||~Something About You~||#14 *Last OS* *COMPLETED* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Love you Farah..bas..too emotional to say anything else..will update later from home
V, hugs to u for the link..
Shailaja
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Wow wow wow what a awesome end
Love the way you beautifully penned down Arnav and Khushi wedding ritual. They were portrayed so in love with each other couple, enjoying their wedding rituals with all the tease and glory of weddings.
The dress you chose for Khushi and Arnav are ethereal.
The best part of the update was the saath pherrey moment, it is beautifully written.
Now SAY have an lovely ending.
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
You can't imagine my happiness Farah, at receiving this PM from you.
But The one thing I hated was the word Last OS.
Please don't say that.
SAY has been my favourite story on IF.
Don't want it to ever end definitely.
Now you have to give us a OS on Arnav and Khushi's baby.
What fun it'd be to have an anxious Arnav stopping Khushi from running and dancing.

I loved the wedding sequence.
The banner is gorgeous.
One of the best ever.
The dresses, I don't even need to mention.
Your dressing sense is impeccable.
I've never seen better dresses than the ones you posted.
The lehangas were lovely.
They were any bride's dream dresses.

Loved the part where Arnav is sitting for haldi with his niece in his arms.
Such a sweet scene you have created here.
Could imagine the tears in Anjali's eyes.
And Khushi prancing around dancing on her own Sangeet night.
And then Arnav goung to see her for reassurance.
Loved the actual wedding.
Arnav kissing Khushi to stop her from crying was typical Arnav.

Love SAY and can't ever get enough of it.
Thanks a lot for this lovely gift.
Hoping for more.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Thank you . u cant imagine my happiness. I was watching arshi's love scenes today.
I would like to give u a khushi hug ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
one of best story ...awesome...i have read 'say' three time already..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
all i can SAY is THNK U, for giving us SAY...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Res with a huge 😊

**Edited**

Farah, that was the best surprise ever!! When V told me this morning, about your OS I couldn't believe my luck... And then I recd. your PM & realized that it was about their wedding, I was even more thrilled, that you finally wrote their wedding OS after all the fervent requests & pleas I had made to you, it was so good to see you finally gave in... :))) So a huge thank you girl, you just made my day!! 🤗

And boy was it awesome or what... It was a trip down memory lane with all the bells & whistles... Have I ever told you that I love the outfits you choose for all your characters, especially for Khushi, they're just marvelous... Very beautiful & sexy... 😉

Your OS is packed with all the memorable dialogs making me so nostalgic... 😭 Sniff... Snifff kya din the woh... 😭 You're right, the show has been off-air much longer than it was on-air, yet the memory of those glorious days still lives in our hearts...

Zehra, is so right, you lady know IPK, backwards & forwards... And it shows... the clever way you mixed up the dialogs & came up with your unique ones for the right situation was simply purrrfffect... 👏

I am seriously at a loss for words in which to praise this OS... I had a HUGE grin on my face all the way through while reading it ... It felt like I was reading a new chapter of SAY!!!! Yay!! & it was so typically SAY. You managed to maintain the flavor of SAY very, very well in this OS which you wrote after such a long gap... I am sure you have been told this many, many times, but I wanted to say this once more to you, I relived the pleasure of experiencing the romance of Arrnav & Khushi through SAY way more than the show itself... Your story surpasses the show anyday, wish they could make a show out of your story someday, with Barun & Sanaya playing their roles... Then that would be perfection indeed!

I am sooo... glad this OS was very ArHi centric & the others had minimal roles because I am so starved for them right now, others would have been in the way & nothing else... SO again a huge thank you for understanding our sentiments.

The best part was the way he insisted on talking to Khushi the night of her mehendi... Loved the way he "demanded" to talk to Khushi... So typical of ASR... 😆 But their heart to heart talk through the French doors was simply beautiful... Each reassuring the other... Awww so cute. 😳

Their chemistry, & nok jhok was perfect... Muskaan is definitely a cherub I would like to cuddle... The haldi scene was just too cute with Arnav showing Khushi's picture & asking to be slobbered with haldi himself... Is that man in love or what?? 😳 Loved the way he gifted her wedding shoes to wear as a reminder of their first moment together... The man thinks of everything, he so romantic. Even the mandap scene was too cute, trust Arnav to land a loud smacking kiss on Khushi's cheek in front of the whole family... 😆

Sorry, but I have one teeny tiny complaint & that is you ended the OS before their Suhaag Raat, wanted to see how Arnav would have presented the keys of Nikunja to Khushi... Other than that, it was a blissful read... So thanks again... 🤗 Great job 👍🏼 I am gonna read this OS over & over again... 😊

P.S. Not sure why you have sworn off from writing anything ever again, it would really please me to see you write another story someday, hopefully, soon...
Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
damn u made me cry!
SAY will always be one of my favorite FFs!
I never thought you'd post an OS on it!
I m just speechless!
loved how u included all the ipk dialogues!
it made me nostalgic!.
thank you for the OS!
LOVED IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Woohoo 🥳

❤️ 🤗 ❤️

This is a res 😳 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awww that was really sweet and beautiful update :)

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