Arshi Story : Once Upon A Time..... chapter 3 up, PG 19, 16th June

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Great job pooja.

Keep it up.👏

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

interesting start...arnav and koo koo hope her name is kushi😉 are already married...wondering what their age...looking forward to the next part..

please continue soon...

cheers..

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@Anony_mous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Lovely start and an interesting concept Pooja. Brimming with possibilities.Your writing style is quite descriptive and refined too. Intrigues the reader.

Kudos and wish you the very best in your writing endeavor :)

PS: What year is this story set in? Is it contemporary or a period piece?

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

here she is gayab again!!!

gotta be responsible girl...u r a writer now🤪

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

how old is khushi
arnav is college going but khushi is real young right
child bride
when did they marry
why did they marry
she is a freaking child right
oh teri
well this should be good
wait is this in modern times
as in 21st century
well nice to know
sorry i just ask questions after questions
am question bank
sure has me intrigued
he only cam here as his amma asked him to
he listens to her amma
fascinated by his child bride is he
she didnt know how to behave in front of her hubby
lets see how this progresses

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

beautiful start

awesome one

loved it

plz pm me for your updates

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

quite interesting...
i would love to read more...
update soon...

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Just came across this one...
Reminded me of balika vadhu a lil bit...
But i loved the concept... Something new to read...
Plz do pm me when u update nxt