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Posted: 11 years ago
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KR OS on Maloom

my first os on kriyaansh

rey was busy doing his academy work and was not able to give kria proper time...

k- reyyy

r- hmmm

k- reyyy suno na

r- haan kria bolo

k- pehele aap meri taraf dekho

r- kria bolo na mai sunn raha hoon

k- pehele aap dekho

r- kria pls mai bahot busy hoon tum bolo kya kaam hai

k- theek hai rey aap apna kaam karo mai jaa rai hoon.

r- okay

k- what ???? rey aap bahot badal gaye ho ek tou mai apke liye time nikal kr aayi or aap ho k mujhe dekh b nai rahe ho

(Now rey realizes ki kria uske liye time nikal k aayi or vo usse bilkul time b nai de raha hai...)

r- sry kria acha chalo aaj mai sirf tumhare saath time spend karunga

k- saachi rey... (excited)

r- hmm... tou date pe chale... abhi

k- abhi... bt kahan?????

r- aaammm... College canteen...

k- okay...

(now they both have reached the canteen n were sitting)

k- rey mai bore ho rai hoon...

r- tum mere saath bore ho rai ho????

K- nai rey bt hum jabse aaye hai bus aise he baithe hai

R- haan vaise mai b...

k- tou kuch kare...

r- okay...

(and now starts their fun)

Now rey gets up and start singing

oo oo.. oo oo..

Paisa vaisa kya pata
Kaun kaisa kya pata
Zinda hoon aaj main
Iss se zyada kya pata

he sings these line seeing kria

Mera toh zamaane se
Lena dena hi nahin
Yaara gustakhi maaf

now he says sry to her by holding his ears for not giving her proper time nd asks her for her hand by sitting on his knees and she immediately gives her hand and he makes her stand (n fir rey vo he step krta hai jaise iss song mein armaan ne kara tha) and kria starts laughing after seeing his step...
Itna hi maaloom..
Jispe bhi tu sath ho
Bas itna hi maaloom
Yaqeen hai wahin hai
Meri manzil ka raasta..
Meri manzil ka raasta..

now rey takes her hand in his and they both start doing the same step as shown in the song and while doing that step they move out of canteen and comes to the corridor portion...
Oooh ooh ooh...
Meri manzil ka raasta..
Meri manzil ka raasta..

now rey takes a big star from the boy standing there and give to kria while singing these lines and kria smiles wide
Oooh ooh ooh...
Taare kaise bhala
Hain todte kya pata
Taare mil bhi gaye toh
Tu karegi bhi kya

now he does one cartwheel nd while doing that he takes a rose and gives to kria and mouths a kiss while giving that and kria blushes
Main gair maamooli kartab dikha karke
Saabit karun bol kya ?
Kya hai tu mere liye seedhe saade se
Lafzon mein sun le zara

now kria too comes in her avatar nd starts singing
ha ha ha...
la la la aa...

she goes near him n says these lines and kisses him on his cheek n rey gets shock...
Kasmein kya pata
Reet rasmein kya pata
Sachche pyaar ki
Kismein-vismein kya pata


now kria holds his hand n puts his one hand on her waist and starts moving down the stairs...

Mera toh zamaane se
Lena dena hi nahin
Yaara gustakhi maaf
Itna hi maloom..

Now they reach in the atrium and then they both starts doing that same step (armaan vala)
Jispe bhi tu sath ho
Bas itna hi maaloom

Now rey picks up kria and starts twirling and kria keeps on singing...
Yaqeen hai wahin hai
Meri manzil ka raasta..
Manzil ka raasta..

The End

like n review...

Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os...do write more on kriyaansh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
A lovely and cute OS...Keep writing more on KR!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amaxing...Kriyansh os rocks..keep writing more..:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful story..
do write more on kr
Edited by AmarshaktiNair - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice and cute os.
i find writing sequence on a song really tough and you did it fabulously.
Amazing.
You should write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbly written os.
Keep writing and rocking. Kriyansh were presented so cutely.
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Awesome os...

well written..

do write more.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was sweet and fantastic and the way u showed their date in form of
singing and dancing was amazing kr os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS
And do write more 😛😛

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