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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Awesome chapter...Feeling sorry for Lexie...she has made wrong choices... I believed khushi would become Arnav's support once he is back... eagerly waiting for Arnav to come back... thanks for the PM

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

What a heartbreaking chapter.

My heart broke for Khushi, for Lexie and for Arnav.

Lexie got lost in the search for peace and so called freedom.

One doesn't realise the consequences of one's acts when young.

What a waste!

She was such a good soul and so talented but had to suffer so much and had a painful death.

Life is certainly not fair.

I loved the gift she left behind for Arnav.

The words were so true.

He is a very responsible and large hearted person.

Khushi has chosen well.

The person she gave her heart too, is well deserving of her love.

Hope her love works like a balm to his battered soul!

I don't have words to say how much I love this story, Shweta.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Wow that was a terrific chapter... Brilliant mind blowing ... Way to go shweta... U r one awesome writer... I had tears in my eyes after reading that ... N the sculpture was fantastic too ... Oh I'm still crying :)
Eagerly waiting for the next update... I still have not read the note didn't have it in me ... But I'll come bk later for it

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

I had mentioned in my previous comment that I would comment in the next one for both... Here it is

Love certainly has no barriers ... That's Arnav's. She followed a so thought theory of love rather than her own heartfelt one

I would think Khushi's love would heal his aching self

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Brilliant update. .you have aced the arf3t of writing. ..

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

haaye re I still havnt read and Charu ka comment padh lia galti se..meri haalat kharab ho rahi hai. :|

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Parisian

@Parisian

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Hi again !

Apparently, i can't edit my previous post for an unknown reason.

This chapter was incredibly sad.

So somehow i was right, Lexie found solace in drugs, she was a girl who didn't like rules, who wanted to enjoy in her own terms. And drugs helped her to do that.

Arnav, what i can said about him...what he has been through in his college days was terrible,
he watched the love of his life destroying herself and couldn't do nothing about it, as Lexie didn't want to be saved, she wanted to live in that "illusionary world".

Khushi is a such understanding pure soul, i hope she will be able to mend his broken heart.

I know by experience that it's going to be difficult from her as Arnav might close himself more after the death of Lexie. He might be unreachable at all.

I can't wait for the next chapter !, can you please send me a pm when the next update happens ?

Apologies for the grammatical mistakes.

Edited by Parisian - 11 years ago

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Nisha

@NishaAP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Awesome update. After reading this update I felt kind of elated. Until now I was feeling that Arnav left his true for his family and let his lover down. In that case I can not really be mad at him what he did to Khushi since he caused more hurt to Lexie.

Arnav never let Lexie down and he truely loved her. It is Lexie who is selfish and let Armav's love down. She always thought about her happiness and never ever thought about Arnav and his love. Because of her he suffered but she never care about that. She really does not deserve his love. She became addicted to drugs since she had problems? What kind of problems? She had a opportunity to study whatever she wanted in reputeted college and a man who loves her like anything and gives her support. What else she need?

I am really mad at Arnav. Not only he is carrying his unreasonable guilt and bacause of his past he let Khushi down for a selfish soul. He gave lot of value to Lexie who does not deserve but never gave a thought the pain he is causing to Khushi. He did not even remember her until Lexie brought it up. Is it that easy to forgot his wife who gave him some peace and love? Lexie does not deserve Arnav's love just like that Arnav does not deserve Khushi's love.

I do not know how I need to feel about khushi's decision to support Arnav and how he will deserve her love but I have faith in you Swetha. So I will wait.

A BIG DOUBT: Arnav never felt jealous when Lexie was sleeping around. May be fear of loosing her killed that jealous. But Arnav used to feel so jealous and possesive about Khushi whenever NK was near her. Normally we feel jealous about the people who we really love..

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

"She was waiting eagerly for Arnav now"

Stupid or what? I am soo.. I want to hit her or something. :/

Sorry m not the most understanding person around to talk like 'I understand this' 'I understand that'.. To an extent bas. Not for this. I guess Il be back later after cooling down.

but beyond fabulous, excellent chapter Shweta.