Sandhir FS: Broken Souls(Dark & Mature) Last Part- Page-20, Epil-P

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anu_anya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

superb update yar full of suspenses it was very interesting very eagarly waiting for ur update kal pakka update kar na :))

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Sumedha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

omg!!!!!
feeling bad for z both of thm...
hw much they hav suffer...
nd update is awesomeee
dnt hav much wrds to describe it...
waiting for tomorrow nww...

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soumya

@krazyinlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

how come i never came across this one

it was so different

so emotional and so interesting

waiting eagerly for ur next update

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samridhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Oh my god... That was so good... Amazing... Thanks for pm...

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--Kkkhushiii--

@--Kkkhushiii--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

OMG ur story is getting intense

And I'm getting impatient

Really wanna knw what happens nxt...

Update soon yaar

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faznasaijil

@faznasaijil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Oh my god... ur story... i have no words to explain yaar.. continue soon dear... its realy heart touching..

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SanDhiraddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

What a wonderfully written dark story. Waiting for your next update. Do PM me.

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Thanks guys for liking my first dark work... i have never tried such work before...get ready for last update today afternoon...

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319125

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

thank u reet fr such an amazing story nd such long statements
it is such a sensitive topic and u wrote it beautifully
so sweet
poor kids had to go through so much
i cnt believe...m still eager to knw why sanyukta did this
aww u brought tearz to my eyes it ws so emotional d scene between anju nd kids and d devil so calld fathrz
hw cud they b so cruel...
Aww poor randhir hd to bear so much fr so long

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Gunseerat
thank u reet fr such an amazing story nd such long statements
it is such a sensitive topic and u wrote it beautifully
so sweet
poor kids had to go through so much
i cnt believe...m still eager to knw why sanyukta did this
aww u brought tearz to my eyes it ws so emotional d scene between anju nd kids and d devil so calld fathrz
hw cud they b so cruel...
Aww poor randhir hd to bear so much fr so long

Thanks a lot dear...you liked my story.

and i am in love with yours...

ya today being last part, all doubts will be cleared why Snayukta did that, why she blamed him for nothing...

t was my first dark as well as mature work..i have always been short of words for such things... and i am happy all liked it...

yup, all doubts will be cleared today...