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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 11 years ago

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aisa q hota hai Fariji show ke khatam hone ke baad bhi jab SAY ke Arnav Khushi IPK dialogues boltey hai toh hamarey dil ki dhadkane tez ho jaati hai??

It is crazy. SAY ended a while back, IPK ended a long while back but when you Fari Pari merge both so seamlessly, i can still hear a rabba ve in the background...

I love you dammit for this! (It is an auspicious day. I had to say it 😉)

The entire crux of SAY was the baggage that both Arnav and Khushi brought into this relationship. I am glad you explored that again when ArHi are on the brink of a commitment of not just this life but the seven to come too.

Whattay wedding! This is the dream wedding I always wanted my ArHi to have... thanks Fari for giving me this 😊

To me, in my head, Arnav Singh Raizada playing with a toddler with fatherly affection is an ultimate imagery Probably because that is the final stroke, the last proof of his discovery of being Arnav within the facade of ASR...

What clothes Fari 👏. I loved all, especially the full sleeved dark green one. If I had the figure I would have definitely gotten that awesome outfit for myself. But you need to be a ladyfinger to wear something like that and I am a water melon

Thank you Fari for writing this and allowing us to witness Arnav Khushi being bound together in holy matrimony ❤️

Perfect banner La

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

SAY

SAY

Farah...you recreated magic with this story

The dialogues are used in your own way so aptly

You captured their essence & used them uniquely

Each one matching your scene undoubtedly

It was better than I expected made the wait worthy

Red came to our life once again with her Arnavji

And made a permanent place in our memories

Every feeling you brought out pretty magically

You captured each emotion with such sensitivity

A changed man, one that happened so naturally

Above all Khushi happiness would remain a priority

I felt I was a guest at this wonderful wedding truly

Such an impact have your words left on me

Your writing so honest from the heart naturally

The clothes you chose were fabulous really

Each outfit outstanding I could imagine clearly

Closure you gave us & with that opportunity

To write about their life together sometime maybe

A 'SR' a honeymoon & parents bringing up a baby

'Last' should be eradicated from your vocabulary

The endearing image of Arnav playing so tenderly

With baby Muskan who resembled her bua Khushi

Was the only thing that helped him retain his sanity

Through the chaotic madness of his Haldi ceremony

Annoyed at not being able to see his Red, his beauty

While the rest conducted this ritual so apprehensively

Owing to his temper they seemed to hesitate slightly

When a glimpse of Khushi he saw dressed in her finery

Her stunning image he looked at in awe mesmerisingly

Lifted his spirits & mood, a promise fulfilled did he

All the rituals and customs he would endure completely

And fulfil all the conditions to ensure a proper shaadi

He even cracked a joke surprising his guests & family

The sangeet was a boisterous function with all happy

Where the beautiful bride danced as did everybody

Arnav stole a few precious moments with her privately

Shoes to her with love he gifted evoking a past memory

The gesture full of thought, he wanted the best obviously

Rohan played the role of her protective brother perfectly

When with Arnav he shared his concerns firmly & frankly

Nervous felt the groom bringing about some insecurity

To be reassured & her acceptance he needed urgently

Irritated by a ban on their meeting laid down by his dadi

Each minute away from her made him restless & uneasy

Desperate to meet her, he interrupted her at the mehendi

Blown away at the sight of his bride dancing so joyously

Leaving the elders disproving his actions very vehemently

Soon, under certain some conditions he met her finally

Once they had laid down the rules and within boundaries

He spoke to her about his apprehension & fears earnestly

She calmed him with her love, so strong was their unity

They belonged together, she described with such clarity

For him she had waited her entire life...unknowingly

Every minute apart so difficult spent in sheer agony

And with him now she could not wait to be constantly

Two bodies but their heartbeats one and in symmetry

Soul mate, friends and lovers joined forever till eternity

Incomplete without each other, together meant to be

Their union was expected it was written in their destiny

Her conviction & belief in them & their future equally

Made him fall in love with her all over again with intensity

His love for her increasing with every word fast & rapidly

To have her in his life forever he felt proud & ever so lucky

A bond so strong almost like telepathy they felt it mutually

To wed her he would be there he reassured her sincerely

A fairy tale wedding marking the beginning of this journey

The stage was set with the gorgeous bride making an entry

Not seeing him immediately she felt worry just momentarily

His presence he reiterated when 'RED' he called suddenly

Captivating her with his attire looking handsome and sexy

While at her he looked with admiration and so adoringly

His knowledge profound, so eager and aware seemed he

The change in him was apparent a proud moment to see

The rituals conducted with faith and with such simplicity

Made Khushi cry making her overwhelmed emotionally

Unable to see her cry & sad he kissed her spontaneously

With a sense of accomplishment & new found authority

'I love you' he said, It was an auspicious day definitely

For it was when they were united, joined in matrimony

Sounding like a melody, 'Hamesha' she said confidently

A dream come true for them and like me for so many

And with that you left us so happy & smiling contentedly

P.S.~ Thank you Zee...my tomato...

