Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 29)

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Pas_love

@Pas_love

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Its been aaages since i last commented...
SO happy to see them both getting over their problems...
I was depressed over the past couple of chapters...But I love the faith Khushi has over Arnav...
Its absolute pure true love...
Im so happy to see Arnav finally understanding her and Loving her back...His possessiveness was always there..Now Khushi loves it...
I love how you opted out of typical 'Girl does all the work in a house' idea...Its not like that anymore but I find it cute to see Khushi trying to do something about it...
and yes...in my mind i was saying 'screw patience Arnav' and THANK GOD he thought the same way..LOL :D
Happy Days are here for them and i am over the moon about it...
Sad too cz its about to end...it was a beautiful journey Anamika..You are one of THE BEST writers I have seen..Thank you soo much for these beautiful stories...Hope you'll write another ArHi story btw...
Love you...Take care <3 <3

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Apeter

@Apeter

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Omg what can I say about the update!!!!! It was A-mazing!!! Finally arshi are together!!! I can't wait for the next chapter cause it's look damn interesting..., please update soon I can't wait to read next chapter!!!!

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

awesome,,
finally arnav is change man...
love all time khushi...
i m so happy for her,,,,,,

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Simply amazing!

Their love, their passion their togetherness..all coming together..amazingly written!

Loved the update...thx a ton!

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

such a sweet update!!

cant feel thats its all going to end!!

Brilliant by the way you are an outstanding writer i say!!

Please give us the net update soon!!

Will give a detailed comment sometime soon!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

marvelous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

Edited by Happytwinkle - 11 years ago

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

So finally Arnav confessed that he loved Khushi. The first few sentences of the update showed the shift in the relationship of Arnav and Khushi since Khushi landed in NY. Earlier Arnav didn't know how he could tell his wishes without getting Khushi hurt. But now after their heartfelt conversations the things have shifted between Arnav and Khushi and now Arnav can clearly say what he feels and why and Khushi knows why Arnav is saying what. That one confrontation between Arnav and Khushi that night when Khushi landed at Arnav's house in NY changed their dynamics and now both know where their relationship stands and their relationship has progressed by leaps and bounds.

Loved the way Khushi is enjoying her stay in NY and Arnav is really taking care of her. I can personally say how overwhelming it is to manage a household in US. Luckily I was a good cook so never had any major disasters in kitchen but for someone like Khushi who has been a disaster in kitchen, I can imagine how she would be feeling doing household chores and on top of it enduring Arnav's amused looks. But I absolutely love Khushi's optimism and her zeal to learn things and be a good wife to Arnavji. Slowly and steadily she is going to learn how to be Mrs.Raizada and Arnav is helping her in his own way. Arnav giving silent support to Khushi during her earlier attempts especially her first rasoi will help her in her efforts.I am damn sure Khushi will impress Arnav with her cooking.

Loved the way Arnav was assertive in getting Khushi to buy the shorts and within a second the conversation turned to the passion filled afternoon. Arnav was on a thin thread of patience and that one thought has really put him in the zone of want and desire. He couldn't hold back and I loved the way he confessed his feelings to Khushi and both of them couldn't hold themselves from wanting to make love. Beautiful update.

So there is only one more update left after this update and an epilogue. Is there any chance that you would give an update or epilogue with Arnav and Khushi having a baby. For a person who was always plagued with insecurities and doubts as to if someone loves him for himself or not, loving a baby unconditionally would be final closure. Do try to put in this your final update or epilogue please.

Edited by psarada - 11 years ago