Sandhir FF-Our Destinies Are Meant To Be Together (ON HOLD TILL MARCH) - Page 85

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Posted: 9 years ago
thanku😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aliya98

suprise !!!!!!finnnalllyyy :) :) :) u know apko pagal banane ka bohooot maza ata hai :v :v i told u i had readed 21 parts in school n ab i told u 19 :v :v n ap man bi kai like seriousllyy :v .v kuch nahi ma toh apko pagal bana rahi hu n belive me it sooo funny :V :v

chalo ma apke saat yaha baate toh karne ai nahi review dene ai hu right ??? ek cheez batao apke exams hai phir mera review kyu read karna hai ?? go n study ... jao be a shareef bachi ya mere bectaria apke ander a ge hai o.O f**k that remain me of i am hell hungry break me kaya tha :/ n that remain me of ke 33 chap me sanyu n randhir sarif 2-3 times kahte hai ?? r they trying to lose weight ??*runs away *
enough of my bakwas ab ma ati hu point be i liked their 1st meeting after 4 years n madam hats off to u finnallyyy someone moved on ya mujhe laga phir se same drama angry birds n then accident :v :v anyways back to the point :v :v i like the way they still r after 4 years randhir is sad but not angry n r still sweet with her yeah sometimes he got rude but still in limits ... n the way sanyu behave i feel sad for that bechari (ps se i spelled bechari correct) she is sad na btw ap ye likhte hoye senti huti hu ya u r laughing ?? o.O i wonder i serioullyyy do no doubt u r dangerous girl but is tara ke parts kaise likhti hu o.O chalo back to the point before u kill me u know ma ghar zinda jana jati hu n not dead :v :v chalo where was i yeah yaad aya they way u describe things i love it btw ap writter ban jao na !! n is se yaad aya har time itni late har chap be sorry ka note !! ek kaam karo na phone be alarm dal diya karo na then yaad se post karlo gi n i am sure many reader will agree :v :v back to point again :v :v n ur idea is reallyyy great :P :v :v i like ur idea n the convo between two people u reallyyy do an amazing work :) :) :) n they way u r caryying the secret with ur self :P :v :v ps another matter u know :P :P n aur kiya tha wait let me think ... okay me to hungry to think anything right now but btw thats remains me of u r a ghajni ki...
*runs away*
not my mistake i cant be more serious itnnnaaa lammmbbaa comment likha ab toh happy hu jao another matter its filled with bakwas but that dont matter the lenght matter :V :v
*hides my self *
*the way is clear*
ooo ye choro ye sanyu n uska name kiya tha adhi i think ...jo bi tha mujhe us be shaq hu raha hai :P :P kis jis ka hu raha ib me batao gi :v :v n hai ek aur cheez i like the way u describe the dress n how things look like :P its make it more interesting n ye sanyu n adhi i think(ps i am bad to remember names :v :v ) jo bi hai but back to the point they both make it complicated :P ff hi bohoot complicated hai uper se uske ander loog complicated hai n sab se bari baat jis ne story likhi wo sab se zaida complicated hai :v :v
ab ma apna mazaq khatam karke serious review dedi hu :v :v ps i know its long n u wanted it long na so bardash karo :P :v :v uhahaha wht can u do ?? nothing na hahaha :P :v no gun hehehe :V :v
chalo ye phir kabhi karo ki abhi review dedo ? acha dedi hu serious wala full serious wala 1 2 3 start :
the way u started the story randhir in dubai really chilled out n phir when he comes back to india n when his past memory comes infront of him was really perfect described n us meeting ke ander n meeting ke bad n how sanyu avoid him n especially when she is sad n r near to cry n she control her self this sceen r also realllyyy great described n my best n fav sceen when sanyu talk to her self when her cars engine is broken something like that anyways her convo with her self made me laugh :v :v another matter i was sitting in math class :v :v anyways then they way the story started to take its turn slowly slowly n suddenly vids n sahil ki entry n rest dream team that sceen was really cute n the way u put the flashback in is soo awsomme n such a great idea n when sandhir fight its sound reallyy cute like 2 saal ke bache cant decide wht they want :v :v n u desribe the fights really well too :P n now the way u write it down n this thing make me doubt on u o.O r u seriousllyy 14 ur work is soo damn great n its sound wrong ke 14 years girl ne likha hai if someone said 18 then i had not doubt :P :v u seriouslly got a talent ya parsh ka fever ka asar hai :v :v this full ff is a perfect n i cant even take one mistake out ...
okay now i will stop i cant be more serious :v :v
the most loong comment i ever write bakwas tha na ?? i know .. neend ai na read karke ?? pata hai apko ai :P :v chalo kuch nahi i am going to hide my self because i dont wanna die after u read this long bakwas of mine :v :v ps : its more then 33 lines i am sure count karke deekh lo n agr kam huge then pata dena ma aur bakwas add kardu ki ke apko achi wali neend aye :v :v i know u r like kab end huga ye comment :V :v so ending it :P


