ArHi SS: Captured Together...Hijacked In A Bus!*Completed**

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 45

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

P.S.: Why don't you mention in the Title ~ Hijacked in the Bus

Since there is gonna be Season 2, you should clarify that this thread is on Captured Together in Bus! Just my suggestion! 😳

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Anne di 🤗

I was waiting for you to complete this story so I can read it.

And like always I loved this story of yours.

The best thing about it was, that their love didn't happen immediately. Though the realization came later, when they were made to spend a whole day together.

I was even sympathetic towards shyaam, as you said, love can reduce a man to anything. No villains --me likey ^_^

The proposal was very very very cute and so were their shared kisses😃

Waiting for season two! But before that, I want you to write an epilogue about their marriage, will you do that for me?😳

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Superb ending.😳

Can't wait for the next one!😃

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Anne, what a beautiful ending! Thank you for sharing this wonderful and thrilling journey of Captured Together with us! At times my AD prevented me from keeping a close eye on the updates but I have enjoyed every single chapter and every single development.

There is nothing I enjoy more than a heartfelt proposal, so the way you made this proposal happen was impressive. It was simple yet perfect for our couple, they say crisis of any kind has the power to bring two people much closer that what they were. This story gave us the perfect example because Arnav and Khushi's equation changed drastically, Arnav finally gave in to his attraction and feelings for Khushi and confessed his love for her. Khushi's sleepy confession about her jealousy leading to their shared kisses was both amusing and adorable. The kisses were described sensually, highlighting Arnav and Khushi's chemistry for us even more.

Loved the way everything fell into place with Shyam and his wife, Anjali bringing the ring for Arnav's surprise, Payal and Akash having their baby and our lead's emotional and cute promise of happily ever after! And I can't commend you enough! We had a bit of everything in this story, mystery, drama, adorable moments, romance and what not! Here is hoping that you will write again for us!🤗