where he had spent his holidays by mistake and that never left her mind.

"Haan beta," he told and continued, "Randhir beta jabhi gussa hote the yahaan pe aake apna saara gussa nikaal dete the, inn machines pe! Par aaj tak woh kabhi bhi kisi ko yahaan leke nahi aate the. Yeh pehli baar hai."

"Pehli baar?" Sanyukta asked more to herself.

"Haan beta," the man told and left.

Randhir and Sanyukta reached the place where the bike was parked.

"Tum mujhe yahaan kyu leke aaye?" Sanyukta asked.

"I love breaking things instead of mending them, sometimes. Mujhe laga you might enjoy it too and see, you did," Randhir told and sat on the bike.

"Baitho!" Randhir told.

"Oh haan," Sanyukta told and sat behind him.

He started driving.

"Bola na Farzi, this will be the best day of your life!" he told.
"Hmm," She replied. She was lost in her thoughts. "Am I really enjoying? Why am I feeling so plush and happy? Shouldn't I be fidgety and edgy?" she thought.

Randhir had called out her name for the fourth time now!
"SANYUKTA!" he shouted breaking her trance finally.
"Huh!?" she exclaimed.
"Kaha khoyi ho? Hold on to me! The road isn't good from here," he told.
"Uhh...okay!" Sanyukta told and slid her hands on his waist lost in her own thoughts.
Randhir was shocked. "Did she really slide her hands over my waist?" he thought.
"Situation ka advantage le rahi ho?" he told and smirked.
"What!?" she replied and then she realised the answer herself and immediately pulled her hands back. She realised it was a bad move as the bike jerked and she fell on Randhir and that made her clutch him even tighter.
She was embarrased and he smirked.
"Pakad lo, taunt nahi karunga!" Randhir told.
She caught him. Mnay people in the college told her that he had an awesome body and now she was feeling that body. Ah. She was happy. She smiled. Randhir noticed that and he smiled too.

"Umm...Randhir? Where are we going? Are we not going back to college?" she asked.

"Nope, we aren't!" he told cheerfully.

After 10mins...

He stopped the bike and they got down.

"Hum kaha pe hain?" she asked.

"On earth!" he replied near her ear which made her shiver.

"Randhir!" she told.

"Okay okay, chalo. Bhook lagi hai!" he told and fondled his stomach.

Randhir led the way and Sanyukta followed. He had brought her to a dhaba. It was a clean, small place. Wooden benches kept here and there for people to sit on.

"Kya khaogi?" he asked.

"Umm...kya milta hai yaha pe? she asked.

"Sab kuch desi!" he told proudly.

"Umm...I don't know! Tum order karo!" she told.

"Tum ladkiya kuch bhi apne aap nahi karsakti!" he told and slapped his forehead.

This sentence earned him a light punch from Sanyukta.

"Accha okay, sorry!" he told.

"Better!" she told and smirked.

"Chotuuu!" he shouted.

"Randhir bhaiya aap?" a small boy came.

"Haan, ek methi-paratha with kadai paneer mere liye and uske liye," he told pointing at Sanyukta, "20 naan with gobi-masala!"

"Huh!?" she exclaimed.

He started laughing followed by the boy. She crossed her hands and turned her face faking anger.

"Accha chotu 20 nai 40. Abb chalega Sanyukta?" he asked innocently.

"Randhir!" she told placing her hands on her hips.

"Okay fine, 40 nahi ek!" he told and the boy left.

Randhir started praising the food here and how he would come and eat here whenever he was bored with the canteen food. Sanyukta looked like she was attentively listening to him. No, she wasn't. She was busy admiring the innocent face talking endlessly in front of her. How she wished Randhir was like this all the time, the cute face, the innocence of his talks, the sweetness, the frank-outspoken types. Sure they had fought today but it was only pure fun. She thought she would regret coming on a date with him but hell no, she enjoyed to its maximum.

"Sanyukta? I know I am hot. Par abb agar khana nahi khaogi toh yeh hotness kam hojaayegi. Mujhe baad me ghoor lena," he told and pointed towards the food. She silently started eating the food. She was embarrassed again. He has a good taste; she had to agree, though she would never admit it to him. The food was simply delicious!

"Chalein?" he asked after paying the bill.

"Hmmm," she told.

"Acche se padna!" he told to the boy. He nodded happily.

It was 11.00am.

"Abb?" she asked.

"Your best surprise and don't aske me what!" he told.

"Does he really know what to do on dates?" she thought.

"Chalo," he told and led the way.

After getting inside a small area, she was happy. Again!

"These are?" she asked.

"Yes. You were really interested in repairing those irrepairable ones, so I thought why not try repairable ones!" he mocked.

"Let's start!" she told not bothering to argue with him

"Machines hai toh kisi ko bhi bhool jaati hai!" he thought.

They were happy. They were laughing, giggling, taunting and repairing the cars. Most of all they were having fun! They had spent four hours with eachother surrounded by machines but still they didn't want to leave. They weren't bored. This place had everything they ever wanted - Machines, toolboxes, grease and most importantly eachother.

"Par Randhir ye sab cars?" Sanyukta asked.

"Ye Feroz chacha ki garage hai!" Randhir told.

"Ohh," she told. Why didn't she think of it before?

"Abb kaha le jaa rahe ho?" she asked expecting another surprise.

"Kitne surprises chahiye tumhe?" he mocked.

