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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

hi jigs, iam a new reader of Stripped.

I must say that the story is really moving great

your style of writing is tooo good - its awesome - I really like it

if you have written or are writing any other story, please do pm me the link of the same

priya

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

A very good job of Arnav's POV.

You didn't drag it too much or make it feel bored.

and you added more story than what we knew from Khushi's Pov. That was a nice touch to the story.

I love this Arnav super cool and confident. Willing to accept life as it comes but that does not mean he is careless. He knows when he come across a best and sure knows how to grab it for himself. Let it be his professional life or Personal. He doesn't dwell on doubts and concerns.

And Khushi, what a spirited girl she is. Loved the way she cared for him by buying him the dessert.

Love the way she make Arnav realizes things that he may have ignored and willing to explore more of her feelings.

It was nice of you to give them a opportunity to view them together and feel how good they look together.

Overall a very nice chapter.

Waiting to see them together working.

Thanks for the PM

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

nice update. It was interesting reading the story from Arnav's point of view. I think the best part is that it really shows both how much he respects Khushi and how much he wants to try to have a relationship with her.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Hey Jigs, I loved reading the story from Arnav's POV.
So Arnav went to many lengths to get Khushi in AR. He got lucked out not only professionally but also personally.
Was it love at first sight for him??? Glad that he did not open the information package about Sameer and waited for Khushi to tell him.

You have described their chemistry so well from both their views and your narrative style is so descriptive Jigs that most of the times when I am reading, I feel as if things are happening right in front of my eyes and I can visualise every emotion on their faces. great work Jigs, just love your story a lot.

And thanks for such an early update. Now waiting for things to heat up with the drinks and celebrations.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

Edited here 111480313 😊

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

So now as we all know "ASR k Dil ka Haal", m wondering what would be his condition in the office...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

plxxx continue soon...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

superb..

loved it..

loved the way you described arnavs pov..

i cant wait to see them working together..

😊

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

Awesome update
Mister ASR is completely bowled out by this beauty with brains
Eagerly waiting to read more
Gosh Arnav's paternal family was so vicious
Thanx for the pm

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Excellent chapter...Arnav's POV tells us that he is way too attracted to her...wish he will stay with her in tough situations too...thanks for giving Arnav's POV...thanks for the PM