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Posted: 18 years ago
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agar tum kaho...

recap:..sujal aur akshat arrive at the khanna house....bauji now enters the room..

sujal:..yeh....bauji??
akshat:..mar gaye....
....

buaji enters the room...
kashish:..charu agayi hai....(and gives a not so pleasing look..telling him that charu isnt happy)
bauji gives an assuring look...

akshat:...bauji?
kashish:..(smiles)...jee yeh hain bauji
bauji glances at them

akshat and sujal together:..namaste bauji...(jorifying haath)
bauji:..jeete raho.....tum mein se akaash?
akshat:..akssah nahi...akshat....mein akshat hon..
bauji:...akshat?...par muje to akash bataya..
sujal:.(interruptes)....lagta hai sab ko hi naam galat bata diya....(he laughs while no one responds...lolx)
bauji:.par mein sune mein kaise galti kar sakta ho....(then looks at sujal)...aur tum?....tum kaun ho??(suspiciously)
kashish:...bauji...yeh inke doost hain....sujal....
sujal looks at kashish when she says his name...smiles aur apne balon mein haath pherta hai...

bauji:..ssuj...al.....(recalling)..lagta hai hum mil chukein hain?
sujal:..jee?
bauji:..yaad nahi araha....
akshat looks at sujal with questioning eyes.....sujal shrugs his shoulders..

kashish:...ap log ab tak khare kyun hain....behtiye na...
akshat:..pehle bauji..(he smiles. and gives a guesture for bauji to sit first...bauji looks at him....hehehe...and thinks what a dramebaz akshat is...anyhow
he sits and so do sujal and akshat...)

ab kaka coffee la te hain....mean while....bauji is observing akshat...akshat is looking at sujal....aur sujal tab se sirf kashish
ko dekh raha tha....uski ghum sum ankhon ko parne ki koshish kar raha tha....lolx

bauji;...to purab kaisa hai?
akshat:..kaun?
bauji:..purab....
akshat looks at sujal...and raises an eyebrow...
sujal:..(pats his shoulder)...aray..uncle ka puch rahe hain.....kya hai na....yeh uncle ko dad aur mein uncle ko uncle kehta hon...to
naam yaad hi nahi raha.....(akshat and sujal luagh again....while bauji looks at them sternly....kashish hides her smile)

akshat:..woh bilkul theek hain....apko bahut yaad karte hain....aksar ap ki baatein le kar bhet jate hain aur phir wohi jawani k kisse...

bauji:..touches his moustache:...acha...
akshat:..(gains confidence..while sujal feels something is gonna go wrong)...jee...bus woh aj kal business mein phase huwe hain warna to bus har waqt bus apki baat....
bauji:..(cuts in)..business???....purab ne doctory chor k business shuru kar diya??
sujal who was drinking coffee ..usse acchuu lagta hai.....and he coughs
akshat:..umm..doctor... ....(mumbles)....mar gaya....
sujal:....(tries to cover up)...woh actually...side business hai...
bauji:.acha....kis cheez ka??
sujal:..um..garments....ek fashion house hai....
bauji:....achaaa...(amazed)..us ne kabhie zikar nahi kiya..
sujal:..bhool gaye honge...(gives an unconvincing smile)
kashish;...kya naam hai..??
sujal..jee....(puts the cup down)....sujal
kashish:...um..apka nahi...fashion house ka?
akshat giggles heehehe...
sujal:....diva...
kashish:..nice....(sujal smiles at her)

.....
akshat:....woh dad bata rahe the k apki beti...(everyone instantly looks at akshat...hehe....zaida hi free ho gaya lolx)
sujal:...akshat...araam se....phas wa de ga..
bauji:..meri beti kya?
akshat:..nahi nahi..ap galat samjhe...mera matlab...dad keh rahe the k apki do betiyan hain....ek to yeh hain....to dosri

bauji and kashish share a glance
bauji:..hmm....woh apne kamre hain hai
akshat and sujal take a deep breath

bauji:...kashish...charu se kaho k neeche....(before he could complete...uska phone bajta hai.....bauji picks it up....and talks for a while)
bauji:..jee....haan...hmm......acha...(looks at sujal and akshat...who looked confused)....theek hai....mein wait kar raha ho...

bauji....(puts down the phone)
kashish gets up
bauji:..kahan ja rahi ho?
kashish:..bauji charu ko...
bauji:..koi zarurat nahi...(he stands up in anger....sujal aur akshat bhi khare ho jate hain...dar k mare..confused.....so was kashish)

