Frozen Desires-An Arshi FF- Chapter 13 Updated - ON HOLD

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Posted: 10 years ago

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WanieA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

OMG.. be careful...nice update and no worries, get well soon and then update.

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

part 7
fabulous part
loved it
flashbacks are telling about the past
and with that it is clear that they bothwere close
and then sameer came in pic as shayam brother
kabbab me haddi

loved the end of update
hot and awesome

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

part 8
the story is getting more interesting
and what a mind blowing twist u brought in the story
by aarthi blaming aryan to had an affair with ratna khushi's mom
is that true?
urupdates have that hooking and shocking element that make readers hooked with it
loved the update
in present arnav is messing things with khushi
in his anger and jealousy
loved this marvellous part

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: mahrusweety
part 8
the story is getting more interesting
and what a mind blowing twist u brought in the story
by aarthi blaming aryan to had an affair with ratna khushi's mom
is that true?
urupdates have that hooking and shocking element that make readers hooked with it
loved the update
in present arnav is messing things with khushi
in his anger and jealousy
loved this marvellous part

Thanks sweety...glad you are liking it!

I intend to continue giving out the twists in future too...hehe 😆

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

part 9
that was awesome and mind blowing
loved this character of shayam who stand against his parents and marry anjali
and
arshi fb was soo lovely and beautiful
loved how arnav hold khushi in his arms and tried to lighten her mood
by jalebiez
loved the part

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

part 10
a wonderful and beautiful update
soo samrat and la planned up to make la asr gf
really 😲
the negative characters
jealous la
loved the ending of update

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#468

part 11
that was really 😲
was that private number in khushi phone was of lav
and
from the talk arnav had.with la
it showed atnav planned all the things
and ka escape from marriage

i was thinking la and samrat play the game
but now arnav jumped in it

ur twists really make me.more curious and hooked with ur story
keep up ur awesome job

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#469

part 12a
samrat is playing nicely and intelligently
love arshi bonding
arnav giving sense to khushi
regarding sponsorship of college
past hold many hidden truth
waiting to read

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#470

part 12 b
was really intense
sam trying to be near khushi
and
la trying the same with arnav
😡
really did arnav know the true colors of la
which khushi dont understand
due to her selfless nature

sorry to hear about ur accident
take care of ur health
get well soon

put me on board with ur ff
waiting for ur pm