FF: PAYBACK ~ THREAD 7 ~ Part 31 (Last Part) (26/06) - Page 40

payback turned out to be a gift indisguise :)

wonderfull
marvellous
story
the revenge which turned into blissful love
payback was one awesome concept
loved reading it
the whole journey of payback was amazing
loved ur writing style
very impressing and keep the reader hooked with it

Ok, so now after reading this one I really ponder over a thought that where was I when u were writing this ??

But as u say better be late than never ;-)

Thanks for sharing ur wonderful work, it is also one of the closest story for me just like it is for u :-)))

The title "payback" enforced me to read this FF, and after reading it I was so happy to find that I have come across an index which includes mind blowing stories...

Starting from the prologue till the last part, I thouroughly enjoyed the whole fiction..

The way khushi entered in ASR's den, I was thrilled to read more and finally there came into view the vengeful arnav who could reach to any heights just inorder to take revenge from khushi. Then we witnessed the revelation of Arnav's reason behind taking revenge, the wrong way shashi and prachi used, the way she just left arnav and aborted their baby, clearly making arnav to be justified as the right person at that time. The way khushi reacted to this revelation, being ready for the payback!! But hardly she and arnav did knew that this mere payback could lead to the union of two hearts which surely did happen..loved the part where arnav felt for khushi's labour pain, the decision he told to the doctor which was to save her over the baby, the moment when he had deeply fallen in love with her, the scene where both lost control; one due to attraction and other due to her harmones, the part when they forgived each other as love took over themand the last scene where he declared khushi as one of the directors fulfilling her dream and lived happily ever after with his wife...

Loved Arnav's dialogue:
""The Kiss was just for Starters. The main menu will be served on Bed Baby.""

Thanks for justifying each n every character with its role in the story and giving us a beautiful msg as well...

For this marvelous story, this comment can be taken as MY PAYBACK :-p

Will surely read its season 2...

Love ya,
--Sheza--
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Thank you. Just started reading it. Loving it. Will comment in detail.

nice .. I read it all in one go.. how do you come up with such storylines which are so popular among the readers? 😊

Superb ff

I just happened to find this link yesterday and finished it one go...

Such a beautiful story that was.u know...I read this story in a go...[BR][BR]It's a big one but after starting it I just couldn't stop myself before completing it, such a beautiful story it is it has indeed one of my favourites now...

READ THE WHOLE STORY IN JUST 24 HOURS, A VERY NICE STORY WITH A HAPPY ENDING, LOOKING FORWARD TO READ MORE STORIES FROM U😊

plz don't delet this story plz
wanna read it but not getting time