"Huh!?" she exclaimed and jumped on to the bike.

They drove back to FITE.

"Abb samjhi why I bought that outfit for you?" Randhir asked and went off.

"Haan," Sanyukta told sheepishly.

"If I would have worn that dress Kaustuki had selected then it would have been a serious problem," Sanyukta thought.

She went to her room and Kaustuki immediately jumped onto her. "Where did you go?" she asked. She was way too excited.

"Ummm...let me think!" Sanyukta teased.

"Sanuyukta!" Kaustuki screamed.

"Okay okay," Sanyukta told and slumped onto her bed and repeated the day's happenings to her.

Kaustuki was shocked.

"How does Randhir know her so well?" Kaustuki thought.

Sanyukta was extremely tired and she dozed off.

At 5.30pm...

Sanyukta woke up and found a letter on her table.

"Hey farzi,

Sit up properly. Get ready. I am sure you and bimbo must have spent the whole day yesterday searching for something for you to wear and all your efforts went futile. I don't want to disappoint you and Kaustuki now. Get going farzi. Meet me at the gate at 7.00pm sharp. Late mat hona!

P.S. I never told the date is over."

She read the letter and looked at the time. 6.00pm. Shit. She got ready by 6.45pm with the help of Kaustuki and spent the next 10mins checking herself trying to find any flaws. She found none. She didn't know why but she wanted to look good at any cost but good was an understatement that day. Sharp at 7.00 she was at the entrance and Randhir was waiting for her on his bike. He looked at her and worldsurrounding freezed. She was walking towards him looking like a greek-goddess who just descended on earth. He had noticed that she was uncomfortable. He held he hand and squeezed it lightly. When she looked up at him he blinked his eyes assuring her that she looked perfect.

Her dress.


"You look gorgeous Farzi!" he heard himself say.

"Thanks," she told and smiled which more seemed like a blush.

They entered Hotel Marriot.'

"I have booked a table for two. Randhir Singh Shekhawat," Randhir told.

"Yes sir. This way," told a man and escorted them.

On the way a man was staring at Sanyukta, she was uncomfortable. Randhir saw that and protectively wrapped his arm over her waist and glared at that man. He immediately looked away. Sanyukta was extremely happy and shocked. Unknowingly she flinched towards him more causing him to tighten his grip.

Randhir pulled out a chair for her and asked her to sit and then sat facing her.

After eating, Randhir got up abruptly and went to Sanyukta.

"So Miss. Aggarwal, care for a dance?" Randhir asked.

"Sure Mr. Shekhawat," Sanyukta told.

They stepped onto the dance floor. The DJ changed it to a Romantic number. Immediately he got angry on himself for asking her to dance with him at this point. They started.


His hands were on her waist and her's were wrapped around his neck. They were lost in eachother's eyes. He pulled her closer. Now, they were dangerously close. He was constantly looking at her lips and she noticed it. She wasn't angry. She unknowingly closed her eyes as if permitting him. They came closer. The distance reduced and reduced after every passing second. He closed his eyes too.

The song suddenly changed into Hip-hop. Everyone screeched loudly. They broke apart and turned away. They immediately went to their table.

"I think we should go. It's late," Randhir told after an awkward silence of 5minutes.

"Yeah," she told and got up.

They paid the bill and drove back to FITE.

They didn't understand how they were so comfortable with eachother even after what had happened a few minutes back.

CORRIDOR :

"Goodnight," Randhir told and turned around but Sanyukta stopped him.

"Randhir, you were right. This was the best day of my life. I will never forget it," Sanyukta told smiling to her heart's content.

"I am always right Farzi," he told proudly.

"But why Randhir? Why did you do this?" she asked. She was desperate to know the answer. She knew it wasn't a literal date' date.

"I asked you to come on a date just to prove that people can tolerate me. I just wanted to prove you wrong," he told.

"Everything you did today was just to prove me wrong?" she asked.

"Every bit of it," he replied.

The smile on her face immediately vanished. She remembered the conteen incident when she had told in front of everyone that no one could tolerate him for a second. "He did this just because he wanted to prove me wrong? He hates me so much?" she thought. Guilt, sadness and desolation were clearly visible on her face.

Breaking her trance Randhir spoke up, "But surprisingly I enjoyed the day too. It was the best day of my life too farzi," he told and smiled.

She immediately looked up and her eyes twinkled. She at first thought he was mocking her but his face seemed genuine. She smiled her widest.

"Goodnight Farzi!" he told.

"Goodnight MCP," she told and they went back to their dorms.

Her thoughts broke as she felt something nuzzling her thigh. Ranveer had slept waiting for her to speak. He was smiling. She smiled too. "Arey isse toh neend nahi aa rahi thi na?" she thought. She gently pushed back the hair falling on his forehead disturbing his sleep. She didn't want to wake him up or go to her room leaving him. She was happy sitting there with Ranveer sleeping on her lap. She kept staring up particularly at nothing and caressing his hair. Soon, she also slept resting her head to the wall behind.

She didn't know why but her heart felt light. She was contented.

There ends my sixteenth chapter :) Randhir comes back in the next chapter as this was only flashback.This was super-duper long. My longest chapter till now. Do not forget to comment people.

P.S. For PM's buddy me. :)

Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 11 years ago
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i was waitng fr u !!!at last such a long flash back and realy the date ws awsome...the way rd planned evrythng ws suprb...all total awsome update
Edited by chowanisha - 11 years ago

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