P.S.S. ~ No post on any thread of SAY for me is complete without mentioning you, Priya...thanks for being you ...love you...

P.P.P.S ~ Farah...🤗

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Itna pyaara koyi likhta hai kya?

I have told you once, I have told you many times and I can tell this to you a thousand times over - you know IPK, you understand IPK like no one does and only you can blend that fiction into your fiction, making it look different yet similar at the same time 👏

For the minutes I was engaged in reading this OS, I felt I was in Delhi attending all these wedding functions as well (I am assuming I got an invite too 😛) and it didn't seem like you have written SAY after a long time or I am reading it after so long. Bas kal ki hi baat lagti hai. Such is the magic of your writing 👏

You have made the 'nafrat' wala dialogue as the most romantic one through this piece, beautifully weaving them through the wedding functions 😲 ⭐️ Only you could have done it 😳

I always thought that it is difficult to word the expressions of ArHi as they portray a million in a second. But you did it again! The sangeet sequence in which ArHi were calling each other towards them, I could practically picturize the whole thing, down to the mole on Khushi's cheek to that mark below Arnav's eyebrow.

Sorry for going off track but what dresses you have selected for her! One better than the other! We need to talk about them soon. I want to know where did you get those from!

They are so much in sync with each other, understanding the silence even. Their talk with the French window barrier reminded me about their telepathic conversation during the kidnap track. And of course, you brought your favourtite Holi in this update too 😳

Rightly said Fari, they are not perfect individually but they are perfect together! And I loved the fact that they are falling in love with each other more ☺️

My favourite parts in this update was the brief talk between Rohan and Arnav and Arnav kissing Khushi in the mandap 😆 That was the best way to see-saw her emotions 😆 Naughty naughty babua 😳

Fari, all in all a great update and I wish to get more ArHi from you because like I said nobody gets them like you do ❤️ But I also understand that real life commitments are far superior than this. But whatever you decide, we are here for you 😊

Happy 3rd anniversary to one of the craziest IPKKND-ian I know :)

You did not write a story but an ArHi saga
No, it is not just an FF but is a TV drama

You introduced us to Arnav and his Red
This epic portrayal of ArHi we had never read

A long and twisted journey it was from the start
With Arnav so haughty and Khushi very smart

Both had their own demons to fight and win
With a lot of turmoil and questions within

But they had each other and their families
Doing their best in their own capacities

They fought, spoke, danced, kissed and confessed
And made love too and see how they progressed!

Knowing each other little by little some more,
They opened doors of their heart, their core

They got a wedding anyone would dream for,
Despite this all, they still have so much to explore

The credit for this goes to the author so lovely,
Who knows IPK by heart, our darling Fari

Nobody but you can write best about these two
Because dear Fari, there is Something about you 👏

P.S. Since I am better friends with you now than I was when you posted the epilogue my comment has turned out to be very informal and personal, sorry.

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

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You have the innate ability of blending the scenes from IPK into the story. Every single one of them is written excellently, I enjoyed reading and feeling through all the scenes.

Loved Arnav's patience in going through all the rituals for Khushi. When Rohan mentioned about Arnav's snapping at Khushi and their arguments, that his sister needs to be taken care of, I for once thought Arnav would get angry on Rohan saying he can take care of his Khushi-just for a while but this Arnav is changed. Loved how Arnav stayed calm inspite of the restlessness in his mind about keeping Khushi happy after marriage, he knew meeting her would be his only respite.

Arnav and Khushi meeting sitting by the french door with their backs and their talk is the best and my favorite part. I could visualise the entire 'tum taare dekh rahe ho na..' scene between them, its awesome.

I am so happy to see Arnav's Red and Khushi's laad governor tie the knot and seal it with 'hamesha' ❤️

The pictures of dresses, shoes, mandap are strikingly beautiful.

Thankyou for writing this amazing story Farah ⭐️ Arnav and his Red stay in our hearts forever ❤️

P.S. Vandana 🤗 for giving me the link.

