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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
After every part you leave one desiring for more
Sad that just one more chapter and epilogue left
Thanks for the beautiful story

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing updates anon...
You know lot about NY... looks like you have been there... everything was so perfectly described about the place, food, tourist, everything... Just Superb..!!

khushi's observation about her husband is so apt... she knew what is coming even before he opens his mouth...
hmm... her husband and his talking skills rather Raizada rules :
Heads, I Win..!! Tails, you loose..!!
Right khushi, he is not successful businessman just like that...
Gone NY darshan down the drain... nevermind she can still claim her tour time if not money he'll pay her happily and blissfully...
Screw patience..!! hehe
good going Arnavji and she never expected any patience from you either, neither do we... just to be clear...

His incredulous expression when she said Aman is friend... Six years and he didn't know anything about Aman apart from a well qualified employee... and for khushi few hours are enough... loved him beaming at the fact that they spoke about him, only him...

Loved the contrasts... when she was behaving childlike he was guardian... and when he needed she played mum... They are perfect.!!
Ohh... so she did eat that halwa i thought only he suffered... and she do realised he has been the best husband since then...
Loved her efforts to do daily chores... poor girl she was missing Hp and Op... and amuse looking Arnavji was not helping her plight either...

Now why is buaji still angry..?? if khushi is her daughter, he is her son as well and mistakes happens... if she can let go of her titaliya's faults, why can't spare him... This is wrong buaji...

Well I trust Karan to try and understand things about whole accident fiasco and Arnav's absence... he had seen and observed Arnav better to judge him otherwise... By the way what about his wedding..?? Poor Karan chachu let him settle okay.

Loved their argument on wearing shorts, and his answer to her... flustered khushi and loosing patience Arnav... Nice..!!

And that photo wall convo was awesome... she thought she can actually bite him, unaware he is a tough nut once in his elements... Poor Ladoo, payback and all... and she had to pay instead... hehe

God... but he did confessed finally and he mean it by his whole being, his every pore... Superb..!!
And what followed was bliss... i was waiting for him to screw patience and intend some gutter... enough of playing saint Arnavji...

loved the updates anon...
Shit this is coming to an end... just two more chapters... what will i do then..??
I know CLG is there... but Arnav is Arnav yaar, i'll miss him...
you are planning more with Arnav and khushi aren't you..??
Thank you so much for writing and sharing...
Love you :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav took her around NYC doing all the touristy things. So sweet. He's trying to make up for everything he did by doing whatever she wants to do while keeping her health under consideration.

He even answered questions regarding the picture wall. And he said his feelings aloud.
Edited by badfaith4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow what a wonderful update...
Arnav here was true to his thoughts that he was going to give his full heart, mind and soul to make his insecurities and guilt to subside and make the marriage work...and he is really doing a tremendous job this time 2 make things alright...

the biggest USP of this update was that both Arnav and Khushi were cuteness personified here...loved the way you had emoted their daily routines, their care for each other...Arnav's naughty side and also Khushi's attempt 2 to an ideal home maker...

when she menioned ab Al Amore's meaning why did she forget 2 mention abt meaning of tesoro..?wow he finally got a very subtle but beautifully described confession from Arnav and the final part was awesome...

oh no the story is going 2 near its end..😭
this was a wonderful story which i never wanted it 2 end...but 2 compensate can you start next in series of MKM?

anyway will eagerly wait for the next update...
update soon...
Edited by Ashavi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
abhi yaad aaya... almost 2 aur pori ho gai.. actually these were nt in my list u askd fr... bt kabhi kisi comment me ichcha to ki thi :)

so khushi putting arnav to sleep... threading her fingers in his hair... was one...
n i love her way of getting him out of his alcohol addiction :)

n if nt arnav, chalo khushi ne to use khana khilaya... :) ... so i wud consider tht done too :) :)


Edited by tanu3579 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whoa...finally, he accepts...whoosh...pata nahin Khushi zyada khush hai ya main...mujhe doubt hai main hi hoon...heeheehee...😆...oh-so-beautifully depicted darling!!! The confession handled amazingly well...lovely chapter, sorry for the short reply...a lil short on time...padhne mein itna time jo bitaatay hain...next chappie will give a more detailed reply...keep up the good work darling...be blessed always too...😳 Don't forget...pat on the back...alil huggy...alil kissy on ur cheek...☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update glad finally Arnav said I luv u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Slowly emerged realization but beautiful..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...loved their confessions...it was high time that they speak normally and communicate...it was nice to see...
so looking forward to see some cozy moments between the couple...a date, a short dress, a teasing hubby, a shyly seductive wife...<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... Loved reading it
Finally arnav has given up the guilt n his inhibitions n embraced his love with open arms n a new zeal...
Both arnav n khushi have come a long way in their journey, n this ff.

Will be waiting for the next update eagerly...

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