now dont expect me to reply to yr comment twice😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Heyy😛

plz keep ur guns... joote...chappal...tamatar...n eggs away😆😆

n congrats me...record breaking kaam kiya hai...late update kerne ke saare recored tod diye 😆😆😆


let me dedicate this chapter to Aliya98😛 for finally joining IF😆😆 welcome her guys...joote chappal...ur wish😳😳

happy reading😃

Chapter-34

The guest started arriving n soon the hall was chirping with guests...

Sahil was already seated on the stage...waiting for his bride...with his mom at his side...while the rest of the boys gang was looking after if everything is going well.

Sanyukta was busy in handling the guest while kaustuki was with Vidhushi upstairs

Soon Vidhushi was brought down by her mom n Kaustu...She seated herself beside Sahil...who murmured a sweet compliment to her...making her blush a little

After sometime the bride n groom exchanged rings...and the hall was filled with a loud applause

After showering the bride n groom with all their blessings and present they left the place...and the engagement function came to an end

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Later that evening---

Randhir was lying down on his bed... sleeping peacefully... Suddenly there was a knock on the door which broke his slumber
R-'kaun hai yaar...neend kharab kerdi' he rubbed is and sat on the bed n was about to get put of bed...but a voice made him stop

S-jiggy?? Jiggy??'
Sanyukta called from outside...n knocked the door

R-Sanyukta!!!' he murmured to himself


then he heard the door opening...n god knows what got in him that he laid back on the bed closed his eyes n pretending to sleep

S-Jiggy??' Sanyu entered the room n looked around for jiggy...


S-' kaha gaya yeh??? Poore ghar mai nahi hai' she murmured to herself...n was about to leave the room...when her gaze fall on randhir...who was sleeping peacefully...at least sanyukta assumed so

She took slow steps towards him...n stood straight...gazing at his sleeping figure...after standing there for a few seconds...she was assured that he was asleep

Slowly covering his frame with a warm quilt...which was lying near his feet,... She sat down near him on the bed...n ran her fingers through his mane...caressing them softly

Randhir laid down there... Confused at his own actions...as to why he is pretending to sleep...n about her presence near him... what is she doing

Suddenly his thiking process came to an halt ...sanyukta had just pecked his cheek...making him go numb for some seconds

He closed his eyes...feeling the touch of her soft lips on his skin after so long

He bit his lower lip...to suppress the silly smile n blush that was urging to adore his face


But then he felt something wet on his lower cheek...just below the area where sanyu just pecked... he witched his brows in confusion

"room ke ander bearish...chhat leak kerti hai kya??" he thought to himself

soon her fingers touched his stubbled cheek...wiping that water drop...

now it didn't took him more then a few seconds to realize that the wet thing on his cheek was her tears...


As soon as he realized that she was crying...all he wanted to do was to take her in his arms n hug her tight...

but he knew cant... Cuz as soon as she will found him awake... She would run away n make an excuse for her actions


"She has become an expert in lying" he thought sarcastically...


The last thing he wanted to do was to see her crying...n here when she was crying...all he was doing was pretending to be asleep

Pecking his forehead she murmured a soft sorry' in a cracking voice...n left the room


Hearing the sound of the door getting locked...he opened his eyes slowly and looked around to assure she is not in the room...

he sat up...and tears started making there way out of his eyes...


