The Stars Fall Again - A Mahabharat FF Chap 10 on PG 21 - Page 17

Brishti, first of all, I could never know that you are writing so beautiful FF 😭 so I came very late 😭 tumi amake janale na eto sundar FF er kotha 😲 thank God that I myself found it 😃 my request to you is: whenever you will write anything related to MB, please let me know, & please PM me each update of this FF 😳
I have identified all the characters 😉😃 loved the names you gave to them, & also the characterization 👍🏼 are you trying to make them Bengali people? 😃😆one thing I loved the most is: you have maintained the Geeta'a concept that Soul never dies 👏 MB characters have been reborn but their basic natures will not be hugely changed even in this Kaliyug version. You kept that basic natures unchanged 👏👏 That's why I loved your idea 😊 Loved Ruchika's friendship with Aniruddha, her reaction after reading POI, her fiery attitude on its author & everything of Sabyasachi I hope you will extend Aniruddha more 😳 also, can you please bring Balaram's re-incarnation as well 😳 A question: do the Malhotra brothers have their father alive?

Only thing I am missing & that is Raj Malhotra's presence 😔 his little glance in chapter 6 made me very happy 😃 you know why I loved him 😉😆 want to see him more 😳 & one request, as you are writing totally from Kaliyug POV, can you please arrange a good girlfriend for Raj? 😳 I would not mind if it is not Ruchika (I guess you have any new plan regarding Ruchika) but any imaginary character who will understand him 😊 just a little suggestion 😊

Also, will Ruchika ever meet the Malhotra family? Interested to know that 😃

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

<font color="#0000FF">You Said You Were Writing A Romantic Piece On My Kanha !!! Where Is That ?? Update !!!!!!!!!😭
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Lol.. Okay dear I will update. Tomorrow. Fulfilling all your requests.

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Brishti, first of all, I could never know that you are
writing so beautiful FF 😭 so I came very late 😭 tumi amake janale na eto sundar FF er
kotha 😲 thank God that I myself found it 😃 my request to you is:
whenever you will write anything related to MB, please let me know, &
please PM me each update of this FF 😳

I have identified all the characters😉😃 loved the names you gave to them,
& also the characterization 👍🏼 are you trying to make them Bengali people? 😃😆one thing I loved the most
is: you have maintained the Geeta'a concept that Soul never dies 👏 MB characters have been reborn but
their basic natures will not be hugely changed even in this Kaliyug version.
You kept that basic natures unchanged 👏👏 That's why I loved your idea😊 Loved
Ruchika's friendship with Aniruddha, her reaction after reading POI, her fiery attitude on its author &
everything of Sabyasachi I hope you will extend Aniruddha more😳 also, can you please bring Balaram's re-incarnation as well😳 A question: do the Malhotra brothers have their father alive?

Only thing I am missing & that is Raj Malhotra's
presence😔 his little glance in chapter 6
made me very happy😃 you know why I loved
him😉😆 want to see him more😳 & one request, as you are writing totally
from Kaliyug POV, can you please arrange a good girlfriend for Raj?😳 I would not
mind if it is not Ruchika (I guess you have any new plan regarding Ruchika) but
any imaginary character who will understand him 😊 just a little suggestion 😊

Also, will Ruchika ever meet the Malhotra family? Interested
to know that😃

Omg Urmila!!! I am sooo happy to know you liked my work. Actually through this FF, I am just trying to show that souls are reborn and they don't make the same mistakes again. Like here, I am not gonna make Ruchika meet Saby. I think Sree is the best person for him. I dislike You know which couple I am talking of. ;)
Malhotra brothers' father is alive. He is blind. :/

And aww, I am definitely going to talk about Raj and name his girlfriend Urmila. Okay? :D I hope you won't mind me using your name!!!

And I will update a huge chapter tomorrow! Fulfilling all the requests and everything!!

Tumi amar FF ta pore comment korle amar khub bhalo legechhe! Nischoi pm korbo!! Thank u again!!!!

OK Brishti, I can understand your POV about that couple 😊 it's OK for me if Sabyasachi loves only Sreelekha 😃 I love that couple too ❤️
& wow, I am sooo happy to know that you are going to name Raj's girlfriend as Urmila you know what, if this FF was true, if all of them really took rebirths then I myself proposed Raj 😆 I long for a boyfriend like him who has re-incarnated as Raj 😳
Can't wait for the update 😃

