Arshi SS: I LIKE THE WAY IT HURTS-Interlude 6/8/14 pg 74

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zafi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.❤️

No one in the Rizada house understands Arnav.😭😡

I am glad Khushi made Payal understand how her Arnavji is.😊

I am happy that at least Payal will look out for Arnav and take care of him in Khushis' absence.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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Sravya/Sravs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Res

I'm late 😔 😔

***Edited***

I'm really sorry...lakho lakho sorry! I couldn't take my time out in the said day...I really don't know but this slipped out of my mind. I'm really sorry Di for the late. 😭

The interlude was perfect for the ending of the Phase-1. It clarly gave an insight to how Arnav is feeling, how hard he's trying to show himself strong, how much he's trying to not show his vulnerable side to anyone. 😔

And the last thread was when he's view came and it's know that his look of helplessness seeing the pity for him in his family's eyes. 😭

And then Khushi, her determination on her future ahead, the strength she's seeping out of her to not be weak at any point of time any soon either. It's just her determination that makes her character stand out and be an admire. I really like the way she's being shown here, Di! 👍🏼

And then Payal's, I'm sure she would be doing the bigger role in phase-2. She's going be the cupid between Arnav and Khushi, if I'm not wrong. 😃

And the scene Payal saw, is going to be reminisce that makes her stay beside Arnav all along till her little sister decides to come back after achieving her goal. 😊

Well, the end was the phase-1 with this interlude was as sad as it is admirable. I'm sure the next phase is going to be as interesting as we are expecting. 😳

Will be waiting for it Di. Loads of love 🤗

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

res!
I know I'm late.. Khan pakadke sorry. but I was getting ready with your surprise.. :)

un-res...

Damn! I love you Di!!!

I really really loved the interlude, honestly! The pain and the struggle that ASR was going through, you'v described it in such an amazing way.. Trust me, right to the heart, in the most perfect ASR-ish way!

The way his lashes were down all the time, his half finished BF, the glance to the chair beside him, the hurried exit of the home, the break down within the confines of his room.. I wanna hug ya! Right now!! Thats my ASR, the ASR I fell in love with! And you'v perfected in showing him!!

And above that, the Khushi that you'v described is amazing.. Soul-mates.. This is what that defines that term..

The conversation that flew b/w Khushi and Payal, was heart rendering..

But the conversation b/w Arnav and Payal stole the show.. My eyes went misted, honestly! The way she saw Arnav behind all the masks, silently that broke her heart, broke mine too!!

Fantabulous work Di!

Hope you liked the surprise! :)

Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Thanks for the note

Interlude is very touching and emotional

loved it

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Butiful start of second phase last scene brought tears pl gv som happy momnts hope wil nt dispnt tanx for pm

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

The story is proceeding beautifully...

I m so thankful to u for creating such an awesome story...

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Beautiful part.

Indeed no one can understand arnav better than Khushi. All of payal ' doubts have been cleared on seeing arnav this vulnerable in his room

Di and nani understand arnav but their expectations about his 4 action have overshadowed their judgment.

Continue soon

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Sarita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Just caught up with the last three chapters...
Glad Khushi opted to leave and he let her go...
They all need time to heal...
Especially loved Payal and Khushi's phone conversation...
Happy Payal is looking after Arnav and she got an insight of what happens behind closed doors; the wall that Arnav portrays... breaks, it crumbles and all the emotions are seen.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Moumita 👏

hugs dear...and sorry for late response...i was really deep into my AD, couldn't read many...

Just read two chapters ...I am totally agreeing with Payal...no one can understand ASR more than Khushi and no one can get Khushi more than him...hope SUN can shine on both of them ...and brighten their ways...

thmx for the PM🤗