Arshi OS :: Humdard Last Part up, PG 13, 09June, *COMPLETE* - Page 6

Originally posted by: shruti46

ahem ahem finally madam is here...

1.5 hour late

UNRES

Finally my spo has became a writer .

o. s on such a beautiful topic, i always wonder how people get idea of writng something while listening any songs.

and pooja my dear friend you have done really gud job..

about JI ...it looked cute first ,then in middle it became irrtating then in last line it looked most beautiful line in world.

u choose a sensitive topic and dealt it very well.

tu itni serious kab se ho gyi?? zarur xams ka asar hoga..

but i thought arnav's confession was little early, but i was happy with khushi thoughts , she loves him or not she didnt knew but she also needs him .

arnav thoguht she is more dangeruous than drugs and alcohol , coz she was his medicine..

P.S- about 2nd part...hmm tujhe toh pata hi h kya sochti hoon main!!!

dubara likhna parega kya?😈

Originally posted by: sphobic

@bold ..jab tune bola tha ki kuch acha nahi lagega toh seedhe boldungi...mujhe laga tha tu aise hi bol rahi hai...par tu toh serious thi😆

waise i also felt the same...i think khushi convo with arnav was cute but with khusboo was little irritating and also the lunch convo was little irritating

Originally posted by: shruti46

ha toh main seroius hi hoon.

acha nai lagega toh bolungi hi..

jab kuch jyada hi acha nai lagega tab pm karungi.

but remaining o.s toh boht acha tha so it doesn't matter...

tu toh 2 nd part p con kar ab , jaldi se😆

Originally posted by: sphobic

Lets wait for another song to inspire me😉

Originally posted by: shruti46

u are already inspired ..

simple sa happy ever after toh likhna hai😵

Originally posted by: sphobic

aacha tell me.. Once upon a time ka next chap ya iska next part??

then I will work accordingly

Originally posted by: shruti46

DONO😈

Originally posted by: sphobic

I dont have parallel processing functionality ...😆