Chapter 10

Life was never this great for Shatakshi. Anirudh has just informed that he was free and Ruchika was NOT, and so, he wanted to go out with her. Shatakshi had been waiting patiently for such a day, when she could have Anirudh all by himself. She looked out of her window. The streets were wet due to the rainfall the night before, and the new born sunshine danced on the wet streets. Shatakshi quickly put on her most favourite top and jeans. It was of Anirudh's favourite colour. Light blue, and white. She did not forget to pack some white chocolates for Anirudh. He loved them.
She knocked at Anirudh's door. "Welcome!" Sreelekha said as she opened the door. Sreelekha pulled Shatakshi in. "I did not see you in the premiere party! I was pretty sad, Shatakshi Di." Shatakshi was pretty well acknowledged about the fact that Sreelekha did not miss her at all, because someone else was present with a guitar. "Oh yes! You missed me so much that Anirudh forgot to mention that to me." Sreelekha gave a naughty smile. "Where is he?" Shatakshi asked.
"Not my concern. He ate half of the chocolate milk shake I made for Bara Bhaiyya, that too without asking me. I have decided not to talk about him at all." Sreelekha made a face, and turned to face the wall. Just then two tender eyes covered her beautiful eyes. "Who!" she sprang. Shatakshi knew who it was, and she could not stop smiling.
"I guess you know this much I am not Saby." the stranger said. "Stop it Ani Bhaiya. Leave me!" she said as she started hitting him on the chest. "I am sorry my dear sister. Please don't be angry with me anymore." he said, and hugged her tight. Sreelekha hugged Anirudh back, and Shatakshi joined them. "I have got something for you..." Shatakshi said, and took out the pack of white chocolates. Anirudh jumped over to take it, and so did Sreelekha. "That ice cream shaped one is mine!" Sreelekha said. "And the guitar one is mine!" Anirudh picked up. Shatakshi enjoyed watching the the childish brother-sister laughing to themselves, as she longed for the moment when they could go out.
Anirudh and Shatakshi went out in no time. Anirudh wore his same red jacket with a blue top, and blue jeans. He played with Shatakshi's loosely tied hair every now and then. "Ice cream..." Anirudh said, pointing at an ice cream parlour nearby. "I don't want you to be fat, Ani." Shatakshi said, snd pinched him on the hand. "Very mean. I am not fat. I am the most handsome person of my era, the most romantic and the most intelligent, and lastly, naughtiest on my era!" Anirudh said, and pulled Shatakshi closer.
"If you have so much of chocolate, ice cream.." "Please don't become my mother. She used to hit me for stealing butter all the time." Anirudh said. Shatakshi nodded her head. Anirudh knew her well. She was known for her strong will and tantrums. It would be difficult to pacify her if she would become angry. But Anirudh's brain was his best friend, and thus he quickly knew a way to cool Shatakshi down. "I will sing a song for you." Anirudh said. "It better be a good one." Shatakshi warned in her haughty voice.
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Sabyasachi was thinking deep about his mother's words. "Do not get into trouble my child." she said. What was so special about and what made him so insecure?
He tried to worry less about it. "What are you so worried about Sabyasachi?" Sabyasachi felt a tender hand on his shoulder. He turned back. It was Raj. He wore his specs, and sat down next to a chair next to him. "Are you worried about the upcoming matches?" he asked. "I am just feeling awkward." he said. "I can understand. What is it?" Raj asked again. "Actually, he is unhappy about whatever Mom said." said Jeet from behind. "Mom is just worried about you." Raj said. "Quit that Sab! Tell Bhaiyya about her." Jeet said. Sabyasachi nodded his head. "You find yourself a girlfriend first, and then come to tease me. Duh." Sabyasachi bounced back this time! Raj laughed. "You are also supporting him?" Jeet asked Raj. "Yes! I am!" Raj said, and Sabyasachi and Raj laughed together. They hi-fied. "Very very unfair! Heights of unfairness! I will find myself a girlfriend by this weekend!" Jeet declared, and punched an innocent cushion on the sofa. Sabyasachi laughed again! "If you find yourself a girlfriend by this weekend, I will score a century in the first match I play in the coming up T20 tournament." "As if that is very difficult for you!" Raj laughed. Jeet was about to say something.. when suddenly the doorbell rang.

Wow Brishti loved each bit of it 👍🏼 I even don't know where to start from 😕 it's sooo adorable ❤️
Aniruddha-Sreelekha bonding is a very very pleasant thing 😃 you took me to Dwapar yug again & I was feeling like the brother-sister fight between their Dwapar incarnations so sweet 😊 & oh, the naughtiest of his era 😆 really he was in Dwapar & he is in Kali 👍🏼 & of course he is the most handsome, most romantic & most intelligent as well & you even mentioned his butter-stealing 😆 it made this chap as tasty as butter 👏 loved Aniruddha's romantic nature 😊
Coming to the next part 😊 I longed to read a sweet brotherly bonding between the Malhotra brothers as I always love to see the great bonding between their Dwapar incarnations as well 😃 & you fulfilled my desire so beautifully ❤️ loved how Raj is concerned about Sabyasachi, & of course, the girlfriend joke 😆 so may I prepare myself for seeing Jeet's girlfriend by this weekend 😉😆 I wish that Jeet too get a chance of romance as his basic nature is to love his beloved ones whole heartedly 😊 wishing to get a true lover in Jeet, as well as a true family man 😊 & Raj is supporting Sabyasachi 😃 also the century line, awesome, simply awesome!! so cute family it is!! & you got the essence if this family bonding so perfectly 👏
Update soon, can't wait to see the person who pushed the door bell 😆

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

"Very mean. I am not fat. I am the most handsome person of my era, the most romantic and the most intelligent, and lastly, naughtiest on my era!"

^^The Whole Of The Update Was So Sweet ! But Loved This Assertion Of Kanha ! But Can You Confirm One Thing, Wasn't Anirudhh Krishna's Grandchild In Dwapar ? And Also Loved The Sreelekha-Anirudhh And The Milk Chocolates !!

Yes you are right Anirudh was Pradyumna's son.. and Pradyumn was Krishna's son. So grandson
HAve you understood who is Shatakshi? 😉

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Yes you are right Anirudh was Pradyumna's son.. and Pradyumn was Krishna's son. So grandson 😊
HAve you understood who is Shatakshi? 😉

Satyabhama If I'm Not Wrong. 😆