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Barunsanaya10

@Barunsanaya10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#821

It's too b great too part of such a beautiful concept..
Lavanya izz tooo brave n loved her for it...
Though I feared dat ending wud b sad but dere still hopes b'coz v cannot c Arshi seperated... But whatever u planned will b best ... N lukin Frwd to read it ..

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anarshi

@anarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#822

One of the heartwarming update vanhi...I'm getting scare of climax, i don't wana think more it just disturbing...I wana see miracle, and Arnav and Khushi life happy ever after...

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soniya123456

@soniya123456

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Posted: 10 years ago

#823

nice update waiting to see how the story will end

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ayaanshi

@ayaanshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#824

The intensity of the update shook me to the core... It was amazing and soo, so... natural that one could actually relate to the emotions shared in the update...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#825

Too emotional update.

What ever you are trying to show in viswa's life, can be felt by us.

This story is ending now and you said that you are going with what you have planned. I will not Say anything about that. You should do as it is.

But I think I will not be able to handle that even if it is a fiction. I can't see her leaving and arnav living with out his Shona. I have tears in my eyes right now don't know how I will handle the end.

So I will eave this story here itself and have my own ending with Khushi still living. Sorry if you don't find me there in last two chapters. I will not read those parts.

For me the story ends here.

It was a brilliant and memorable story for me. Congratulation for completing another story vanhi.

See you in another story.

Thanks for writing such a story.

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Every character in this is so surreal

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#827

very well written update...👍🏼

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#828

I thought Vishwa was somewhat successful in moving on, but I guess the love he feels for Khushi is so much more than just a deep friendship jeopardised by a love. Lavanya is such a sweet soul, supporting him when he is so emotionally adrift, & realizing where his needs currently are.

You are the author of this story & are free to take this wherever you want to...we will follow. Will miss reading this though when it ends.

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#829

Okay,

you stumped,

are stopping to write altogether,

or is just this FF,

cause the former I can tolerate,

but latter, don't know about it!!

I too agree this is the end,

it couldn't have been better,

all of them have made peace with themselves,

that's was the best part!!

Take Care!!

😊

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#830

That was heart warming update... I absolutely loved Lavanya for encouraging and perduading Viswa to meet khushi.. He was with khushi at every point of time and now when she is at this crucial state, she needs him more than ever... And he is no different. . He was a mess without seeing and knowing about her..

Loved hospital scene.. How easily Viswa hide his true emotions and became the best friend khushi needed... And khushi's happiness upon seeing La warmed my heart..

Loved the update. .