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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Kishmish ji, that was me, giving my toota hua dil some jhoota dilasa... Doobte ko tinke ka sahara and all that... 😆

I always like to see the glass half full rather than half empty, try to look for the silver lining in the dark clouds looming overhead... :))

No idea, whether I am remotely correct or not, but for the moment that's what I would like to think...😉

Especially with Shweta saying, "no idea when the next chapter is coming"... 😭


All I can say is that Shweta has brilliantly opened a floodgate of emotion in her readers 😭 ...
and what !? we have to wait for another week to know what next !
Nahi Shweta ... please aisa zulm mat karo ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Anamika ji, in my case that is not nautanki, but the actual truth... 😆

There is a burning in my heart right now, & need the next update badly ... 😒

I second and third that. Here I was thinking how am I going to wait till the next update and Shweta pulls the plug saying she doesn't know when the next update is!Ouch What are we to do now???/
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vks11

I second and third that. Here I was thinking how am I going to wait till the next update and Shweta pulls the plug saying she doesn't know when the next update is! What are we to do now???/



we will look for the potions how arnav will remember kushi while talking to lexie😃😃😃😃😃😃 so that will get some sukhone😃😃😃😃😃...


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Posted: 11 years ago
i have so many questions running on my mind now????

1.is Akash really changed????

2. to get arnav ...plan made by Shyam...

3. lexie got to know about arnav,s marriage, thats why she did something to end her life...iam too filmy...mera serial demag is working too much i guess..

4.after knowing arnvs past kushi will stay in the haveli or leave?????

5. where kushi will go???to her parents place or some where...

6. last question is kushi expecting😛😛😛😛😛????

please some body answer my questions????


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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Author,

I'm a new reader and I was directed here by shree10. I have to say that this story has completely captured my attention. I love the way you have treated Arnav's character. In a story that is loosely based on some show, it is difficult to etch out characters of your own and even more difficult to remain consistent with them throughout the run of the story. But you have done exactly that with most of the characters here. Arnav is a complicated man with a strong sense of loyalty. Otherwise, he would not have left his love and life in UK to come back to India to help his family when they needed him most. But has he forgiven himself for that? I guess not...and that is why he has locked his heart away, refusing to even entertain the notion that he might feel that emotion for anyone else. I wonder why Lexie did not come with him? But it seems to me that she might have been addicted to mind-altering drugs. Maybe that is why Arnav is so against the idea of any kind of addiction. He abhors it with a passion that only comes when you lose a very dear one to it.

Arnav is a man who is controlled by his brain. He calculates, deliberates and then decides. He married for his political career and it is evident throughout that this career means a lot to him. But it is not as important as Lexie I guess, or else he would not have gone away in such haste. It was as if he did not have any other option but to go. Here is a man who is completely ruled by his heart. So yes, Lexie does mean a LOT to him.

Khushi is young and idealistic. But I don't think she is like Lexie. Arnav care for Khushi and he is completely besotted with her, but I'm not sure if he is in love with her yet. A man like Arnav would not throw around the 'love' word casually. Although he is appears all charming and sexy, he is quite deep. So I would wait and watch. Was it wrong of him to leave so suddenly? Probably, at least he should have told Khushi where he was headed to and why. Khushi deserved that. But after receiving that phone call, Arnav was like a demented man and it is not surprising that he did not have the patience or the foresight to clear things with Khushi. He does have a tunnel vision and at that instant, Khushi did not feature there.

But the story is in an exciting juncture with numerous possibilities. I'm curious to see what happens next. Please update soon.

-N
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShwetapS


NOTE 2 : (I have started sounding like a certain cellphone company launching latest versions of their phones).

I logged in to read the comments and I see there is more agitation and speculation than the previous chapter. And since I don't know when the next chapter will be updated, I thought of dropping a line regarding the ending.

I see there is some confusion regarding the last para - like you have noticed in several previous chapters that I sometimes end with lines that would lead you in to the next chapter ( you can call it an heads up of sorts about what's to follow.)

So like Anupama ( the wonderful writer that she herself is) pointed out that the meaning will reveal itself in the next chapter. And I am hoping that this unrest will somewhat settle by the end of the next chapter.

I know there are many who are not liking/ abusing Arnav right now ( plz don't hate him. Apna hero hain ;)) but I hope like Khushi is hearing his story out, you would do too, then maybe you can take a call whether to hate him or like him.


All I can say to this is -
'Maine itni koshish ki, ki main Arnav se nafrat kar saku, par mein kar hi nahi payi, mera khud ka dil hi meri baat nahi maanta'
So Shweta, in you we trust...hamara bharosa mat todna!



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Posted: 11 years ago
No doubt, I feel very bad for Khushi and what she is going through. Not only did her husband, the man she loves deeply, leave her in such a brutal matter, but she has to hear such cruel taunts from her mother in-law and now the history of her husband with the one woman he loved. I know that this all must hurt her deeply - I wish she didn't have to be so stoic all the time and put on that brave face all the time.

