Tujko Jo Paya - Sandhir FF.....(on hold ) - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

awesome update dear
arjun new entry...
and vids kamini ... 🤣
thanks for pm
lots of luv
sakshi


Thnks for liking it sakshi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooo ...to ye h dhruvi ka ff ...meri jaan paper kal khatam ho jayenge na kal pura padungi main ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHAK1234

Ooo ...to ye h dhruvi ka ff ...meri jaan paper kal khatam ho jayenge na kal pura padungi main ..


Okk makku
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc updated precape padhne k bad I can't wait plz updated ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gracy27

nyc updated precape padhne k bad I can't wait plz updated ASAP


Thnks for liking it...
Will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys...m up again wid the nxt part...i hope u guys like it...thnks all for ur lovely feedbacks...

Part 10B

Arjun nd sanyukta were busy in their talking abt the clg nd all tht...randhir was continuosly looking at them...tabhi...

Harsh : are rd beta...
Rd : ji dad...
Harsh : jara yaha ana beta...
Thn rd goes to his dad...

Harsh : beta ye ankit ki behen h...vidushi...she is ur classmate...
Rd : i knw dad...
Harsh : wo yaha akela feel kr rahi h...pls u make her comfortable...
Rd ( in his mind ) : ye vidushi ek number ki nautanki h...abi to sab se ache se has kr bate kr rahi thi ab achanak akela feel krne lagi..huhh...
Tabhi...
Vids mom : vidu beta...jara yaha ana to...
Vidushi : haa maa...
Thn she leaves frm there...
Harsh : dekho beta viushi ka ache se khyal rakna...acha frnd ban k rehna...
Rd : bt dad she is very annoying...
Harsh : bt beta...she is ankit's sister...u hv to be her frnd...
Rd : bt dad i dont like her...
Harsh : esa nhi bolte beta...for riya..u hv to be ger frnd...
Rd : dad...riya ka nam leke..u r blackmailing me dad...
Harsh : are...
Rd : thik h dad...its okk...i will be there wid her...

After 10 mins rd was finding vidushi...
Rd (to himself) : yar ye kaha fasa rakha h papa ne yar...ye kaha h vidushi...
Thn he heard some noice near water counter...
Vid : ye kya kia tumne ha??...pata h kitni expensive thi ye choli...
Sanyu : m sorry vidushi...lekin sirf thoda sa pani hi gira h...
Vid : i donno anyrhing...u r jst disgussting...
Arjun : are aap inse ese kese bat kr sakti h...
Vid : o mr.i m her frnd...kya h haa...kyu bich me bol rahe ho...
Arjun : bcuz she is my frnd...u got tht??
Tabhi waha rd ata h...
Rd : kya hua guya...
Vid : dekho na,rd kya hal bana dia h...
Rd : u dont worry lemme handle this...
Arjun : bt...
Rd : look guys lets dont fight...
Sanyu : okk...bt wo mujpe chilla rahi h...
Rd : wo me use bol dunga bt for now bandh kro ye...
Thn sanyu nd arjun left...sanyu went to her home...and arjun too at his home...

Rd : ye arjun ko bich me bolne ki kya zaroorat thi...huhh...

Whereas...at arjun's bedroom...

Arjun (punching his punching bag) : aj me kuch ni bola rd...bt nxt time yad rakna jab bhi hum milenge tub kuch dhamaka to hone hi walah...tumne mujse jo china h wo me pake hi rahunga...u better stay away frm me...

So guys this is it...

Precap : ek vidushi kam villain thi ab ye arjun ki villaingiri bhi aaegi...

Pls do comment..
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Dhruvi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
Love the update
Arjun is going to make a different twist in the story
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
ek or villain???? or arjun kiske bare meim baath kar rahe hai???? i become mad by thinking abt all possibilities for their enmity. Plz update next part soon... And ha, the update was short but AMAZING!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update Dhruvi
I loved it
u portrayed d scene very well
ek aur villian..ab kya dhamake hone wale h
waiting for the update eagerly
continue soon

Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol arjun bi villain unexpected
nice update

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