R-"4 saalon tak tumne mujhse Bahut kuch chhupaya hai sanyukta...tum aur parth ek doosre ke liye kuch feel nahi kerte...itna toh mai acche se samajh gaya...per poori baat kaisa pata karu... Sanyukta toh kuch bolegi nahi...Parthh!!!!! Ha Parth ko pata hoga" he quickly jumped out of his bed n rushed to parth's room...with a hope to get answers to his questions
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so how was it???

let me tell u

late update kerne per comment na kerke gussa nikalna is a crime😆😆

so plz comment

n i promise...1 update of both my ffs a week... 😛

sacchi wala promise

ParSh ki kasam😳


engagement ke baad haldi?? righ 😕

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...hope rd finds the truth 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
kaash randhir ko sab kuch jaldi hi pata chal jaaye plzzz...
and poor sanyu so broken😭😭😭
and how she pecked him at cheek,forehead..woww😳😳😳
thanks for pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey anu!!!!
Nice to see u after SUCH a long time
Mene socha u boycotted forums😆
Anyways coming to the chapter
It was very lovely as usual...
Whn I opened ur pm I ws like...omg..abhi toh puri story phir padhni padegi
but whn I read the first line, I remembered it all
sanyu crying...hope parth reveals all now
Coincidentally, we hv both got our frnds newly joining IF
anyways I gtg nw
chal bye...KIT
love,
-Sanyu
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Posted: 9 years ago
Who's this
Who just pm-ed me
Do I know u ???

I really doubt who's this
I think I know sumone who was writing this superb fic
Bt kaun tha yeh yaad nhi aa rha h

Seriously mene umid hi chod di thi that u will update
Bt miracle hppns
And this update is the proof of it

Seriously salute for being this much late
Tune late hone k sare records tod dia
Congratulations
Party tym


Now coming to the update
Superb as alwz
It was short and beautiful



Sanyu loves rd so much
She's so broken
She's dying to be with rd
Bt for him only she's bearing this pain

Rd pretending to be asleep

They love each other so much
Craving to be with each other

Slowly slowly rd coming close to truth

I just hope parth reveals him everything


Update soon
Wtng


And one more thing
After ceremony sangeet comes haldi baad me hota h



Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
1st of all ye kiya likha !!! welcome aliya 98 with guns etc ( me ko yaad nahi ab kiya likha :3 ) such a gandi bachi u r maine toh mazaq me hai kaha tha :3 :3 apne toh :/ :/ chalo ab punishment dedi ao ao fb be :D :D
anuuu !!! it was freaking goood :D :D ab toh mujhe apko tora aur blackmail karna chaye to get such amazing parts :D :D hey hey dont give my bechara sa comment/msg killer eyes kyu ke ise koi faraq nahi padta ;) as long i get good parts :D :D i am so dead after writting this comment :v :v chalo ab mere brain me ache ache ideas a rehe hai like week me 1 bar u will give me any part of ur story :D :D i am sure ur readers will be happy :D stop abusing me mentally :v :v chalo kar lo kuch nahi huta :v :v ab ma ati hu point me before u make me stand in the gun point ;)
nai nai wait ma pahle kahna kah ke ati hu then likhti hu :v :v ooo look mujhe kis ka msg aya hai ... ma batao apka aya :v :v saying ke ma ab opdate read karo hahaha madam read karliya kab ka but comment likhne me time lagta hai kyu ke mujhe bakwas cheeze leekne me bohooot maza ata hai :v :v wasting ur time is my new hobby :v :v chalo kahna kah liya ab ma point be ati hu full serious !!
i loved the way u desribed the emotions i seriouslly love the way u write it down <3 <3 agr apke exam na hute then kab ka blackmail karke likh wa dedti :P how mean i am :P and the way u describe the things <3 <3 kidnap ka plan banana hi pade ka !! u seriouslly manage to make everything perfect <3 <3 and the way u started the story was <3 <3 bearish...chhat leak kerti hai kya??" he thought to himself this sentence made me laugh like an idiot... this was my fav line :v :v bechara randhir n the last when randhir said or thinked ""She has become an expert in lying" he thought sarcastically." this was cute yet sad... this part was realllyyy amazing <3 <3 ab me want the next part to next fiday :D :D plzzz na ya hu know ma kiya karo gi :D :D *runs away * *comes back* plzz DL bi dedu na plzz plzz plzzz
Edited by aliya98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
after longgg time mam
awesome update
hope rd will know d truth soon
thanx for pm
psrsh ki kasam kayi agar update nahi kiya na dekhna kya hoga tumhara halath
continue asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb...sandhir scene was beautiful...loved it...update soon

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