#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

Awesome collab , loved it ;)

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Last chapter 😔..

I loved reading this story, it was just different, beautiful and very close to nature...All of you have done fantastic job. ..I will miss this story for sure...Beautifully written 😊👏

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

What can I say. This chapter is a piece of perfection. One of the best update till now.

You are a brilliant writer, I am glad that I could read your stories.

All of you are brilliant writers.

I am speechless, have no words to express myself.

This chapter contain essence of this story.

Every thing from their parents meeting to their confession and not to forget mention forest, was beautifully written. Touched my heart.

From bottom of my heart thank all of you for writing this wonderful story.

The little little thing you write in today's update was so beautiful. The way Khushi sit beside him all the time, then the entry of their parents and how Khushi give them space to be with their son alone, his mother meeting Khushi and told about him, his secret. And lovely part when lots of dear ran across the road jumping, arnav's apology, her forgiveness shows love around them, and of course their honeymoon destination, all the way I can feel and smell beauty of nature. I wanted to be their to see all of that.

Your writing makes it so real.

Hope I could read another masterpiece from all of you.

Again thank all of you for writing this beautiful story. Going to miss it like hell.

Thanks for pm.

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srilathas

@srilathas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#654

excellent...thanks to all your effort!!!!!!

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1likeNoOther

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Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Awww already finished??!! 😭

This story was amazing!!! Loved the fresh new setting, the concept and of course the beautiful writers!!! You have all done such an amazing job writing this story! 😊👏 Thanks for all the time you spent writing and PMing and scrapbooking😆😃. Looking forward to more stories by you guys in the future 😉😉😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#656

A brilliant end to a collab written by my favourite people here!

Sandy, I loved reading it.

Arnav's Ma is one cool lady. She is adorable.

She knows what her son wants and she lost no time trying to convince Khushi of his live for her.

I was sure Shyam was not the bad guy here.

And he was the actual good guy.

He got rid of the villians, saved Arnav's life and managed to save the teak too.

Ain't he worth our love?

Loved the scene in the end with both Arnav and Khushi looking into the sunset.

One thing, even the maneater didn't want Aman!😆

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Sandy, awesome job girl!! And they drove happily ever after into the sunset. Vaise, the sunsets at Dhikala are quite awesome!! So are the mornings over Ram Ganga. You closed all the loose ends & wrapped up the story very nicely.

Loved the way you brought in Arnav's parents into the equation & had his mom divulge so many of Arnav's secrets to Khushi. Very nicely done. Loved his explanation as well as to why he had disappeared. Glad that Shyam actually turned out to be a nice guy & not the usual creep :)

Now, who is writing the Epilogue about their honeymoon in Masai Mara?? 😉

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: 1chilly

One thing, even the maneater didn't want Aman!😆

😆

I am not able to stop laughing after reading the above sentence.

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#659

That was such a brilliant ending Sandy!! Loved the tone you set and I am such a sucker for happy endings :)

Loved the dialogue and scenes you portrayed! Really the perfect ending.. Great job 👏

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#660

[B]WHAT... THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER? .. [\B]was my first thought? But you gals went out woth a bang. What a great chapter it was. Not only was there a proposal, meeting of his parents , the father son reconciliation but a shock at the end. Shyam was a good guy!

Loved the way these two got together, Arnav proposing, after their confession of love left behind which still burns bright today.

THANK YOU LADIES. for your story, your time and effort to research, write and pm us mere mortals that you have regulatly updated. Muuwh to you all. 👏 👏 👏