........par yeh ghusa kyun....will ontinue shortly lolx..hehehe shortly pata nahi kitan short hoga..lolx
thankx u everyoneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...for reading and waiting and sooo sorrrrrrrryyy

luv ya all..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Farrah jani thats a gr8 part 👏 & plz yar try to cont soon itna w8 nahi hota
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
WOW!!amazing part thankx alot for continuinggggggg 😳

i hope the bauji didnt come to knw abt anythingggg 😉



Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
oh and CONTINUE SOOOOOON soon matlab SOOON 😳



Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
waahhjii.... toh finally part post kar hi diya.... 😉
it was really fantastic part.... 👏 & even funny too... 😃
i laughed so much... 😆 hehheehhe lolz....
gr8 gng yaara..... 👏
plz cont in short while.... 😊 par Shortly ka matlab shortly hi rakhna.... 😳 varna mujse bura koi na hoga.... lolz..... hehheehhe 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
👏

Wonderful!!! I caught up with the last 2 -3 partss.. They were greaaat!!!
This ff is much more humorous...!!
Bari achii hai...
Keeeeep up the GOOD work Farah!!! WEll done ... hehehe...
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
Hey... great story! 👏 Continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
farah yaara bohat achcha part tha.. the way sujal , akshat ki haalat kharab ho rahi thi bouji ke saamne.. bechare dono phas gaye...mujhe tho hasi aa rahi thi.... 😆
yeh bouji itne strict kyun hain...arghh.... 🤢
ab me thinking yeh bouji ko kisska phone aagaya.. aur ab woh sujal aur akshat ke saath kyun ghussa ho rahe hain..me thinking..... 😕 ab i hope sujal , akshat kahiin phasse na ho..kahiin unka bhanda na phoot gaya ho.. please tum zara bouji se dono ki raksha karna.... 😉
dear sujal-kashish , akshat- charu ko jaldi se kareeb lana.. 😉 ab please next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
farah pls jaldi se continue karo
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Posted: 18 years ago
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herez the next part of agar tum kaho......

recap:..sujal and akshat meet bauji..while bauji gets call.....

.....

kashish:..kya huwa bauji?..(tensed)
bauji looks at akshat
sujal:..sab...theek hai na?
bauji now glances at sujal..walks near them..and in a stern tone says

bauji:..kaun ho tum log?
sujal:..jeee....hum log...woh..(looks at akshat)
akshat:..bauji....mein...akaash.....tiiiiiiiiiiiiish eheheh

akshat ko zor dar thapar para...sujal gets shocked...so does akshat hehe and so does kashish hehe
...
kashish:..bauji yeh..(she steps forward but bauji stops her mid way)
bauji:....yeh kin ko le ayi ho kashish.....
kashish got confused....while sujal looked down hehehe time for bisti lolx

kashish:..bauji yeh purab uncle ke bete...???
bauji:.NA YEH PURAB K BETE HAI AUR NA HI KISI HAMDARDI K LAYAK....
sujal:..bauji woh..
Bauji:....KHABARDAR JO MUJE BAUJI KAHA.....(he snubs sujal)..
kashish:..to yeh log kaun...?
buaji:...yeh dono fraud..jhoote aur makar larke hain...jo galat neeyat k saath yahan aye

sujal:.dekhiye ap galat samaj rahe hain....hum to bus
bauji:..BUSS....(he raises his hand in the air....)..aur kuch nahi suna....isse pehle mein police ko bulaon...tum dono chale jao

akshat looks at sujal...who signals him to move out now hehehe

sujal slowly passes kashish who gives him a disgusting looks....sujal sharminda ho jata hai

.....

meanwhile jahan sujal akshat ghar se nikal rahe hote hain...wahin ghar ki dosri side se koi enter hota hai

a man:....yeh hai khanna house
another man:...ap na milte to mein yahan tak na aa pata..(smiles)
man:..(pats him)..aray bhai....yeh to sab kismat ka likha hai...waise jis larki ko dekhne tum aye ho....woh lakhon mein ek hai
the other man smiles shyly:...isiliye to kismat ne usse mere liye banaya hai...
man:..wah...yeh hui na baat....(they both enter smiling and laughing...when ....sujal and akshat...mun latkaye in do naye logon se takra jate hain...aur akshat
ka baag neche gir jata hai)

akshat furstrated ghuse mein bolta hai:...dekhayi nahi deta kyaaaaa....??
sujal:...akshat..(tires to stop him)

akshat:..mmaama jee?
the camera moves around to the first guy...short chubby cuta sa....and has a smile on his face....hez none other tha
kamal....(ali asgar..aka mama jee heheh)

