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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

How tragic.
No wonder Lavanya is so bitter.
I think she sees her sister in Khushi. That's her way of being protective.

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

YOU SUPRISE ME BY D DEPTH OF U'RE CHARACTERS...D ONE PERSON WHO EVERY1 THOUGHT TO B SO COLD HAD ACTUALLY WITNESSED SO MUCH ND YET SHE WANTS D BEST FOR D LIL GAL KHUSHI...SHE HONORS D TRUE SPRIT OF WOMEN...#RESPECT...

She'z amazing...thou i really felt dat guys shud have been punishd..but lets face it...real life may aisa thodi hota h..:'(

Khushi is really a pure soul..but arent dey all..???like kokila devi said...every women deserves her happily ever after...:)

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Brilliant update !!! lavanya's past is tragic but felt nice too at same time that she was taken in by kokila devi who doesn't allow her girls to be used as rag meat.. she gives them training and its their way around.. lavanya did went through bad but here at least she in safe hands.. feels lavanya sees her younger sister in khushi and that's why she is so caring for her.. she wants khushi out of haveli as according to lavanya khushi is not for haveli but should be with her rajkumar.. but i agree with devi.. every girl have that wish.. but will wait and watch what fate does khushi have.. she have got her arnav babu but will he take her out of this place as she is his emotional anchor or he will be just keep coming to her in the haveli for his nights to get his solace away from the responsibilities and fears.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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Urvi.96

@Urvi.96

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Such an emotional update!! Lavanya's story is so heartbreaking and it's unfortunate that so many women in our society are subjected to such brutality. 😭 It breaks my heart whenever I read in the news about yet another gang rape case in India. It is humiliating and torturous enough to be raped by a single person but to have ten men surrounding and raping you is just unimaginable. Like Maya and many other women who have died due to being raped, at least they are in a better world now where they will not be subjected to such animalistic brutality. My heart really goes out to Lavanya. In a way I'm very happy that Devi Ji came and rescued her at the right time otherwise women are automatically shunned from society and their families after such incidents especially those living in rural area. Lavanya seems to be protective of Khushi's innocence probably because she reminds her of her beloved deceased sister, Maya.

Thanks Manreet for penning down such a beautiful Story. I really enjoy reading your style of writing.

Thanks for the pm!!

Edited by Urvi.S - 11 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

so bad.. not sure why girls are always targeted..

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

la had gone through so much.. she was being forced and her little sister was killed at same time..!!!!

to save her family from humiliation she sacrifice herself..!!!!!!

i like the way u describe their emotions.. their feelings..!!!!!1

i wonder did kokila devi also had past..!!!!1

they both want best for khsuhi..!!!!

i am eager for next part..!!!!

have to catch up previous updates to.. !!!!!!!

thanks for pm..!!!!!!

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Its amazing that inspite of all problems and troubles that created a havoc in La's life she is still looking out for khushi in a such a positive manner.

Hats off to La!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

awesome one

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Nice update.

Very nicely described but best part they want the best for Khushi.

Thnx for the PM

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ArhiMaria

@ArhiMaria

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Manreet, this story is a little hard for me to read because of the tragedies but your writing is wonderful so I am here! I got all emotional, specially when I read about Lavanya's past! Rape is never an easy issue to write about so well done for being brave enough to cover this issue.

Khushi lost her virginity but not in the brutal way that Lavanya and others did, I hope she can have a better future too.