Arhi OS: 'Why are You always Angry?' Edited by TINA!

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

What happened just now? I seriously dont understand... Arnav and khushi were almost doing that??? What an imagination ? Super

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piggie

@piggie

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

never imagined this scene going in this direction..😳😆

But superbly done... hot passionate n ArshiFul😳😃

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

loved it yaar.it was somewhat hot and made beautiful towards the end.superb

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow that went far
but not too far of course
awww she sure drives him wild
but the feeling is mutual
damn that was hot
thank for pic and the os dear
cheers for pm

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Super awesome..
If possible pls continue 😉

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was something amazing

Loved it

Thanks for pm

Well written

Update soon..

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I. Love. this. Oneshot. Period. In my unbiased opinion, it brings to life the scorching sexual tension between arhi during this time extremely, extremely well. Definitely one I'll be bookmarking and rereading, doll. 😉😳 Glad to be a small part of it!

ps. for u know who:

Edited by TINA! - 11 years ago

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK
Ray ... okay first to T , T u know u made sure ur style isnt reflected but its ray's way of story telling thats evident but at the same time I can see the confidence u brought in her about writing passionate scenes !! 👏
its never easy to write passion and I have always told u T that u r the best in it !! 😉 and u did a fab job mentoring Ray 😉

Ray ... if one pic can trigger this ... then I tell u woman .. pic random snapshots from IPK and start writing the first thing that comes to ur mind coz this is just genius and crazy 😉

I absolutely love this beyond control ASR and an equally spunky Khushi !!

terrific work

I get through those passionate writing scenes with blush, blush, and more blushes as u know jyo😆. But it was actually easier to edit someone else's work. And yeah, of course, had to keep it doll's style. That individual essence shouldn't be tampered with and I tried my best to make it shine out more rather than write as I do normally😉

ps. 200% agreed. Pics of arshi are very inspiring and I will be happy to supply more 😛

*runs off before certain someone comes after me*🤣 jyo save me! 🤗

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

OMG!!!😳

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: TINA!
I. Love. this. Oneshot. Period. In my unbiased opinion, it brings to life the scorching sexual tension between arhi during this time extremely, extremely well. Definitely one I'll be bookmarking and rereading, doll. 😉😳 Glad to be a small part of it!

ps. for u know who:

I cant stop laughing. LMAO EAT MY SHORTS. omfg. thanks titster. u da bes. :)