ARSH SS: IT NEVER GOES AWAY NOTE PG6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY EVERYONE 😃
for those who know me and my past short stories/ fan fictions/ one shots, i'm back WITH A NEW ARSH SS 😃😳
so i've been thinking bout a new story line for a while and didn't have the time to write it. now that i have some spare time, figured why not.

so i have an excerpt, i would like you guys to check it out when you have time and tell me if you want to read more. so here it is

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FWGni6x7Ygc[/YOUTUBE]

"You know, you would think that by now I would realize that I shouldn't expect anything from both of you."

Her voice wasn't full of pain. It didn't contain any sort or anguish. It was full of anger; anger, disgust and to some point regret. Of these three people, two had been through a lot, together and to see where they stood in each other's lives at this point hurt them both. Armaan looked at Shilpa as she raged on. She was gorgeous. She was caring, talented, a complete sweetheart and she was his, but she wasn't his anymore; not for the past two years. For the past two years each time he looked at her, he saw everything he lost; his life, his love; the one person that stood by him through everything.


So there it is, hope you enjoyed it

please be honest, constructive criticism


Edited by sugarandspice - 11 years ago

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harshiakshi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome intro ... do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting intro n do cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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looking forward to read moree
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Intro..

Could you clarify a little more!

Continue soon! Pls PM me!

- Mrina <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohmy!!..that is such an intriguing intro..do continue soon please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear...
Awesome concept..
Just loved it..
Do continue soon..
And please pm me
Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Intro..I am intrigued!
Continue soon, PM me when you update next!
Thanks for the PM.
TC
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice intro
Looking forward to read more
Do continue soon and please pm me whenever you update the next time

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept dear.
plzzz cont sooonnn.
nd pm me whenever u update.
I love arsh nd I don't wanna miss any ff, ss and od on arsh.
plzzz pm me.

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