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ress hai Jee...June could not have gotten better than this..Seriously..I finished SAY in may n Got an OS on SAY in June...🥳

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

farah,

WE LOVE U DEAR

you know who the other person is sitting beside me and saying WE LOVE U to you right?

we love you farah - bas I don't want to say anything else - you have left us speechless with this OS - this was what we were longing for and it was PERFECT - thank you so so much - We can rest in peace now - the last part couldn't have been any better farah - the pics, as usual were super awesome -

iam continuously travelling these days and iam not getting reliable access to Internet - hence couldn't read and comment yesterday but iam so thankful to the local Internet Service Provider in ME, its because of their connectivity that I got a place to comment on the first page of the OS - special thanks to Vandana, my darling who is hugging me in the above pic, for scrapping me the link to this OS

IAM LONGING TO READ SAY IN FULL ALL OVER AGAIN - WILL DO THAT ASAP - I HAVE BEEN READING IN BITS AND PIECES WHENEVER I FEEL I NEED SOME ENERGY TO KEEP MYSELF GOING

LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST , I have full confidence in myself, Vandana and our adorable readers of SAY that we will persuade you to continue giving us glimpses of SAY's ARHI (including Baby Gupta's baby)

SO MY DEAR FRIENDS/READERS OF SAY, PLEASE DO NOT GET PANICKED BY THE WORD LAST IN THE TITLE OF THIS THREAD - Farah is tooo tooo sweet - hai nah farah

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

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love you Vandy Di 🤗

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you know what farah.. you made me nostalgic, as if I wasn't already.. but this OS.. I don't have words!! you remind me IPKKND as well SAY, and again as if I forgotten it😳

seriously farah.. I hardly cry.. really hardly!! and you made me... not crying literally wala but yes, u brought tears to my eyes like it happen on last epi of IPK, or when I remember it and missing it so badly!! you did the same yaar!!

I seriously have no words to describe.. like.. I am speechless!! but fir bhi I will say, coz simply I cant help it

oh and before that 😆 you know I was having readers block... and after reading this OS, coz I cant help it😆 it's lessening 😉

okay now again back to SAY's OS.. please don't say last yaar!! 😭

uff, mai bhi na!!

yeah... this OS

I loved no adored, no.. I just don't know, but yes, every word affects me!! there was smile on my lips reading it...

from arnav's adoration for his niece, who is replica of his RED to their wedding and hamesha.. it was memorable yaar!!

loved haldi ceremony... and wow... loved this arnav more!! and oh boy... he can now seriously crack a joke 😆

gosh... Anjali is still a cry baby😆 but love her too

haha... their sangeet!! uff... khushi is... so khushi 😆😆 loved her excitement... and her nature!! truly amazing!

enjoyed their eye-talks😉

arnav... kya ho tum? such a beautiful gift😳 and so thoughtful😳 love you more for this, just like khushi😉

uff... Anjali and rohan... ahh... btw I missed rohan too... always a protective brother!! missed his love and care for his bacchi 😳

I don't like what rohan said to arnav *pouting* but can understand his worries too 😊

omg.. mehndi.. btw, I loved straight forward arnav.. first he oh-so-openly went their and remarkably shut Anjali😆

but aftermath... uff so touching!! I don't want to say more, coz I will get more nostalgic 😭

and ohh... their wedding.. I really loved shashi's and garima's gesture!! I mean, what they did na... not even real parents cannot do... it was so touching!! khushi is so lucky *wood-touch*

I loved ArShi's exchange... it was so beautiful and heart warming!!

haha, he kissed her infront of everyone😆 that's so arnav 😉 always daring 😳😳

very very beautifully written yaar 👏👏

PS: you know what... what's so special in SAY and your OS's of SAY, is the way you knit your story with IPK's dialogue's in such a beautiful way ki... it made u lost!! cheers for that 👏👏

PPS: do start writing more... please *pouting*

PPPS: thanks for writing this shot.. it means so much!!

PPPS: vandy di hugs... for giving me link.. I love you sooo much 🤗

PPPS: yay... I am on first on page 😲🥳

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

What a beautiful and heart warming tribute on this very special day.

You've written what we've always wanted to see on our show - hamesha...

You truly have an innate understanding of what IPK is, and has always been for its fans.

The imagery you evoke with your writing is so vivid. Everything is happening like a movie reel in our head as we read. And the clothes you chose for Khushi are stunning.

This is the intensity you brought out in every rasam...

Vandana, thank you so much for letting me know about the OS 😊

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jtmbarun

@jtmbarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow..that was so so beautiful..It was just perfect..👏👏

I don't know what to say..you made me speechless... you write sooo beautifully..when I started reading..I was in Arshiland completely..I had a huge smile on my face..I really don't know how to say it..it was like magical..It made me fall in love with Arshi and Say even more..❤️❤️

It was very very well written..I loved each and everything you wrote..Loved how you used the IPK dialogues..I loved their conversation after mehendi..

Everything was perfect in this os..I could imagine all the scenes playing in front of me..arshi saying all these dialogues..all the rasams ..everything..❤️

And please if possible write more..Coz you write so so well..I mean another FF or SS..😳

For SAY also..there should be one more part please..I want to see Arshi's baby..please..we did no get that from the show..at least here we can get that na..and im sure you will write it much better than what we expect it to be..Please..😳

And I forgot to say..loved all the outfits..so beautiful...😊

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