ArShi SS : When the past haunts (Chapter 4 and Epilogue : pg 12) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Awww...such a nice update
arshi making jalebis was the highlight
it was super cute😊
and that scumbag sheetal...hate her man😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
wud hv loved if htey hd handled the sheetal story this way in the serial...
the way arnav is aware of khushi's insecurites, her discomfort arnd sheetal... n hw he tries to ease it all fr her..
ignore sheetal, their days together... to ensure tht khushi does realise tht she is more imp to him..

fr once i can believe tht sheetal "meant nothing" to arnav :) :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have often wondered while watching the serial how did they ever have a happily ever after as they were so different!
Poor Khushi, no matter what Arnav does, that insecurity will never go away till Sheetal is around him..but even more than that unless Arnav can do something that shows Khushi that sheetal is irrelevant in his scheme of things and having her living in his home is not the best way to do that1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was once again a sensible Arnav who loves his wife and a businessman who has his eyes wide open noting in all all the nuances of enticement thrown in his way by Sheetal and spurning it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: just4this

hi thank a lot for taking my suggestion and continuing this story. keep up the good work hope will get updates regularly thank u.


Thanks for the advice... ! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sona257

Wow u have written a second part! I'm very happy that u.made this story a SS..

Totally loved the update.. Arnav will definitely help khushi to overcome her insecurities..
And I really hate Sheetal Ugghhh but she will definitely bring arshi more closer Hihi


They will definitely get closer... but how? Dekhte hain...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

awsm update dear! m luving dis arnav! He is so caring. Specialy i luv jalebi scene. I really want bang sheetal's head on wall. Thax fr pm. Keep updateing soon.


It sucked that she taught Shyam to make jalebis but not Arnav. Although he did try to make it by himself for her (and failed)... haha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranogill

I loved the second part of the story...your arnav's approach is different from ipkknd's arnav...this kind of approach I expected from the show...so mature, understanding and loving...loved it ...


Thanks so much !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanu3579

wud hv loved if htey hd handled the sheetal story this way in the serial...

the way arnav is aware of khushi's insecurites, her discomfort arnd sheetal... n hw he tries to ease it all fr her..
ignore sheetal, their days together... to ensure tht khushi does realise tht she is more imp to him..

fr once i can believe tht sheetal "meant nothing" to arnav :) :)



They didn't handle the Sheetal track very well onscreen. Arnav and Khushi just got married for God's sake. He was SUPER sensitive and protective during the Dadi track and became this blur guy in the Sheetal-Aarav track. Didn't gel with me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

I have often wondered while watching the serial how did they ever have a happily ever after as they were so different!

Poor Khushi, no matter what Arnav does, that insecurity will never go away till Sheetal is around him..but even more than that unless Arnav can do something that shows Khushi that sheetal is irrelevant in his scheme of things and having her living in his home is not the best way to do that1


The sentiment they were going for was fine, coz wife's insecurities about husband's past gfs is a very heartbreaking emotion... Khushi's clumsy attempts at trying to be above it all was all the more heartwrenching and sad for me.
I believe off screen pressure from fans prevented the more disastrous direction that was planned...But honestly I don't think I could've handled another MU between them...

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