Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 29)

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Have ready read the chapter 4 times. I am loving it that much.

The starting was amazing and I loved the way way they argued. It was really cute. Arnav is just tooo adorable. Whatever happens I always have a special place for the Arnavs of your stories be it MKM-1, Forget me not or For your sake. The Arnav of your storiea are just amazing you make want them no matter how insecure or what baggase of past they carry. They just touch the heart.

Coming back to the chapter. I loved how you explained the dimensions of the Arshi relationship. Khushi is also cery cute the way she doesn't know how to do chores it sweet. I loved how khushi understands Arnav better now, that is expresses his feelings through actions not words. And is scared of losing and being hurt again.

The argument about the shorts are just too cut and adorable.

But the thing that made my breathe stop literally was when Arnav finally confessed. It made my heartbeat fast. Hats-Off for that. It was so brilliantly written. I was in awe for the next 3times I read the chapter. You really put emotions in the chapters. And the last line was well beyond amazing. It was just tpo good.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

at last the time to make both of them to make each other theirs...awesome

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Arilip

@Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Don't u know u could get killed for stopping where u did...😉

Anyway awesome chapter worth the wait...

The slow n steady rebuild of their relation was good but the spark was also much needed...

I had a laugh imagining khushi struggling to do the basic household chores😆

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@mu12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

i didn't expect arna 's confession this early
ya what is left kushi got all symbols that he love her
again a nice part
awesome work
i liked the short dress conversation ...but have a doubt is it look good with her leg

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muskaansobti

@muskaansobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Awesome update...loved it ...amazinggg
haye hw sweetly he sd I lv u...amazingly...n at last wen he sd screw d patience
plz update soon

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

OMG OMG OMG
HE CONFESSED ???
I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS *pinches myself*
I've been waiting for this for ages now :')
I love love love he takes care of her!
this khushi is my favorite !!
such sweetheart she is and a baby at the same time
you updated this chapter ages..u know that right?
can't wait for the next update!
please make it fast

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kritash

@kritash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

awesome.
one of the best updates.
loved it.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

loved the update👏
really glad to see them happy

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lujainshaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Amazing update 😃 Khushi being herself had NY darshan 😆 Truly her communication skills are bestest 😉 Talking wid American couple as though long lost friends 😊 Six years and Arnav is not friends with Aman 😆 Khushi is really a cute chatter box 😳 Arnav's attempt to relish different cuisines with her accomplished really well 😊 Personally even I LOVE falafel wrap 😳 Spending quality time couldnt be better than theirs by enjoying evenings together 😊 However keeping her busy at home is a task 😆 Still she is trying to learn things...especially cooking...Their arguements can never end..can they??? 😉 Cherry on top is the bold nature of Arnav...that too publically 😉 After seeing a red Khushi he is bound to be AFFECTED 😳 Khushi's try to argue with him regarding the wall was futile too...but it had better after effects ☺️ Screw patience truly 😳 😉 Cant wait for the update now...

P.S. Would really love to see Khushi's cooking skills atleast once before epilogue 😊 and their kid too...Hope u accept the request dear...waiting to read more 😊