Arshi FF: With You For Eternity. (Thread-II link pg-1)

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ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome start!!

plz do continue soon

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ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow amazing start loved it and welcome to indian form looking forward to read next updates.

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Anj007_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Beautiful start ji..plz continue soon & pm me when u update..

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Shilpa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hi sweta,
nice start...
Continue soon.and pm me also

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Sweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sania0521
Very good start, and a promising prompt. Please PM me when you update..⭐️
A suggestion, put more space between dialogues or make the font a bit bigger, makes the story easier to read and more people will want to read this promising story😃

I have updated the story, taking your suggestion into account.