ARSHI FF- The Whisper Valley chapter-9/2 updt page Nov 25th - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very diffrent concept this time .. I liked it very much ... This is the type of the story where it would keep a person on the edge as if wanting to know what's next now .. I like the eerie feeling and this ghostly atmosphere .. I too fell in love with the vally ...
I think that was naniji's grandson who helped Khushi come outbid the fog and took her scarf ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: archmink

Very diffrent concept this time .. I liked it very much ... This is the type of the story where it would keep a person on the edge as if wanting to know what's next now .. I like the eerie feeling and this ghostly atmosphere .. I too fell in love with the vally ...
I think that was naniji's grandson who helped Khushi come outbid the fog and took her scarf ..


Hey Anamika

Long time! Glad you liked it and...
you are here

Hope all is well with you!

Lemme see how this one goes- Romance intrigue and a lot of eerie stuff!

Anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Whisper Valley-2/2






Khushi felt very odd! She could feel someone's presence in the room but she was so scared that she could not turn her head and look in the direction where she suspected someone was present!


She tried breathing normal taking long deep breaths without alerting who ever it was! Her body went stiff with the sense of being intruded and fear was the emotion that she felt right then and overwhelmingly so!

It permeated through her body and made it shiver with a forboding feeling! Was the room haunted? Was it Willow Feathers! May be she did not like her occupying her room and bed!


Oh! Common Khushi! Thats all trash! Her logical self sprouted up!



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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Whisper Valley-3/1




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey... So this is a story with arnav as the mystery man... Sorry i dint comment earlier... But all i would say is you've got me mesmerized and spellbound... Your description of situations and feelings make me feel like I'm there with them... Khushi still doesn't have any inkling about the Chottey she's sharing the house with... Interesting.. And btw i didn't know that you are tamil...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abigail93

Hey... So this is a story with arnav as the mystery man... Sorry i dint comment earlier... But all i would say is you've got me mesmerized and spellbound... Your description of situations and feelings make me feel like I'm there with them... Khushi still doesn't have any inkling about the Chottey she's sharing the house with... Interesting.. And btw i didn't know that you are tamil...


Thanks so much dear!

Hey That was so sweet of you!

And...I am not a Tamilian...In Mirage I showcased Rajasthani and here I thought I would use the Nilgiri setting and so Tamil! I love languages!

But I shall take that as a compliment!

Enjoy and Express
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Whisper Valley-3/2





Khushi walks through the long rod to reach the Casa! But will she be able to find her way back home?

Read on as you walk with me through the Whisper Valley!



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for pms. A the updates were interesting. Love the story and the new concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I already love this place
The way you had described everything I can visualize the whole setup ...
But oh .. There is some one wants kill her than there is some one who is saving her than she gets visitors in the middle of the night and some one catches her when she falls but no one is around ... It gets spookier and more spookier as I read further ... Absultely in it ...nice going
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: archmink

I already love this place
The way you had described everything I can visualize the whole setup ...
But oh .. There is some one wants kill her than there is some one who is saving her than she gets visitors in the middle of the night and some one catches her when she falls but no one is around ... It gets spookier and more spookier as I read further ... Absultely in it ...nice going


Hmmm... every one wanted eerie stuff plus rebirth plus period saga tho I am just trying... glad you like it thanks for all the support!

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