There had been clues about Arnav's past from the very beginning. He was a free spirit, who wasn't into conforming with proper societal rules, so his artist lifestyle makes sense. Also the number of women he passed through, the drugs and alcohol were not surprising - you have hinted at all of it all along. Whatever he did, it was in the past, and he was not bound by any marriage or commitment at that time, so honestly I don't feel upset with him, though I'm glad that Aman had the decency to not share all of Arnav's past deeds with Khushi and Anjali as I'm sure that is not what they need to hear at the moment.

Now back to Arnav, his past with Lexie is interesting. I'm wondering if the love he believes he had with Lexie was just a figment of his imagination. She seems like she had the perfect joie de vivre, but maybe she was just overcompensating for being abandoned by her parents, and she used drugs, alcohol and Arnav as a form of escape and maybe she was not in love with Arnav as he was with her, or maybe she was just an infatuation for him and not someone he truly loved. Even if they did share true love, there is obviously a reason why they had to be separated and I'm looking forward to finding out how it all happened.

Arnav's past really can't be held against him when it comes to his marriage with Khushi. Honestly, most people have some kind of a past, and just because Arnav's is more colorful than most doesn't mean that he's not committed to his marriage (even though the marriage started with all the wrong reasons). However, if Arnav continues to hurt Khushi (I'm willing to give him a pass for how he left Khushi in such a heartless manner because he was probably in shock at that time) and rejects his wife because of his former flame, then I will have reason to worry for both Arnav and Khushi, and their relationship in general. Until we find out what Arnav is really doing in London and how he will be with his wife when he returns, I don't want to start prosecuting him yet.

I see a lot of comments showing a lot of anger towards Arnav (and rightfully so!) and pessimism over what's going to happen with Arnav and Khushi, but I'm honestly feeling really hopeful right now. Although Arnav and Khushi are going through a rough patch right now, I really feel like the end results will be great! I feel like until he has not cleared his mind of this relationship with Lexie and the guilt that he apparently seems to have related to leaving her, he will never be able to move forward in his relationship with Khushi - and now is the perfect opportunity for him to realize that he had a past, he needs to leave it in the past, and he has a wife, family, political responsibilities and it's time for him to move forward with these new realities.

Maybe I'm just being overtly optimistic, but that's just what I'm feeling!! I know the ride might still be bumpy for a while, but I'm willing to go on this journey as Arnav and Khushi get their hamesha wala ending (lol can you tell, I am the eternal optimist😆)

Sorry for the very jumbled comment; a lot goes through my mind after I read this story and I am not always able to express my thoughts coherently.

Can't wait for the next chapter; hope to read it soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
To alleviate the restlessness of my mind, I had to go back to the chapter where Arnav and Khushi discuss the terms and conditions to take their relationship forward and I must say, it was a good refresher. The man did not over promise anything but Khushi may have been too hopeful or ambitious...or may be not..may be her heart knew what they could have.
Arnav did promise her respect and honor but not love but in the way her left...did the respect and honor take a backseat to the pull of his past?

Arnav understood the underlying meaning of her question, and was impressed with her, for even staging the query. He sighed and attempted to answer the question, wanting to verbally bring the shutters down, on their enigmatic chemistry. "Khushi, I have respected you from the moment I first met you. The way you stood up to me, is still fresh in my memory ... I respect you for the way you've handled your loss with dignity. I admire you for your innate nature to help others, your stupendous work at the NGO. I appreciate you for taking in your stride all that was propelled your way due our circumstances, the way you have adapted to your new life. and I am grateful that you joined in the campaign to support me, I still am wondering why you did that, but nonetheless,I truly appreciate it. You are one of the nicest person I have met. Unique and pure."

The music continued to play in the background, but the two were now completely attuned to eachother, " Khushi, if we attempt to have a normal marriage; then I can provide you everything that you deserve, the respect and honour, the luxuries, freedom and protection to the best of my ability. But the one thing I cannot promise and you should never expect from me is Love. I can never give you that and you should never attempt to ask, why? I know, I am asking you to give up a lot. And hence I have been keeping my distance. Despite my attraction."

Khushi stared into his eyes, seeing the sincerity, her heart lurched, she knew she was in love with this enigmatic man. He did nothing as per convention. He thought he was breaking her heart, but in fact she was falling deeply in love with him at this very moment. She braced herself, if both of them had come so far, despite the many adversities, then they could one day achieve the unexpected. If today he was sitting here, confessing his attraction, his feelings - though not love, for her, then one day he will come around and confess his love for her too. She will stand besides him every day, and make him realise that he infact will love her one day.
Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update Shweta. ..👏
After reading and re-reading the whole part, I was speechless. Arnav being an artist and as you have described had an eccentric way of living life. And I felt that Alexis was a free spirited person with extremely positive and caring attitude. I am not sure what had happened with both Arnav and Alexis but I was just shocked that the moment his past knocked the door and he forgot about khushi completely. He never gave her false promise of love but in his state of mind he has put her in misery without any fault of hers...I just felt bad for her because at this young age she is going through so much and she has put all her hopes in Arnav and this relationship but it's not doing anything better at this point.
Already waiting for the next part. .
Edited by arshisimple - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
🥺🥺🥺

Hope you won't give any sad ending..


Atleast can we expect happy ending ...

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