SwaRon SS:Valentine Love (Part 6 Updated)

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

heyya tooo gud

love this jealous sharon..

do update soon

thanks for d pm

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

poor sharon just could not say no to swayam even she did not like rebecca...
jealous sharon..
loving it dear...
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm

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@Slayerkajal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Read 3 parts in one go...
Really nice ss...
Swayam and sharon r really opposite from the show...
Both love each othrr...swayam going to propose sharon n valentine day...
Poor sharon...but love to see jealose sharon..
Eagerly waiting for the next update...plzz update soon..
Thanks for the pm...

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shaaz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Lovely update
Swayam loves Sharon and waiting for Valentine day
I liked Rebecca
Poor Sharon
Update soon

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Hey dude,

Amazing idea to potrayed Valentine day concept here with SwaRon..Though i got noticed ur post s before but i was not aware ki u also used to write..As a new writer,ur welcome here..I like the role reversals,Swayam as sexy charmer and sharon as a geek..Both of them love each other but still didnt confessed..The character of rebecca is pretty gud catalyst to make swaron to acknowldge their love for each other..trully i enjoyed the jealousy of sharon after reading couple scenes of rebacca n sharon..I like ur writing @ sharon side to describe her insecurities for her love..So now preparation is all done for the grand confession..So i am just looking forward..Do update soon as ur comfort..

I still have to read ur Other works..Thanx for ur all PM's,I'll surly reply soon

Till then Enjoy

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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Bhumi06

@Bhumi06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Read all the parts in one go!
You are superb Chitra...
Lovely story amazing characters...Sharon a geek i imagined it ...seriously what a concept!! Continue soon...thnx for pm .

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apy_swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Jalne ki boo...awww poor girl sharon getting so jealous of rebecca...

And in spite of not wanting to company Rebecca... Bechari swayam ko na kaise bolti...

And Rebecca adding fuel to the fire making sharon more n more jealous...

Lovely update Chitra...

Update soon...

Thanks for the pm😊

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

nice story line

read it in one go

do update soon

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Thank you to each and everyone who commented and liked this SS.My new readers whio took out time from their busy lives and read all the parts and gave their feedbacks...Thank you so much ppl...Your comments encoutlrage me and make me Really Really happy...Dil Se...

PART 4

he used to pick me and drop me home till we lived in the same city dosen't matter if I lived at just fifteen minutes distance from his house. . .we never wanted anyone else till we had each other's company. . .you know many people thought we were in a relationship. . .but. . .

you know what four days back he called me suddenly and said he is going to propose her Dreamgirl on this Valentine. . .
You won't understand tilll you see her.I hope you will meet my girlfriend,my love this Valentine
Only these words were ringing in her ears from the time she came back home. . .swayam has told her that he will make her meet his Love on Valentine's Day and then he called Rebecca to give her a surprise and they have been so good friends since childhood.What if Swayam has decided to change this friendship in a relationship?Not that he is her right now in anyway!She is so shy that she will never be able to confess her love in front of him. . .Her stress level went high and her head started paining.She laid down on her bed and went to sleep.
PRE-VALENTINE DAY
"Rebecca I will give you the biggest surprise tomorrow. . .You will not be able to forget this Valentine's Day.I promise.This Valentine will be best Valentine for both of us."Sharon heard Swayam saying to Rebecca. . .Her heart broke.She left the place in silence.How she wished Swayam could be hers.She has loved him from such a long time without any expectations in return but still it hurt her to know he cannot become HER Swayam.
She was not feeling any good so decided to leave for home. . .She was packing her things when Swayam came upto her. . .
HI Sharon!
"Plz Swayam I am not feeling well.I want to go home.
"But just two minutes Sharon. . ."
"Didn't you hear me Swayam I want to go home. . .Anyway you don't need me. . .You have Re. . .I gotta go"she shouted on him,unable to control her feelings.
But Sharon. . . he watched her as she left. . .
Swayam's home
What exactly happened to Sharon?Did I do something wrong?I hope not. . .but then why did she talked to me like that?she never shouts on anyone. . .then what could be the reason?why was she looking so hurt?I have to talk to her.He called Sharon but she was not answering. . .he left her a message as soon as clock stuck twelve.
I am sorry Sharon.Honestly,I don't know why are you upset but I know you are upset and if I am the cause of those tears which were in your eyes in the morning then I am sorry. . .I can do anything but hurt you. . .please Sharon I am sorry . . .Happy Valentine's Day.'Swayam.
His message touched Sharon's heart.She has been too low the whole day.She didn't even wanted to talk to Swayam that's why she kept ignoring Swayam. . .she didn't wanted to hurt him she just wanted to protect herself from getting hurt.But his message made her realized that he didn't even know what she felt for him and here she is mad at him. . .what if he loved someone else he was still the same Swayam.Her Love.She decided to call him.
"Hello Swayam"
"Sharon. . .Thank God you called"
"Happy Valentine's Day Swayam"
"Happy Valentine's Day Sharon"
"I am sorry for the way I talked to you in the morning"
"Its ok. . .but are you alright?Is there any problem?you can share it with me"swayam asked worried.
"No Swayam. . .there is no problem. . .it was just my mood was off and it came down on you"Sharon tried to soothe him seeing his worry.
"you sure?"
"Yeah"
Fine then. . .You are coming to Valentine's Party right?Swayam enquired.
"No Swayam. . .I am not coming to the party.I have a lot to study exams are coming and I don't have a boyfriend anyway"
"Every morning is new Sharon and change is the only constant"
"What do you mean?"
"Nothing.you are coming with me tomorrow to the party. . .Tomorrow is a Big Day for me Sharon. . .you have to be there."
"NO Swa. . ."
"Bye Sharon.Be ready at seven. . . I will be picking you up"
Not again please.I can't be with him not like this. . . please god atleast tomorrow be at my side . . .rebecca and swayam . . .aah. . .why always me?

Note-Next part will feature the much awaited Valentine's Day...So expect a lot of SwaRon moments...Be ready guys 😊

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Bhumi06

@Bhumi06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Fantabulous update.
Perfect settting for a big proposal coming up.
Loved the way Sharon expressed her hurt .But then she cant see Swayam sad so called him up. Really looking forward to the next part.Thanx for the pm and well written Chitra!