kamal:..tum dono??..yahan??? (confused)
sujal:..aray mama jee...(now notices kamal hhehe)
kamal:...shukar apne pehchan liya...(taunts)
sujal:...kya baat karte hain mama jee...(he hugs kamal...and then akshat does the same hehe)
kamal:..par barkhurdaro...yeh saman uthaye kidhar chale??
akshat:..woh darasal.....apke yahan hi arahe the
kamal:...par yahan kaise? (suspiciously)
sujal:..aray choriye na mama jee....lambi kahani hai
kamal:..hmmm...
sujal:.ap yeh batiye keh aap yahan kaise???
kamal:..yaar tum logon ka intezar karte karte mein thaak gaya...abhi waapis ghar a hi raha tha k airport peh in se mulaqat ho gayi...(points at
another guy)......jaise tum log muje nahi mile...ussi tarah inhe jo lene aya woh inhe nahi mila......baat cheet hui to pata chala yeh khanna k mehman hain

sujal and akshat (ek saath):..khaanaaaa???
kamal:..aray mera doost....devraj khanaa.....yeh usi ka to ghar hai...
akshat:..acha..(smiles sarcastically)..woh...saroo taklu...bauji...
kamal:..akshat...tameez se.....mera doost hai woh
akshat:..ajeeb namune doost hain apke..(shakes his head)
kamal:..lagta hai tum log us ka garajna dekh chuke ho
sujal:..(smiles)..kuch kuch....
kamal:.khair choro...inse milo...yeh hain akaash......devraj k hone wale damad...(smiles)

now the camera moves around...and we see a yound talling dashing..suited booted robot type ka banda hehehe....akash..(gurpreet singh..)
akaash:..(brings his hand forward..pure gentleman style)..hi....nice to meet you guys..
akshat and sujal exchange a glance.:...hi...i am akshaat
sujal:..sujal....sujal garewal...(they shake hands)

akaash:..hey our names are a like
akshat:..yehi to masla hai....(but before they could continue....peeche se bauji ate hain...

bauji:..tum dono gaye nahi abhi takkk.....
sujal and akshhat turn around....
kamal:..araay devraj....kyun subah subah mood kharab kar rahe ho
bauji:..kamal?...agaye tum log
kamal:.ghusa band karo ge to hum dikhaye deinge....(smiles)..le bari mushkil se dhund ke laya hon tere damad ko..

aksaah goes and touches bauji's feet:..namaste uncle.....kaise hain ap
bauji (finally smiles ):.....tum kaise ho beta

akshat and sujal excahnge a glance again:..beta?? (they say together)
while kamal watches all this...

bauji:..aur tum dono yahan se nikalte ho ya police...
kamal:..aray aray...kya ho gaya...
sujal:..mama jee. woh
bauji:...mama jee??....ab yeh kaun sa naya natak hai
kamal:...devraj yeh natak nahi....yeh akshat hai aur yeh sujal (pointing at them)...mere bhanje....(smiles)
bauji:..bhanjee?
kamal:..haan...aj hi aye the..australia se....par airport se hi gayab ho gaye.....lo acha huwa dono yahan agye warna mein kahan dhundta rehta inhe

sujal and akshat smile weakily...
bauji:....tere bhanje hain to bach gaye...warna..
kamal:..warna??...(confused)
akshat:..chorye na mama jee...chalein ghar chalein...
kamal:..(smirks)..ghar kya jana.....saath wala darwaza kholo...ghar shuru..
sujal:..jeee??
kamal:...yeh saath wala ghar hai humara.....neighbours....ab tum log chalo mein zara iska ghusa thanda karun (he whispers)

sujal and akshat look at bauji..who was still in anger...lolx

...........................

akshat:..bach gaye yaar...mama jee na hote to aj to paka gaye the..
sujal:..to phir bhi baz nahi ayega...
akshat:..yaar...larki to dekhi nahi na (says mischieviously)
sujal:..mein ne to dekh li..
akshat:...kab?
sujal:.abay teri nahi..meri wali....kasssshiiish...(he smiles)
akshat:..teri to baj gayi ghanti....woh tuje ghans bhi nahi dale gi..dekha nahi kitne ghuse se dekh rahi thi
sujal:...tu ne ghuse dekha....aur mein ne uski ankhein....seeda dil mein utar gayi yaaar...(he touches his heart) lolx
akshat:...chal try kar le...waise bhi ab to hum unke...neighbours hain...(winks)
sujal:...chal (and they enter kamal's house....)

................

ok jee..to yeh tha next part...ab agaye...kya kashish ghans dale gi hehehe....kya akshat charu ko dekh payega...ya charu pehle hi
aksaah ki ho jayegi lolx lolx...confusion hi confusion....

by the way...woh kamal ne phone kiya tha bauji ko..to tell him k akaash uske saath hai.....jis ki waja se bauji realized that sujal and
akshat are fraudiye hehehe

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