Arshi SS: I LIKE THE WAY IT HURTS-Interlude 6/8/14 pg 74

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navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

awesome update
its so emotional
waiting for next part
thnx for pm

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kshubhangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Both their emotions are beautifully expressed. Usually, arnav repents and khushi doesn't accept but here it was realistic. Arnav' steps to redemption are wonderful.

A wonderful update👍🏼

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jeetega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

finished both parts of chapter 3. loved it till now. one part of me have always wished Khushi had kept her self respect after she tried telling Arnav the truth after her suicide attempt. I wished she didn't go after him begging him to believe the truth and that she trusted Shyam to say the truth to Arnav.

In the show it was always shown she had a lot of self respect and that was a instance where I felt the scriptwriters completely went wrong. She should have stayed in her stand and not Arnav treat her like shit like she, instead of him, did some major mistake.

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crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Wow..Mou! u hav written it wonderfully! job done really well. I really loved it the way u hv made Arnav finally all open about his feelings atleast in front of her...and honestly tht is all i wud love to see...him a open book just for her and only her.

I also want to appreciate the way Khushi is able to acknowledge and accept Arnav's decisions and feelings...but then agn...like u wrote...she is Khushi. Selfless is wat had always defined her. OR rather Selfless is HER.

And then love the way u had defined her strong as well as defeated stance and the way Arnav wonders over it.

Overall...Good work!

Love, Meg

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piggie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Wow..his confession has left me stunned, emotional n speechless..

Loved the update that's all I can say right now

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PreenaRak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

It was too good. Their breakdown. I cudnt control myself from crying. Well written buddy. Really well done. Hatsoff to u. I loved the way arnav let her free, by carrying his name always with her. Nw both knows each other, without any barrier, whether they unite or not, both knows their love for eachother. I loved it. It was one of the beautiful update i read ever. Thank u. Update soon

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jeetega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Read all nine chapters, and wow! superb. loved how you made Khushi stand on her feet without losing the essence of her character and how you made Arnav regret and understand the depth of cruelty he showed to Khushi trusting Shyam even when he knew what a scoundrel he is! Wish the show had taken this stand.

Waiting for the next update!

Have to say, each of your ff is so different in its genre and you adapt beautifully to different writing style. And that is rare.

Edited by jeetega - 11 years ago